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Published: 2004-05-23 16:57:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 99; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 10
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my words un-whispered still cloud my mind,how i should have handled it, how i should have spoken my mind,
i let you go , i let you leave,
now i pay the price,
i only have your memories,
i know you were longing,
to hear those words come to life,
dance upon my breathe,
i know it hurt you,
and shattered me,
now my words un-whispered continue to cloud my mind
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Comments: 12
tourniquetshadow [2004-07-06 17:48:13 +0000 UTC]
"Words un-whispered" <---I like how that seems to be open for interpretation before and after reading the poem.
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tourniquetshadow In reply to tourniquetshadow [2004-07-06 17:53:22 +0000 UTC]
[link] <---Do you know who the chick is?
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Disillusioned-One [2004-05-23 23:23:22 +0000 UTC]
great images. i'm liking the "cloud" imagery. its really vivid and pretty.
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Disillusioned-One [2004-05-24 02:45:19 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much...
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kill-me [2004-05-23 17:01:21 +0000 UTC]
IM luvin the CLOUDIN gr8 poetry and the pic really dus bring out the thoughts!
have fun even tho i dont know u lol
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to kill-me [2004-05-23 17:04:02 +0000 UTC]
lol, thanks...i'm glad someone like this one...and the preview image is yet again joey jordison(i love him so much)...*squealing with joy*...yea so thanks...
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kill-me In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-05-23 17:15:27 +0000 UTC]
Lol its kool
I cant find a scanner so i cant get pics on and my comp wont let me submit its evil as pie in wine!
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to kill-me [2004-05-23 17:18:40 +0000 UTC]
lol, that kinda sucks....i'm sry....
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