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Description Well, after about a week of work, I've finished a promotional "poster" for my next-to-be-made Flash series. This is my first attempt at a CG Photoshop colored pic, and I think it came out well. Tell me what you think. Advanced Critique Encouraged.

From left to right: Steak, Tater, Dumpling and Parsley. They're all named after foods...foods that represent them in some way or another.

The plot is that of a psychological teenage drama. But, this is no "The O.C." or some crap. This will be an 9 or 10 part series about 4 teenagers and how they each cope with life. This is real. This is not how Hollywood decides to show teenagers growing up, with their so-called "problems." It will have a little comedy, but mainly it will just talk about how the youth of today get by in life...without taking sides.

I want to do a serious Flash cartoon. Not only to show that I'm capable of more than just toilet jokes or "the Hate-dar." I want to show that I'm capable of writing a story that captivates people. Selfish reasons aside, I want to show the internet that a serious Flash series is possible, despite everyone having the idea that the only Flash cartoons that are made involve fart jokes and Megaman sprites...or is that webcomics?...doesn't matter.

Tools used: My handy-dandy tablet (for drawing...couldn't live without it), Macromedia Flash 8 (for lineart), and Photoshop 7.0 (for everything else)

Hope you like!

PS-Give me criticism, I want to improve. And feel free to ask any questions you may have about Brick Wall.

PPS-I will finish Hyperboy. It's just that Hyperboy is all planned out in my mind. I know what to do and how to do it. This is the series I'm currently writing, so I can work on it after Hyperboy.
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Comments: 113

flameboy9201 In reply to ??? [2006-07-23 13:53:38 +0000 UTC]

There we go!(wats tinis?)

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hyperboy In reply to flameboy9201 [2006-07-23 17:09:26 +0000 UTC]

Teeny martinis.

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flameboy9201 In reply to hyperboy [2006-07-24 00:04:48 +0000 UTC]

o i got it now

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HoldYourFire In reply to ??? [2006-07-13 10:26:50 +0000 UTC]

OMG my Love-dar is in the red. Wow, it's sooooo cool. Hee hee, they're named after foods. I wonder if they taste like that.

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hyperboy In reply to HoldYourFire [2006-07-13 16:07:35 +0000 UTC]

haha, no. They taste like candy!

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HoldYourFire In reply to hyperboy [2006-07-13 17:14:37 +0000 UTC]

HOW DO YOU KNOW? OMG YOUR A CANNIBAL! WHERE'S VLAD AND AUSTIN AT A TIME LIKE THIS?????

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hyperboy In reply to HoldYourFire [2006-07-13 17:35:19 +0000 UTC]

*shoots you and eats you*

Mmmm....candy.

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HoldYourFire In reply to hyperboy [2006-07-13 17:37:59 +0000 UTC]

HEY! *shoots Hyperboy, stuffs him in a sleeve, put him on a plate, and cook in microwave for 2 minuits* MMM MMM! Taste like Hot Pockets!!!

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hyperboy In reply to HoldYourFire [2006-07-13 18:10:30 +0000 UTC]

Hmm.

Well, I've been beaten.

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HoldYourFire In reply to hyperboy [2006-07-13 18:12:35 +0000 UTC]

YAY! I PAWNED YOU, HYPERBOY! I SO OWN YOU! SWEET VICTORY IS MINE!

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hyperboy In reply to HoldYourFire [2006-07-13 19:43:32 +0000 UTC]

*tear*

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HoldYourFire In reply to hyperboy [2006-07-14 01:50:16 +0000 UTC]

*sniffle* All right, your Hyperboy comics and Flash cartoons pawn my crappy pictures, and I do not own you.

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hyperboy In reply to HoldYourFire [2006-07-14 03:25:04 +0000 UTC]

Yesss. I win this after all.

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HoldYourFire In reply to hyperboy [2006-07-14 11:31:04 +0000 UTC]

You wimpered, it doesen't count. I hope you just realized you were pawned for 5 minuits by a 12-year-old.

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hyperboy In reply to HoldYourFire [2006-07-14 14:59:45 +0000 UTC]

....okay, this conversation is over.

