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Published: 2004-04-09 19:04:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 53; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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my heart is bleedinggo on stick more pins in it
my tears are falling
go on just watch them fall
my skin is splitting
just stare at the blood as it falls again
can you not see these scares of emotional stress i so willingly show you?
do you so blindly just watch in disgust?
you won't change anything by walking away
turning away
you see the scares
but do you feel the pain?
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Comments: 7
thats so awesome. i really really like it. yup. the words are so vivid, it just envokes a sense of emotion that its hard to reach with words alone. you did a really good job with it.
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wow..umm thanks...i'm glad you think it's so awesome..i thought it was kinda crap but thanks for the comment..
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thank you...i thought it was kind of crap...but thanks...
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well i like it, there 4 its not crap :-P!
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thanks...i just edited my poems so they should be just dandy now...thanks for pointing out my mistakes on them...i would have never noticed...i'm so stupid..thanks though
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