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following slowly behind my wounded feet,you skip to the soft humming of my voice,
dancing to your own beat,
you make light of our sorrowed situation,
glide through the meadows of dandileons,
your palms raised,
so much to offer, so much to feel,
the softest spirit lived in you,
put your tiny fingers in mine we'll follow the moonlight,
trail close behind me for fear of lonely days,
your laughter echos in the mist of the damp december nights,
your smile shines through the darkest of our times,
i held you, singing the sweetest songs of my childhood,
charished memories of you stay locked deep within my heart.
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Comments: 22
daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Vimpressofdoom [2004-09-21 13:09:35 +0000 UTC]
WTF does that mean?
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Vimpressofdoom In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-09-22 23:58:23 +0000 UTC]
It means that it is beautiful.
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Vimpressofdoom In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-09-25 14:28:52 +0000 UTC]
welcome *giggles*
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MyDyingRose [2004-09-20 23:29:34 +0000 UTC]
hehe, this reminds me of a poem that Rachel once wrote... well, not the poem, but her mom's reaction to it. Her mom said, "i'm not sure whether i should be sick or happy."
It's a rather nice poem
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to MyDyingRose [2004-09-21 00:09:46 +0000 UTC]
lmao, yea..i mean when i was writing this i was thinking about who this poem was written about and i almost barfed but everyone has said it's sweet..i guess if they knew the situation they wouldn't think it was sweet..
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MyDyingRose In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-09-21 02:54:11 +0000 UTC]
now i'm curious... i sensed a little "bad blood", i guess you could say, while reading this. ooooh, what's it about?
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to MyDyingRose [2004-09-21 13:18:19 +0000 UTC]
lol, curious?..ok well my cousin David (the gorgeous one, lol) he had a little girl named Sara..it's about me and her, she only made it to her sixth birthday, so the only reflections i could make were of her as a child, i had to go with David to identify her body..just that experience alone screwed us both up somewhat..and that's why i said i don't know if i should barf or look at the bright side of things..David stopped doing all the shit he was into, and life is better now..me and him, we've been through hell and back together..i think no matter what it will always be that way, him there when i need him and me there when he needs me..ok sry rambling on again..
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MyDyingRose In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-09-22 23:00:11 +0000 UTC]
"it makes you feel really good, but sick"-- eddie izzard.
i think that sums it up... i'm sorry to hear about that. that's just very sad
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to MyDyingRose [2004-09-23 00:20:58 +0000 UTC]
it's fine..it doesn't bother me anymore but thanks
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Bushido69 [2004-09-20 23:14:51 +0000 UTC]
Lovely. Kinda makes ya feel warm inside doesn't it.
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Bushido69 [2004-09-21 00:07:42 +0000 UTC]
whatever it is to you is what it is...
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