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Published: 2004-07-18 18:46:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 79; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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Description your soft whispers of goodbye echo in my ears as i scratch your throat away,
i will honor your innocence as i stick screws through your brain,
i will hold you as all you loved slips from you like a nightmare your trying so desperately to forget,
i will weep as i pull you to pieces,
choke on the blood of your trembling flesh as i take everything from you
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Comments: 16

muddytool [2004-07-18 22:05:03 +0000 UTC]

YES! this makes me think of vampires fucking!

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to muddytool [2004-07-18 23:44:48 +0000 UTC]

my friend you have a very interesting mind..but i like it!

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muddytool In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-07-19 21:24:55 +0000 UTC]

I try my best!

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to muddytool [2004-07-19 21:26:39 +0000 UTC]

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cheesy [2004-07-18 20:55:01 +0000 UTC]

I like your short poems. Putting screws in your head sounds painful.

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to cheesy [2004-07-18 20:59:53 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks

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IDieInMyDayDreams [2004-07-18 20:15:57 +0000 UTC]

Woah, thats vicious, yet there's something really charming about it...heh great job. Youre really good at poetry.

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to IDieInMyDayDreams [2004-07-18 20:57:22 +0000 UTC]

thanks compliments always make me feel warm and fuzzy inside..for about 1/2 a second then it all turns cold again..but i appriciate you flattering me..

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IDieInMyDayDreams In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-07-18 23:43:28 +0000 UTC]

Youre welcome

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subliminal-torture [2004-07-18 19:19:46 +0000 UTC]

you're very good at short poems!! its very good, short but sweet....well violent but meh, i can imagine it should i be worried about that?!

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to subliminal-torture [2004-07-18 19:41:02 +0000 UTC]

no you shouldn't and thanks for the compliment..

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subliminal-torture In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-07-21 11:30:41 +0000 UTC]

hehe you're welcome

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bleedingice [2004-07-18 18:50:25 +0000 UTC]

wow. that's violent but very cool. I like the graphic nature of it

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to bleedingice [2004-07-18 18:54:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you...tis supposed to be..

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bleedingice In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-07-18 18:56:25 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome ^_^

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to bleedingice [2004-07-18 19:08:14 +0000 UTC]

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