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Published: 2007-01-29 13:54:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 114; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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oneThere is someone who I hate
Even more than every other,
The one who played me like game
Is now my enemy forever.
one who I wish to be underground,
one who I want to disappear now,
one who I trusted but I'm disappointed,
one who I thought we could be friends.
Now this one is the target of my vengeance
When we'll meet I'll take my revenge
I won't calm until that day
you won't escape: suffer in pain!
© Dragon-nip [29-01-2007]
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Comments: 24
Beautiful and full of venom that make me fear ever getting you angry. And yes I have had one who I had many fights with that I still have nightmares about
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Thank you!
Well...lucky me doezn't have any nightmarez.
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The poem is very good, you describe your hate very well!
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Your English is really great now. Only, the line that says : "one who I trusted but disappointed" sounds as though you disappointed them, instead of the other way around...
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Well...will it be better like this? ...but I disappointed?
And thanks for the help and the comment ;3
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I think it should be "one who I trusted, but was disappointed by"
If that 'by' ruins your rhyming, just remove it.
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O.o its sounds...strange for me: I am the disappointed because of that person...
Really? okay, let this be: but I'm disappointed ^^ thankie!
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Oo
(wow, an toher new word for me)
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Really thank you - again, as everything ^^
[And how is your blog? Did you manage to correct the things you didn't like the last time we spoke?]
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No time, unfortunately. ><
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ohh, I have such one person, who I hate very much - MY F***ING BOSS. Stupid bitch!!
*cough* sorry 
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It's okay 
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... Sounds rather like You are in rage... I can only say I'm supporting You... What the one had done?
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Will it be okay if I tell you in a private message? And thanks for the support!
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Thank you for your understanding!
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There is nothing to "thank you"... Human nature
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It's a pity only you can be so understanding...
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I don't think so... Many people CAN, problem is that they even DON'T WANT to try...
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