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Here's my submission to the Draw This Again Contest.---
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grrroch In reply to ??? [2012-09-09 01:29:38 +0000 UTC]
Haha, thank You for that motivational comment! I appreciate it!
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Scruffles-sama In reply to grrroch [2012-09-09 01:33:52 +0000 UTC]
yep! ( reminder: sometimes i am too overpositive on some things!LOL)
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grrroch In reply to Scruffles-sama [2012-09-09 01:40:52 +0000 UTC]
I will have that on mind!
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Scruffles-sama In reply to grrroch [2012-09-09 02:08:33 +0000 UTC]
but the first one is more realistic, as i keep looking at it.... *sweat drop.* and yep!
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grrroch In reply to Scruffles-sama [2012-09-09 02:12:18 +0000 UTC]
Yea, I regret this, how I drew a 'new' one a little now. @_@ But yet still good news about the first one!
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EmiMori In reply to ??? [2012-09-08 23:33:08 +0000 UTC]
I believe that the first is better. I feel the trees have an odd texture and the branches are too linely. Also the path is a bit too symmetric on either side.
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grrroch In reply to EmiMori [2012-09-09 00:36:44 +0000 UTC]
Well, I agree partly. In the first artwork, there is better, 'realistic' composition and depth. Now I see, that the second is too symmetrical. Thanks for Your comment!
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EmiMori In reply to grrroch [2012-09-09 02:29:50 +0000 UTC]
They're still both very beautiful pieces of art. We all have growing to do but you certainly have showed some improvement and that you can take critique well. Nice job .
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Colopatiro [2012-09-08 22:46:20 +0000 UTC]
Actually the first one is defiantly better. On the second one the perpektive is very weird, u didn't invest as much time in the branches, to be honest they don't even look like twigs it's just brown streaks.
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grrroch In reply to Colopatiro [2012-09-09 01:40:08 +0000 UTC]
I am glad, You like the first one also. And yes, the perspective in the second piece is too symmetrical and isn't that realistic and natural as in the first artwork. Thanks for the comment a lot.
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MauricioRomano In reply to ??? [2012-09-08 22:12:56 +0000 UTC]
Compositionally the first one is much better with better perspective and loose-ness.
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grrroch In reply to MauricioRomano [2012-09-09 01:37:59 +0000 UTC]
The composition in fact is better in the first one, but when it comes to detail, I have concentraded definitely more on it in the second artwork and that was for the most part a goal for me here. Thanks for Your comment!
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Atelda In reply to ??? [2012-09-08 21:01:32 +0000 UTC]
I love the improvement between the two. There is much more detail in the second one with the lines and texture. I also think it's somewhat neat how in the "Before" picture, you drew the trees with very thin trunks and in the "After" picture, the trees have "grown" into these strong, thick tree trunks as if showing your growth as an artist as well.
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humanityblood In reply to ??? [2012-09-08 20:08:09 +0000 UTC]
both are amazing! adorable style
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grrroch In reply to humanityblood [2012-09-08 20:13:52 +0000 UTC]
Thank You kindly! I'm glad You like it!
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Alou77 In reply to ??? [2012-09-08 19:16:26 +0000 UTC]
they are both too good to be true!!but the second one is abit more creepy
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grrroch In reply to Alou77 [2012-09-08 19:24:07 +0000 UTC]
I even didn't notice that! Thanks very much.
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