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Published: 2005-03-05 12:50:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 5939; Favourites: 163; Downloads: 108
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Description Fallen Angel

Deep within this soul,
A fallen angel appears,
She is tormented daily,
burned and hated by the truth of life,
and struggles under the pain of it all,

It screams in the darkness,
searching out for that something,
trying to keep its head out of the water,
but no-one is there to rescue her before she drowns,

The angel holds on for life itself,
never understanding why,
life is so precious,
when your'e wanting to die,

All because of the life she leads,
this fallen angel stirrs,
in its lonely heart,
it slowly withers and dies,

Deep within this soul a fallen angel wanders,
in and out of existance,

Alone.

Tired.

And cold.
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Comments: 19

Roowil [2017-04-16 03:00:59 +0000 UTC]

So touching...I cried

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triplt333 [2010-11-04 23:56:54 +0000 UTC]

beautiful,

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Themoonlover1 [2010-05-23 19:14:59 +0000 UTC]

i`m crying !!!

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CherryBlossomMoon [2010-01-09 06:31:06 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like me, ... lovely to read~

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Myredemption023 [2009-12-13 22:09:35 +0000 UTC]

Good job

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AfterDarkx [2009-12-12 15:36:17 +0000 UTC]

i like this it has lots of emotion lots of sadness its great!

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embodieddarkness [2009-05-11 20:28:08 +0000 UTC]

jebus....

i suck at not writing anything or checking on here...

thank you so much for your kind words, really appreciate it...

im posting something tonight, after a long stint of nothing...

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sailormoon87 [2008-10-23 16:10:53 +0000 UTC]

that's really fascinating!

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kohinski [2008-07-31 09:24:08 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, you have the talent to make simple words mean a great deal. I like it alot

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embodieddarkness [2008-07-14 20:22:00 +0000 UTC]

really shocked people are still reading this, damn i need some new material!!!

im working on some new stuff, its taking me quite a while.

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Magpie-Angel [2008-04-23 08:57:02 +0000 UTC]

i think i'm a fallen angel then my friend.

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Magpie-Angel In reply to Magpie-Angel [2008-06-17 09:07:14 +0000 UTC]

my friends say i'm an angel of judgment. here to judge not only people but myself too. lol

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Slashed-Icarus In reply to Magpie-Angel [2008-06-17 01:38:37 +0000 UTC]

Many books, psychitrians and persons including me, say Im an angel because I dont even know the people who are in trouble and im already there helping them

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316521 [2008-03-12 23:25:04 +0000 UTC]

pretty words :3

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fallen6606angel [2007-03-18 18:50:45 +0000 UTC]

Love this poem, its amazing

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ambivalentann21478 [2006-07-29 22:11:21 +0000 UTC]

Good Job and well written That is exactly how I fell

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embodieddarkness In reply to ambivalentann21478 [2006-08-10 18:00:28 +0000 UTC]

hey thanks for that, noone has commented on my poetry for yonks....i feel like no1 reallu understands it or has time to read it so thanks for your time

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ambivalentann21478 In reply to embodieddarkness [2006-08-11 00:55:04 +0000 UTC]

dear Lydia,
I am the one person who does understand it and it was my pleasure to read it ... NP.. you are a great writer keep up the good work..

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prince-suzaku [2005-03-06 01:48:48 +0000 UTC]

great job, this has a lot of emotion in it, i like that, and well written too, see ya

~suzaku

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