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Published: 2004-09-09 00:40:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 141; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description drifting through the masses of my high school,
fighting just to get one foot in front of the other,
ignoring the whispers of past, present and future enemies,
they push, they shove, they spit, and they mock me,
turning to the small group of people that consider me a friend,
only because they look past the superficial state my peers seem to be stuck in,
jocks, cheerleaders and even the loners try to mess with my status,
i'm already at the end of the line, as low as you can get,
and still they try to bring me down,
the rash, it spreads.
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Comments: 11

AllApologies423 [2004-12-17 22:01:30 +0000 UTC]

this is an awesome poem! the life of a high schooler...damn it sucks...great job! i know how that is...its funny sometimes i'll ask people what category i'm considered but i'm nothing...not prep not goth not sporty not punk not ghetto not redneck not slob not rich bitch...i am my own category and i love it! you have an awesome account!! i am definently putting u on my stalk list!

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to AllApologies423 [2004-12-17 23:25:02 +0000 UTC]

wow, i'm flattered. thanks you so much, i often find myself in the same position you are in. i wrote this after analyzing a day of my life. thank you again and i'll be sure to check out your account as well.

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AllApologies423 In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-12-18 03:37:42 +0000 UTC]

thanks!!

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to AllApologies423 [2004-12-18 15:30:19 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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medusa11 [2004-09-09 15:31:06 +0000 UTC]

nice work as always i love that last line

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to medusa11 [2004-09-09 21:20:29 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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IDieInMyDayDreams [2004-09-09 01:25:15 +0000 UTC]

Highschool is SO much fun! I love superficial bastards! Yes indeed!

*this poem describes me very well. Can you read my thoughts?* lol

Very nice job

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to IDieInMyDayDreams [2004-09-09 01:46:04 +0000 UTC]

lol, yes, i know you're every thought..o.0 be afraid..be very afraid 0.o

'this poem describes me very well' ...then we have something in common.

thanks

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jlconnell [2004-09-09 00:45:20 +0000 UTC]

i love it........sounds like my high school, only the people that i associate with consider themselves some sort of class of people too........where as i am the loner............the loner with the car, the all popular chaffuer.......... but great poem anyways.........very good........

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to jlconnell [2004-09-09 01:15:52 +0000 UTC]

*nod* same here lol 'the loner with the car', thank you for your compliment....

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jlconnell In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-09-09 01:26:51 +0000 UTC]

ur very welcome........

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