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Published: 2010-12-25 16:06:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 716; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 20
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HA PAGE 1 XDcover[link]
first of all this is like the third time ive used this programe so dont blame me if the wolves look a bit funny
ya so ghoast and that other darkish wolf are in the first pannel (the darkish one doesnt have a name yet) they are brothers by the way
and in the last pannel is takishi my main character XD
incase you diddnt know why why they were saying takishi in the last pannel and yes i know takishi is saposed to have wings but he gets them later in the story
so tell me what you think
how could i improve?
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Looks great!
But since you asked on how you could improve, i will share my thoughts if you wish:
Let me start with the background: It changes to day, to sunset, to night. How about letting the sun almost leaving the sky(as in a sunset), and as the pannel goes to the next it slowly sinks (like in every pannel passing it sinks more) until its completely out (possibly the last pannel) and its night time. I think it would give a good 'halt' of the background, and a more focus on the characters.(also remember the little tip i gave you before: soften your backgrounds!Make them 'flow', and dont make them with distracting colors) Besides that, the trees and bushes and mountains are lovely made!
Secoundly, the characters: The overall-anatomy is really well thought, and most importantly well done.(i mostly love the way you do paws!!) The shading however, distracts me from the characters designs, confusing me of which character is who and such. If you use some type of photoshop, or whatever is the program you use, try experimenting with the brushes and look for shading tutorials. If you'd like, i will show you a way i currently use to shade.
Lastly, you did a wonderful work and i can tell you tried your best! Congrats at making such a lovely page, and cant wait to see more!!!
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thanx for that it was just what i was looking for 
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No problem! I know how you feel, people just dont give me helpful critiques either.
And sure thing! Tell you what, when you come online give me a note since i think today im going to stay online all day and such. Then i will livestream so you can see what i really do. xD
If you want heres a little video of one of my drawings i made that shows a bit one way i do the lightning and such if you want to later see:
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I have multiples ways to shade though.
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oh thanx for the vidieo it will be very helpfull sorry i diddnt see your message earlyer i will only be on DA for a few muniutes now ...i dont think the livestream will be necacery thanx any way XD your advice is most helpfull indeed it will probably take me a wile to master your awesome techneqes THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
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Your welcome, and i hope the video helped in the end. 
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yup it was a BIG help im trying lots of new techneqes 
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Glad it was!!
No problem and no, thank you for all the support you have been giving me.
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Is this the comic you've been working on? It's very good :3
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thanx XD yes it is the comic i was working on
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Not yet, I haven't been working on my comic lately
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sometimes i dont feel like doing my comic either XD
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