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Winter is comingWinter is coming
I can feel deeply,
There is nothing
That could warm me
Winter is coming
Day by day faster -
No more pretending
It will be better
Winter has arrived
Makes me lighter somehow;
Ice surrounded my heart
No pain harms me from now
Winter has arrived
I can be his fellow
No turning back this time
He is whom I follow
Winter is gone
Took me with him
None saved me so far
Seems like no one will
Winter is gone
Twines me his wing
Once I needed love
Is forgotten thing
© Dragon-nip [October - 2006]
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Comments: 21
Dragon-nip In reply to virgules [2007-01-14 11:42:12 +0000 UTC]
oh, thankie verrry much anyway! sending all my purrs!!!
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Dragon-nip In reply to marieChan383 [2006-11-24 11:32:18 +0000 UTC]
oh, thankies!!! i love it because i love winter, and this poem hides my soul in it...
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marieChan383 In reply to Dragon-nip [2006-11-24 16:13:10 +0000 UTC]
N P!
wow!you are so emo lol!i m jealous ^^
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Dragon-nip In reply to marieChan383 [2006-11-27 08:35:13 +0000 UTC]
why are you jealous? (I took away from you something? maybe you like winter too :3)
and imagine that: this is a love-poem... [why do you hate your username? just wanted to hate something? ]
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marieChan383 In reply to Dragon-nip [2006-11-27 10:24:27 +0000 UTC]
i m jealous because i can't write!i m so bad in english!i have to study more XD You didn't take me anything xD
I love winter,indeed ^^ and love poems!
i don't like my username because i think it's really stupid.I guess one day,i will change account,my username would be "virgules" or "tacotica"
but with my luck it's already taken lol
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Dragon-nip In reply to marieChan383 [2006-11-29 07:32:18 +0000 UTC]
and sorry to ask a lot but I'm a really curious Cat...x3
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Dragon-nip In reply to marieChan383 [2006-11-29 07:31:44 +0000 UTC]
you makes me happy
i like the name Chan because of Jackie Chan!!!!
it's good if you have luck, but in what?
you mentioned you aren't the best in english...so what language do you speak? :3
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marieChan383 In reply to Dragon-nip [2006-11-29 15:31:20 +0000 UTC]
^^ don't worry,i m also Very curious!
i didn't take chan because of jacky chan,even if he rocks
But because in the mangas,girls are often called chan or san,so marie chan!(i m a mangas fan)
luck was iron to say it will be taken because i have no luck at [link] all.
i speack frensh and a little english and a very very little spanish ^^
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Dragon-nip In reply to marieChan383 [2006-12-01 09:08:14 +0000 UTC]
oh, I'd like to learn french! so you could tell me if I have any language-mistakes in my poem: désesperate love... and thankies for the watching!
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marieChan383 In reply to Dragon-nip [2006-12-01 17:42:39 +0000 UTC]
it s a cool language indeed ^^
even if a lot of peoples are having illusions about the romantique frenshy,we are sometimes very stupid and anoyings
Well,i don't think you made mistakes here But i m not a specialist
and how did you add this accent in your comment?Everytime i do it,there is a message <^¨,. Like it!
and np again! :3
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Dragon-nip In reply to marieChan383 [2006-12-04 10:46:27 +0000 UTC]
the accent? well-well...here in hungary we have stoopid letters, like é, á,...so it contains...but in french you have too é, non?
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marieChan383 In reply to marieChan383 [2006-11-29 15:32:08 +0000 UTC]
excuse the link,it's the automatic url fonction
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Dragon-nip In reply to marieChan383 [2006-11-29 07:29:42 +0000 UTC]
ok, you makes me happy...
I like the name Chan, because of Jackie Chan!!! it's good if you have luck, but in what?
you mentined that you are bad in english...so what language do you speak? sorry to asking lot...but I'm a curios Cat... x3
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TraulRathan [2006-11-06 14:06:34 +0000 UTC]
Me too x3 I love winter, no bugs and the whiteness makes it so wonderful. The poem is good.
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Dragon-nip In reply to TraulRathan [2006-11-07 07:02:54 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I see: you love it for the same reason as me loves it :3
Thank you!
(Ez volt az a vers, amelyik nekem is tetszett tőlem, a másik művem meg a Moonlit Cats. Te mennyire vagy elégedett a te műveiddel?)
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TraulRathan In reply to Dragon-nip [2006-11-07 14:29:02 +0000 UTC]
Nem vagyok mindegyikkel teljesen elégedett..és azt hiszem soha nem is leszek, túlságosan maximalista vagyok.
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Dragon-nip In reply to TraulRathan [2006-11-08 07:12:47 +0000 UTC]
Akárcsak én...de legalább elismerem, ha valami legalább fele annyira jól sikerült tőlem, mint amennyire elvártam magamtól.
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