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daveyrocsmysocs — too much thought
Published: 2004-04-29 00:17:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 60; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description left in the dark
lost in self hate
brought into the light
denied by all life
covered in scars
emotions are weak
phsycological torture
i thrive on this mutilation
mis-shapen heart
pieces of a puzzle un-finished
there's nothing left
and these thoughts consume me
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Comments: 11

Viika [2004-05-27 19:26:04 +0000 UTC]

read some of your poems and i think this is one of the best.
It's very touching and disturbing, sad and also somehow happy at the same time (don't ask why, i'm a weirdo)

great poem, gotta go read more

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Viika [2004-05-27 20:57:59 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much...i'm so glad you like it...

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MagicalDeviantJew64 [2004-04-30 21:46:03 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful. It's short, but it draws me toward it.

Oh, the adoration....

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to MagicalDeviantJew64 [2004-04-30 21:51:54 +0000 UTC]

wow..thanks..i know most of my poems are short..sry..but still glad you liked it..

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Disillusioned-One [2004-04-29 00:28:57 +0000 UTC]

"i thrive on this excoriation
i wanted this self-mutilation"
Now the World-AFI

your poem reminded me of that song.

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Disillusioned-One [2004-04-29 00:30:36 +0000 UTC]

lol..i guess i'll take that as a compliment...thanks

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Disillusioned-One In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-04-29 00:33:47 +0000 UTC]

its a very high compliment... in my world, at least.

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Disillusioned-One [2004-04-29 00:40:45 +0000 UTC]

yay*do the happy dance*

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Disillusioned-One In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-04-29 00:44:18 +0000 UTC]

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Disillusioned-One [2004-04-29 00:52:48 +0000 UTC]

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Disillusioned-One In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-04-29 01:57:15 +0000 UTC]

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