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Updated March 2021www.deviantart.com/pickled-jes… by Pickled-Jester-Inc
www.deviantart.com/julkusiowa/… by julkusiowa
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Thanks to everyone who left feedback on the original image.
Floral pattern by xe0s
Different pattern by Design-Maker
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Comments: 153
gppr In reply to ??? [2011-02-14 14:34:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for taking the time to write this critique, Resident-Angel.
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Lynneblue [2011-01-04 09:57:27 +0000 UTC]
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At heart, I'd like to mention that your artwork here is deceptively incredible. The technique you have decided upon is admirably fascinating. It is understandable to me that you put your soul into it with your abundant variation of skills. The tone of this creation is greatly correct for the mood that I contemplate you are striving to capture, but however, in saying that this statement is probably fruitless. On the other hand, I contemplate that your use of tools could of been improved upon as I think that it wasn't able to match the elegance seen in the remainder of the piece. Finally I would like to reassure you that it has been a thrill to write this critique for you and I think it will allow you to increase the power level of your astounding piece.
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gppr In reply to Lynneblue [2011-01-04 18:19:49 +0000 UTC]
I see you're putting `Cannibal-Cartoonist 's [link] to good use.
Thanks for this enlightening critique.
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Charlene-Art [2011-01-02 08:21:39 +0000 UTC]
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This is a very sensual scene. I like the poses and I like the use of reds as well as soft lighting for the intimate scene you have. I think the poses are quite suitable given the scene. I honestly don't see anything wrong with the anatomy of either of them. the framing curtains do look a bit off to me too - I think they need more dark creases. Compared to the many folds draping your male character's knee they look like no detail was put into them. but at the same time, I would have never noticed them if you didn't mention them in your comments. I hope this helps.
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gppr In reply to Charlene-Art [2011-01-03 15:06:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for taking the time to leave this critique, charmed-ravenclaw.
It is my hope to rework this piece this year.
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Azsalyn [2012-02-19 02:19:14 +0000 UTC]
Very nice work... beautiful girl and a beautiful setting.
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DameOdessa [2011-09-14 09:40:56 +0000 UTC]
The work on the lighting, fabric of the skirt and folds is breathtaking
I'm really, speechless, dear, it is a mesmerizing work
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PutYourBraveFaceOn [2011-08-31 13:00:18 +0000 UTC]
Yay! I’m very glad to announce you that your artwork has been chosen to be amongst the best deviations submitted to our in the month of July 2011. You can check it out here: [link] & here: [link] . P.S. Please, don’t forget to show us some love
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If you saw this News Article faster than we got to announce it to you, even better!
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6milk [2011-08-26 03:04:37 +0000 UTC]
It's beautiful! I just love the rich colors, especially the red. It gives the whole piece a great glow.
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gppr In reply to Adena22 [2011-07-29 14:36:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, Adena! Long time no see I hope all is well with you.
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Adena22 In reply to gppr [2011-08-07 01:40:17 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, with my little ones running around it is hard to do art or to catch up with it
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gppr In reply to Adena22 [2011-08-07 21:15:21 +0000 UTC]
I understand that well. My little one (and other life situations) leaves me little time for art as well. But don't give up, soon they will be more independent and you'll be able to paint more.
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Adelina1993 [2011-07-25 07:11:51 +0000 UTC]
Your beautiful work has been featured here [link] Please do NOT reply to this! Instead comment and/or add to s the news article. Thank you!
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Alexiel-Kurai [2011-07-22 01:44:03 +0000 UTC]
Wow you have improved so much! This only looks way better then the first one! You can really tell how much you have grown!
Awesome work keep improving!
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gppr In reply to Alexiel-Kurai [2011-07-22 13:06:19 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad you think so.
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Simceros [2011-07-21 18:51:45 +0000 UTC]
I really love this updated version I think the lady looks so real and natural now, and the textures of her dress, curtains and pillows look fantastic. The lighting is beautifully depicted, and overall it is more of a panting to me, because the details and effort and the complexity of the piece are tops.
Great job, my dear friend!
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gppr In reply to Simceros [2011-07-22 13:05:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you dear Sim.
(BTW, how is the story coming along?)
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Simceros In reply to gppr [2011-07-23 16:02:33 +0000 UTC]
Anytime
Do you mean Silk? Sorry, I'm getting a bit confused
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gppr In reply to Simceros [2011-07-26 15:15:35 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I mean Silk. Are you working on another story at the same time?
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Simceros In reply to gppr [2011-07-26 15:56:35 +0000 UTC]
Haha yeah, I have 4 of them Sorry, I got a little confused
I'm sending you a little briefing about Silk in a second
Really interested in what you'll say!!! I need opinions
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