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Do you love me?What do you feel when you're passing by me?
What do you see when you're looking at me?
What do you think of when you're talking to me?
What do you afraid of when you just touch me?
When you look into my eyes I can remember everything,
when I look at you I can see what I always wanted,
when you talk to me I hear it as it was a music,
when you touch me I can feel the hope you love me.
Come closer, look deeper,
talk sweeter, touch softer...
Put your arms around me,
whisper that you love me...
I'd like to know how you feel,
and learn that what you think of me.
I'd like to see into the future
to know if we will be together.
I want to know everything
you want me to know about you,
what you want to ask from me,
when you need me to hug you.
Tell me what you'd like to ask,
tell me why you afraid of that,
tell that too if you love me,
love will help you asking from me.
© Dragon-nip
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Comments: 16
TraulRathan [2006-12-02 12:58:03 +0000 UTC]
Bocsi a hosszú időért amiért nem írtam, nem nagyon volt kedvem hogy cuccokat nézegessek.
Tudom, hogy elkéstem a comentel de örülök hogy boldog vagy, és remélem ez így is marad.
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Dragon-nip In reply to TraulRathan [2006-12-04 08:09:23 +0000 UTC]
nem igy mered, marad! csak nem tok irni!
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Dragon-nip In reply to TraulRathan [2006-12-04 08:00:56 +0000 UTC]
de kedves vagy! nem haragudtam amiért nem postoltál, mindenkinek vannak olyan napjai amikor semmit sem fogad örömmel, nem is vártam tőled! de naggyon szépen köszönöm! (az ölelést is!)
<és mondjuk én is remélem hogy így mered!>
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doomit [2006-11-27 08:10:29 +0000 UTC]
I know someone that feels this for me. Its damn scary to think of, never happened before. This suits it exactly though.
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Dragon-nip In reply to doomit [2006-11-29 07:14:50 +0000 UTC]
and did you like the poem? be straigth please! you don't have to say YES if you don't feel like you want say it...
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Dragon-nip In reply to doomit [2006-12-01 09:29:03 +0000 UTC]
oh, happy to hear/see a positive opinion!
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Dragon-nip In reply to doomit [2006-11-29 07:14:01 +0000 UTC]
so you someone who loves you, or doesn't dare to ask things from you? what could be the cure of this problem? I asked my SweetLove to ask the 'great something' from me, he said that: he would...this was on monday-but he didn't ask...it's so bad for me 'cause I'm toooooo curious....
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doomit In reply to Dragon-nip [2006-11-30 03:32:03 +0000 UTC]
Yes indeed. The girl and me grow closer I suspect theres an inevitable force involved. And your poem solidified it completely. Well done.
I did like it. Quite beautiful
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Dragon-nip In reply to doomit [2006-12-01 09:26:56 +0000 UTC]
thank you! however I thought that it's only my gr8 problem...happy to get known someones got this problem too: seems like I'm not too silly in this love-thing...i thought i am....and what about you and her now? still friend? still a pair?
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doomit In reply to Dragon-nip [2006-12-02 07:17:41 +0000 UTC]
Yep we are. Everyone goes through this, It just took awhile for me.
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Dragon-nip In reply to doomit [2006-12-04 10:33:01 +0000 UTC]
answered, but not the question: you are a pair or frineds? we discussed my love-thingy on last thursday, my problem is now gone! so if you are a pair, than i wish the best in the future!
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doomit In reply to Dragon-nip [2006-12-05 07:10:17 +0000 UTC]
We are a pair and thanks. Heh, I'm twenty five and yet this is all so scary.
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doomit In reply to Dragon-nip [2006-12-05 10:51:19 +0000 UTC]
No the future is scary. And I dislike not knowing it.
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