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Published: 2005-07-23 18:56:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 63; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description the rain beats against my window,
on this cold and gloomy night,
the sky is full of stars and shapes,
that help me drift away from this "cookie cutter" world,
the one i long to escape,
filled with drug dealers and toxic waste,
nuclear bombs and the occasional fake smiling face,
in the stars is a world of my own,
without hatred or judgement,
where children aren't influenced by society or their peers,
a world without rapists or serial killers,
where no one you love dies,
this is the world i escape to when the chaos kicks into overdrive.
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Comments: 4

medusa11 [2005-07-25 22:48:28 +0000 UTC]

i really like this one, nice work

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to medusa11 [2005-07-29 14:36:28 +0000 UTC]

thank you again

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duckie2318 [2005-07-23 21:46:47 +0000 UTC]

I love how ur poetry describes alot in such few lines. This is awesome. I am glad I am one of ur watchers cos I would miss out on some great poetry

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to duckie2318 [2005-07-23 22:53:45 +0000 UTC]

-hug- thank you dear.

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