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Published: 2004-06-29 19:54:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 84; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description I cannot write peoms about you for I have nothing to say.
You disregard my every word! This cannot be true when you seemed so into me.
Are we not like a seed?
Split apart while the earth was young.
You do not notice my empty glare that used to be filled with light.
It is empty you must hurry and find the light,
before I am worn away into a speck of sand among all the others
that have come across your loveless way.

~Shelly
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Comments: 4

Vonawes [2004-06-30 15:04:35 +0000 UTC]

I like it. I follow poems like yours alot better than most. But 1999 wasn't THAT far off. Not when you're an old coot like me.

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freeshell In reply to Vonawes [2004-07-01 01:03:42 +0000 UTC]

old coot haha, I feel old, my I am going to be one of those old women whos body is bad off my ill be full of wit. BUT that is still far away.. I enjoy being young .
Thanks again for reading my poetry :hug;

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freeshell In reply to freeshell [2004-07-01 02:54:09 +0000 UTC]

lol :LOL:

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Vonawes In reply to freeshell [2004-07-01 02:52:11 +0000 UTC]

Alzheimer's disease runs on my mom's side, so I'll be ying-yang to that. I sometimes think I'm losing my mind now.

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