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Published: 2004-05-12 21:00:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 107; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 15
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in the dimmest of lightgrowing slowly
as the moonlight rushes through my weathered state
all clarity drains
my scars keep calling
the dark keeps following
and these shades of grey won't seem to fade
moths surround my heart
my sanity stands behind my eyes
my knowledge ignores my scorn
as the moonlight rushes through my weathered state
i remain growing slowly
in the dimmest of light
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Comments: 24
duckie2318 [2005-07-02 07:57:20 +0000 UTC]
short but simply amazing as hell.... ur so talented. keep it i love ur stuff...stunning
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to duckie2318 [2005-07-03 19:46:18 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much -hug-
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Viika [2004-05-27 20:59:49 +0000 UTC]
well my bro has a lamp that just gives off a faint glow(the one in the pic) and i took a picture of it in the dark..and the flash made it look like that...pretty cool huh?...o and thank you again
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Disillusioned-One [2004-05-13 02:26:45 +0000 UTC]
that rocks. i like it... i could just hear... davey or someone singing it... that'd be so awesome.
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Vimpressofdoom [2004-05-12 23:57:09 +0000 UTC]
w00t, this absolutely rocks, I love it. I especially like the line, "my sanity stands behind my eyes."
powerful!
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Vimpressofdoom [2004-05-13 02:02:53 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much!....i'm so happy you like it..it's always flattering to recieve a compliment from a great poet such as yourself...
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Vimpressofdoom In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-05-13 11:16:06 +0000 UTC]
w00t! *am great poet* that's so cool!
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