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A series of haikus describing Swiftpath's life.A young apprentice
Learning how to care for cats
That were hurt in war.
She grew to full strength,
Under guidance of Sunfur,
And the care of friends.
A rogue flame arrived
And lived alongside Frostclan,
Dooming our Swiftpath.
She fell for this cat,
They became mates with two kits,
Falling from honor.
The two kits grew fast,
But Swiftpath died far quicker,
The flame's last murder.
Evil corruption,
Bested our loving Swiftpath,
Vengeance cold as ice.
The flame that killed her,
Had to murder her once more,
to bring the peace back.
No more medicine,
Will Swiftpath use to help cats,
And no more Frostclan.
R.I.P Swiftpath, Medicine Cat of Frostclan
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Comments: 11
Exploding-Awesome In reply to GoGo-T-W [2011-11-20 05:15:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. Haikus are extremely fun to write. I don't know why I like them so much...
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GoGo-T-W In reply to Exploding-Awesome [2011-11-20 05:19:16 +0000 UTC]
They really are. I like haiku series as well. It gives a little more room to tell a story.
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Jaqueline-Keen In reply to Exploding-Awesome [2011-11-20 05:29:04 +0000 UTC]
Have I ever told you I hate Smolderstar, like allot? I love your other characters, but he just pisses me off.
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Exploding-Awesome In reply to Jaqueline-Keen [2011-11-20 05:58:10 +0000 UTC]
XD My other characters are awesome. Smolder is badass but he's... uh... yeah.
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Jaqueline-Keen In reply to Exploding-Awesome [2011-11-20 06:31:24 +0000 UTC]
Reckless stupid and a whiny bitch?
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