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Description Had this idea for a while now... Unfortunatly it didn't come out the way I wanted T___T

Anyway, If you can't tell, it's suppose to be my character slowly sinking underwater while wings suddenly burst.

It's bleh I know lol! Quite plain, and her head is too big. I had alot of trouble trying to make it look like she's underwater. *ran all over the house looking for referance lol!*

Originally inspired by a part song called "Revolution" from this Taiwanese band called "F.I.R." *XD Love their songs! The vocalist of the band has such a nice voice

Sketched&Inked on Open Canvas
Coloured on Photoshop
Background Photoshop & Open Canvas


Character (C)

EDIT: (her name is Trinity in case you dunno lol because some people have asked) And I want to mention that another reason why I don't like this picture is because there's nothing in it that strikes my attention T___T lol!...oh well... I'll just have to keep trying
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Comments: 437

MelinaWOLF [2005-01-08 18:56:46 +0000 UTC]

WOW wonderful job on the detail and effect put into this piece.

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chibipirate In reply to ??? [2005-01-08 18:55:15 +0000 UTC]

Ooooo you may not like it but I think you did a nice job. The colors and shading and effects of the water just look soooo nice. I especially like the way the wings look.

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jinsume In reply to ??? [2005-01-08 18:55:11 +0000 UTC]

im so jelious, your soooooo good!!!!

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hack13 [2005-01-08 18:54:45 +0000 UTC]

so awesome~ THe wings are beautiful!

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TokiKon [2005-01-08 18:52:19 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Purdy- love the colours!

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Neyrisa [2005-01-08 18:49:00 +0000 UTC]

Congratulation!! it's beautiful
i like the drawing ^^ it's very nice.

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the-perfect-drug [2005-01-08 18:44:52 +0000 UTC]

Great concept! the water looks so beautiful with the bubbles and rays of light!
I love her wings!

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Infernodragon [2005-01-08 18:42:59 +0000 UTC]

to begin with i knew that she was falling under the water...the wings i realized that was what they were when i read your comentary...it does look great and the head is not too big. you did a awesome job. dont criticize yourself so much.

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Tiffaffy [2005-01-08 18:26:53 +0000 UTC]

It looks beautiful! The wings look awesome :3 and the perspective! +fav!

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Sen-chan In reply to ??? [2005-01-08 18:23:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow!!! 0.0 this picture is amazing!!! It could easly fit right into an anime!!!

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invader-scythe In reply to ??? [2005-01-08 18:22:33 +0000 UTC]

Very cool. Reminds me of Kingdom Hearts.

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Jin-Dragon [2005-01-08 18:19:41 +0000 UTC]

COOL, gives off a great efect ^^

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Kahlie [2005-01-08 18:18:25 +0000 UTC]

thats so wonderful! I love it

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CrustyMuffin [2005-01-08 18:01:52 +0000 UTC]

I love it. It looks so real. The water is just simply amazing. You never fail to impress.

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Phire-Chan [2005-01-08 17:58:32 +0000 UTC]

Eeek! You like F.I.R!!!!! *squeals excitedly* XD
^______^
very cool pic though... despite whatever you say, it's very cool. I love the wings ^__^

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mewulu [2005-01-08 17:55:47 +0000 UTC]

Woah... the angle of the body looks hard to do... O.o But it's really pretty!! It's different from all your shiny drawing but it's really awesome! Great job!

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AngLSuzuka [2005-01-08 17:48:01 +0000 UTC]

WHOA! This looks sooooooo good TT-TT

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pichu4850 [2005-01-08 17:47:00 +0000 UTC]

Cool :0 I think the head is fine, only thing is the back is kinda bothering be. THis is beautiful ^0^

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obsidianzero [2005-01-08 17:39:08 +0000 UTC]

neat stuff....! ok, i feel the need to spam one of my pics now, of a semi-similar nature...

[link]

back when i did it, it was pretty popular, i guess.. though i was going for a bit more chaos in the plunge, and less grace...

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SookJin [2005-01-08 17:24:58 +0000 UTC]

It looks like you're floating back up to the service you could right a story off of that ^o^ It's wonderful and beautiful and elegant

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SquiD75 [2005-01-08 17:23:46 +0000 UTC]

The water makes it look like a stop time sorta thing or a slow-mo thing you'd see in an anime show with sad music and such. Very cool theme, it gives you something to go home with

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shuu-bunni [2005-01-08 17:17:33 +0000 UTC]

I really love the composition of this. It has such a wonderful, elegent and almost ethereal feel to it (especially with the outlines of angel wings ). Beautiful.

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chrisjericholover [2005-01-08 17:10:35 +0000 UTC]

i love the wings and the bubbles!!!!!

and i want her hair. -__-
very pretty!

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jackandjordan [2005-01-08 17:04:33 +0000 UTC]

THAT IS ABSOLUTLY LOVELY!

