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Published: 2004-05-03 23:29:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 102; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 26
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i hold no shameas i hid your body
painted my walls with you blood
i watched you struggle
i watched you crawl
i hold no shame at all
i watched you burn
i saw you bleed
i witnessed your screams
and i watched your brilliant mind crumble
watched your hunger grow
found joy in your pain through life
and i hold no shame at all
i committed murder
i made you deceased
you CAN kill what you did not create
and i hold no shame
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Comments: 37
Vimpressofdoom [2004-05-20 19:09:20 +0000 UTC]
I kind of made a weird face after reading this, but beside that I thought the word choice was not very original, but I really like the emotions and feelings in this poem!
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Vimpressofdoom [2004-05-22 19:07:24 +0000 UTC]
o well thanks for reading it anyway...
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Vimpressofdoom In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-05-25 11:14:53 +0000 UTC]
no, no, I really like it!
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Vimpressofdoom [2004-05-26 21:02:16 +0000 UTC]
lol what?...sry short term memory..
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Vimpressofdoom [2004-05-27 17:16:42 +0000 UTC]
haha nevermind..it's not important...
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Disillusioned-One [2004-05-04 02:22:47 +0000 UTC]
that is so awesome. i love the whole idea behind it...
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Disillusioned-One [2004-05-10 23:52:21 +0000 UTC]
still poking me?...lol ........
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Disillusioned-One [2004-05-11 21:13:48 +0000 UTC]
STOP IT! LMAO..... ...
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Disillusioned-One [2004-05-12 14:03:19 +0000 UTC]
this could go on forever so i'll send you the acoustic version of gng if you stop poking me....please stop the poking
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Disillusioned-One In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-05-13 02:21:06 +0000 UTC]
i found it... and the poking ceases
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Disillusioned-One [2004-05-13 21:12:06 +0000 UTC]
FINALLY.....*do the happy dance*
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Disillusioned-One [2004-05-18 22:52:26 +0000 UTC]
lmao.... ...
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Disillusioned-One [2004-05-23 15:39:20 +0000 UTC]
^^ :stabwithafork:
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to SuperHyde [2004-05-04 00:33:30 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much..your flattery is greatly appriciated
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