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Published: 2004-07-05 00:21:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 145; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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the grim reaper visited me today,told me it was the end,
reached for my heart,
and found my chest was hollow,
i laughed as black acid leaked from my pores,
it brought a tear to fates soft face,
and made the un-born scream,
it made my stomach twist and turn,
it brought all breathing to their knees,
i held my hands to the sky as i smirked with hate,
i know the truth,
i know their weakness,
and i know the reasons,
the forever dead never start living
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Comments: 31
i love the first four lines and the last line.
but the whole poem is beautiful!
i would go through your whole gallery, read every poem and comment on them, but i have a project to do. lol
great stuff. dont stop writing
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thank you, i won't
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no better word to describe it but "awesome."
i really liked the feeling in this
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wow..thank you so much!..
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no problem. You are quite gifted
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thank you so much
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That's so awesome. 
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thank you so much...
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love the images, love what the poem seems to say, everything. as always, beautiful job here.
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thank you so much..seriously you make my day with your flattery
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welcome much, and i'm glad.
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