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silvercherriz [2005-01-08 16:55:44 +0000 UTC]

Prettie ^^

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nayuki-chan [2005-01-08 16:53:28 +0000 UTC]

actually~~ I think your colouring came out fine!! I could tell Trinity was underwater even before i read the description ;.. and the wings came out fine.. though the style you have the wings done in is more flat looking than everything else.. but I think it works pretty well as a contrast..
hmm.. onto the crits .. the torso is quite large actually.. as in it's width is alot wider than usual since I usually see you draw this character as pretty skinny/thin instead.. and the head is connected to the neck in the wrong place =3.. should be connected more to the cranium (??) if that is the right word for it.. that way it would keep the line of action to continue from the body through to the head.. but right now the line of action does not seem to flowing all the way through ...
hmm i should show you later when i am back in my other home where i have my tablet and can show you the explanations.. hmm only if you want me to.... ^o^;;

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sunny1221 In reply to ??? [2005-01-08 16:44:53 +0000 UTC]

i think that's pretty cool! The background is nice i love the colours. She looks like drowning into water! well that's what i think

and if you wnated to catch attention with this picture maybe you should have make her wear a necklace with a big ruby/saphir any precious stones that shine XD... I thinkn it would have been nice you know the necklace a bit under her as if the precious stone was pulling her down to the depth of the ocean.............. well maybe im just stupid ^^''

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mattdragontamer In reply to ??? [2005-01-08 16:32:50 +0000 UTC]

>.< why do you always say that... "Unfortunatly it didn't come out the way I wanted T___T "
anyways.. as usual... it look absolutly awsome! ^_^

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LinkLonewolf In reply to ??? [2005-01-08 16:20:09 +0000 UTC]

The head isn't as big, I think it's ok. The perspective is good, and the expression is very nice (and the colouring). I really like this one

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panda-doll In reply to ??? [2005-01-08 16:12:39 +0000 UTC]

very nice! I belive this the best I've seen from you in a while o_o great job! the wings are beautiful~

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audbod [2005-01-08 16:12:06 +0000 UTC]

pretty

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midknightgoddess [2005-01-08 16:01:10 +0000 UTC]

oooo pretty...lol

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QuantumSpectre [2005-01-08 16:01:06 +0000 UTC]

Regardless of fact that is didn't come out the way you wanted it, it'z still an excellent piece of artwok. Great job mon ami!!! Keep up the good work.

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Vegetya [2005-01-08 15:41:32 +0000 UTC]

I like it a lot, but I think that for a sinking effect you could try having more space around her, to emphasize she isn't just in a bathtub or something. But I dunno, I like it.

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edchan [2005-01-08 15:39:31 +0000 UTC]

Its stil vury purty ^_^ I lurve the CGGing

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Hayai-Akurei [2005-01-08 15:35:07 +0000 UTC]

Yes, keep trying!! We'll back you up!! We all need to keep trying, in some way or another.

I think it's pretty well composed, but that's just me. I'm not very well versed in CG arts quite yet. I'm working at it though!

Maybe you could have made drawn her whole body, smaller against a large BG of water that gets really dark towards the bottom, to make the whole drowning thing a bit more dramatic, if you wanted a peaceful drift to the bottom.

But I must say the wings are a nice touch. I heart the transluscent feathers.

Great job, and may your muses be with you always! You'll get it things to be the way you want eventually!

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rahn-lionheart [2005-01-08 15:31:13 +0000 UTC]

It looks very pretty.

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RsSanimefan [2005-01-08 15:03:43 +0000 UTC]

her head looks like way back n the pose looks slightly awkward. like the propotions or somethin... w/e way better than nythin i've done!

the wings are rlly pretty n it does look kool lookin!

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ace87x [2005-01-08 14:49:41 +0000 UTC]

whaa? I think it looks pretty good! It looks like a screen cap from an anime or something...just better quality ^__^; -if that makes any sense at all -

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AdvanceX [2005-01-08 14:43:24 +0000 UTC]

O___________O.... *________________________*

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Silverene [2005-01-08 14:41:40 +0000 UTC]

The only thing I like here is good and not overdetailed lighting:/...
Her mouth is FLAT and her backs seems to be too large:/. You should use photos as a reference!^^

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oceantann [2005-01-08 14:09:07 +0000 UTC]

WOW O_O I really adore all your works, but this is my fave XD <3

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eaglebird [2005-01-08 14:03:50 +0000 UTC]

wow i love the colors

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HybridProjectAlpha [2005-01-08 14:00:09 +0000 UTC]

Wings are sexxeh. Give her a beak and this pic would be hilarious.

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Aquatacordelia [2005-01-08 13:52:28 +0000 UTC]

Whoaaa.....it's pretty....I like the face. And I don't think the head is too big.

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SunSong [2005-01-08 13:47:49 +0000 UTC]

omg......T_T
You draw so beautiful things!
Her hair is so beautiful! ^^

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BendersCreator [2005-01-08 13:46:44 +0000 UTC]

that is so pretty! your work is so good!

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TheTonberryGurl [2005-01-08 13:40:28 +0000 UTC]

I like it.

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kazeni [2005-01-08 13:39:11 +0000 UTC]

This looks serene~ The whole scene that is. As soon as I looked at it, and even the title helped, I remember watching this Final Fantasy video, the person mixed the different series FMVs together, and the person used the song "Drowning" by BSB. Anyway, I remembered watching this scene from Final Fantasy 7...where Cloud layed Aerith's body in the middle of a lake(?). But it was a really sad, touching scene...So somehow, this pic reminded me of it a lot. This is really a wonderful job done~

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Kunishirou [2005-01-08 13:38:13 +0000 UTC]

not too expressive, I think you should give some effect on the hair so it looks like flowing on the water

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