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ScarletFire — ~.Fallen Angel.~
Published: 2004-05-21 20:49:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 16119; Favourites: 330; Downloads: 2757
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Fallen AngelShe hides in the shadows, sheilding her face,
this child never laughs, this child never smiles.
Longing the warmth of a mother's embrace,
her body is broken from wandering miles.
Her face stained with tears, from nights when she cries,
she walks throgh the darkness, screaming their names.
Despite all the pain, her hope never dies,
she's searching to find the place whence she came.
They left her behind, did they even care?
She calls to the ones that watch from above.
She falls to the ground as her strength does wear,
all she ever wanted was to be loved.
As she takes her last breath, the light shines through,
because the devil was an angel too...
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Comments: 68
I like it, it reminds me of a poem I wrote. But, thats called "Monster"
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I love it
It kind of got me sentimental <3
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Omg. This is really good. This is so good, that I wish I would have created it. But it's yours so you deserve all the credit. Great job
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heyy congrats on getting it edited m proude of you i find this ironic though because the 1st poem i rote was wen i was reeding romieo and jeuliet my teech wanted us 2 rite sonets like shakespheer did do this is like a small quinkydink lol anyway who knows if u put this in more contests u mite b able to publish it more then once good luck
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i love reading
Romeo and Juliet
and this poem is really really really good
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beautiiful! and congrats on it being publishe! whats da name of da book?
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so beautiful and its ture. the devil was an angel to
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I love this poem, it stays very focuse and has a great rythem
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This is amazing!!! im glad it got published thats what this poem deserves.
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this is genuinly amazing! and well done on getting it published
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i love this............theres such a story to it
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Very, very beautiful!!
I was just wondering, in which book did this poem get published? (:
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This is amazing! No wonder it got published! Congrats!
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Congrats on it gettin published!!! Which book?
I really like this, love how it's written. I don't know if it is meant, but there's a U missing from the word through, just thought I'd mention it incase you missed it (=
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This was incredable it nearly started me crying! *faves*
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aww..
Thats just..
Thats just to love
It made me sad, an happy..
even if it was a sad story..
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oholyshit
what book did it get published in!?!?!
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Wow..This was really good..
Its exactly the kind of poem I would have wrote on 'Fallen Angel' if I could. [=
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awww so sad i hope she finds the warm place:tearful:
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that is so beautiful! it made me cry and not many things in life can do that to me... u have my admieration and im gonna fave this aswell! ^_^
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Congratulations on your publish.
You deserved it.
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Truly amazing. The pain and heartbreak you've conveyed really resonates long after you finish the poem. Your repetition also put this piece on a much higher class.
Well done.
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An amazing piece, the flow was magnificently constructed and the words were perfectly thought out. The emotion, the pain you convey is extraordinary. I love it.
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Congrat's on it being Published XD It truely does flow very well, great job!
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Very sincere congratulations on your publication. I cannot think of anyone who deserves it more than you. This is absolutely fantastic.
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This got published?!?!
That's great! And it was a lovey poem as well!
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Oh my gosh that's amazing! I loved it. it's sooo cool it got published. I can tell why!
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I know what you mean. When I was eleven we had to write 2 sonnets, 4 haikus, 1 narrative poem, and some others. It was a frickin' pain in the a**.
Nice poem, but it's really sad.
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