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Dori-to — Random Comic #3 - It was under F (coloured)
Published: 2012-05-11 09:59:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 68331; Favourites: 731; Downloads: 972
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Sweet Celestia, It is done!!This took waaaay longer than it should have and even longer after I added the colours and shading. This was originally ment to be a simple sketch like my other random comics, but I just couldn't reproduce the same style, so it ended up like this. And I'm glad I did.
I immediately thought of a historybook when Twilight first stated that Cadence was 'the best foalsitter in the history of foalsitters'. And that idea formed the base for this comic.
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Twilight never says anything without checking the facts! U mad Rarity? Did you really think you were the best foalsitter?
Edit:
This comic just keeps bugging me! For some reason it was uploaded twice. Sorry to those who had their comments removed on the other upload. I also updated this one with some minor adjustements, so enjoy this derpfree version!
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Comments: 221
very smart and funny it must be the funniest ive ever seen how twi grabs the book so i give this five stars out of 5 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! amazing comic and alot of people will like this so i think that this should go in my foravourites and i really enjoyed this but i think i shouldnt write 100 words minimum it SHOULD be 1000 THERES SOI MANY!!!! really there are no words good enough but i think this is the best and others may say im over reacting but im not so please make more /)o.o/) must see more they are epic!!
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STOP HAVING A GO AT ME IT WAS MY FIRST CRITIQUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GEEEZ U ARE ALL JUST BULLIES OK AND I DID THIS WHEN I WAS NEW TO DEVIANART SO JUST SHUT YOUR MOUTHES OR I WILL SHUT THEM FOR YOU I HAVE ALREADY SAID STOP BEING MEAN TO ME SO I DONT SEE WHY YOU ARE STILL DOING IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This is not a critique. It should be a stupid comment
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get a life if u are just gonna be mean to me about it it is my first critique ok
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I'm not mean. I'm saying the truth.
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hey this is my first critiqye guys so stop bullying me over it and get a life
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Generally in a critique you should say exactly why it deserves the score it gets. I'll write a critique on your critique.
You hardly explained why you scored it how you did. A critique should let artist know exactly what they did write and also how they can improve. You were just fanboying. Furthermore there is never a use for that many exclamation points, especially in something moderately formal like a critique. You're spelling and lack of punctuation are also quite atrocious. Finally you said there should be a 1000 word minimum for writing a critique, yet you barely wrote 100. I said your "critique" was unfair because the people who go through the effort to make comics deserve much better than that.
Devious Rating ★✩
Vision ★
Originality ★★
Technique ★
Impact ★★★ (I have to admit it had enough impact for me to write this)
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This isn't a critique you know. It's more of an annoying comment. -_-
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Vision: The idea, simple, the exaction , spot on, taking something that would have been a throw away comic into something spectacular by adding details and your own style.
Originality: I've never seen anything remotely close to this and you had me guessing by adding rarity into the mix. " Is rarity going to bring up her foal sitter?" is what I was asking, the element of surpris. ( You haz it )
Technique: While some might complain about the "Stale" background I belive it's more about the characters and their interaction with each other. An interesting background doesn't make a comic, rarity's expression and smiling facehoof does!
Impact: The full force a three panel comic can conjure!
Final thoughts: Keep doing what you're doing because this is grade A work! I have like no negative criticism for this piece, a little more background?
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Thank you so much for taking the time to critique! And I'm so glad you're so positive about my work! This really keeps me motivated to do more comics. And some in-depth feedback is really usefull for my future work.
About the background, I tried to add a vector background, but it didn't look like it belonged there, and drawing one myself would have killed me after all that hard work. Instead I tried this Garfield/newspaper style, wich I think leaves it open for people to imagine where this takes place.
Anyway, thanks again for your time!
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Only twilight would be this prepared with books
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uhm, ok them twi x3
you must love to loom under "F"
(loom is a word, SHUT UP! xD)
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Erm, loom isn't a word.
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I really like the coloring! Especially the mane. It looks like its real hair.
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Thank you. I'm glad you like it!
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Pffft... what?! LOL!
Oh Twilight, you so random! 
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*Pulls out a book*
History of Eggheads... Oh this I gotta see... 1st page: Twilight Sparkle
AND MY FRIENDS STILL WON'T BELIEVE ME! XD
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Twilight is worse that egghead, she's an omlethead!
-- Reference from Full House xD
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So that omlet I ate for breakfast... Oh Celestia what did I do? XD
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Omh my god, you ate Twilight! Princess Celestia is going to send you to the moon for 3000 years!
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Shining Armor. Did you see the Season 2's finale?
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Ok
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nah it's ok
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Apology will only extend your departure of death sentence
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Trying to jokingly imply that his... Nunca cerebro. Never mind
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