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HoldYourFire In reply to hyperboy [2006-07-14 15:19:37 +0000 UTC]

Yes. *whistles* Oogle Boogle.

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LightBoy [2006-07-13 04:46:30 +0000 UTC]

Awesome man! Great Idea, we COULD use some more serious flash animations. All of the Characters look good too. and the Photoshop CGing is really well done. **burns with envy** I can't wait for this OR Hyperboy 4. GOOD LUCK!

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hyperboy In reply to LightBoy [2006-07-13 04:55:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! We could use some more. Hope it's well recieved.

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LightBoy In reply to hyperboy [2006-07-13 07:46:01 +0000 UTC]

most definitely. I'm sure it will be.

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DDR-freak1 In reply to ??? [2006-07-13 04:43:19 +0000 UTC]

heh, that's awesome. it's very hard to come across a flash cartoon that is serious, mostly they are either comedy or stick-fighting. It'll be interesting to see how it all works out. oh, and also, if that's how they are actually going to look in the actual flash cartoon, then i dont' think you should improve at all because you don't want to spend a lot of detail, like spending an hour or two on each frame just drawing in all the details for the characters. but i don't know, maybe that's how you do it anyways, i don't work with flash a lot.

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hyperboy In reply to DDR-freak1 [2006-07-13 04:47:39 +0000 UTC]

No, of course not. The characters in the cartoon will be shaded much simpler. Just basic shading. Nothing fancy. I would never spend that much time on each frame.

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Yunalesca-Druisilla In reply to ??? [2006-07-13 04:26:42 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU! You're awesome, I'm so glad you made this decision. I still like Hyperboy and all, but this is exciting too. I've only seen one serious flash series, which only has one episode at the moment You're doing better on your style, its developing really nicely I like the detail of the armhair of the guy with the green mohawk

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hyperboy In reply to Yunalesca-Druisilla [2006-07-13 04:31:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! Glad to hear that my fans are looking forward to other projects of mine. There is a big lack of serious Flash cartoons.

PS- Parsley is a hairy guy.

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kantieb0 In reply to ??? [2006-07-13 04:12:30 +0000 UTC]

?? good stuff! cept steak's left arm is dislocated at the elbow...
cant wait till you put up some content!

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hyperboy In reply to kantieb0 [2006-07-13 04:30:06 +0000 UTC]

His left arm was so hard to do...I'm still not happy with it.

But, we both know that this cartoon won't come too soon.

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kantieb0 In reply to hyperboy [2006-07-13 08:04:25 +0000 UTC]

yeh, sadly...
the style still is true to your established style which is good!
I was afraid you were gonna try the more realistic look.

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hyperboy In reply to kantieb0 [2006-07-13 16:06:57 +0000 UTC]

Nope. I don't think I could if I wanted to.

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kantieb0 In reply to hyperboy [2006-07-14 07:25:24 +0000 UTC]

mebe a different style for each kid.

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hyperboy In reply to kantieb0 [2006-07-14 14:59:06 +0000 UTC]

I did use a different style for each kid. At least for certain aspects.

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kantieb0 In reply to hyperboy [2006-07-14 20:12:24 +0000 UTC]

kewl!

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Noten In reply to ??? [2006-07-13 03:45:44 +0000 UTC]

Why does all your art remind me of Gorillaz

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hyperboy In reply to Noten [2006-07-13 04:29:06 +0000 UTC]

Because I'm a little inspired by Jamie Hewlett.

I do love Gorillaz. Partially for the music, but mostly for the amazing graphic style.

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HulaCookie In reply to ??? [2006-07-13 03:44:28 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like a pretty good idea to me. I've always hated the shows like the O.C., the Hills, and other crap like that ( Jeeze those shows piss me off >< ). ANYWAY! As always, I'm eager to see any of your artwork, and this is no exception.

Of all the characters, I like Dumpling the most...He reminds me of one of my friends. xD;;

Will this flash be based on real life events?--Just out of curiosity...

Can't wait to see the new series! And...The installment of Hyperboy!

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hyperboy In reply to HulaCookie [2006-07-13 04:27:09 +0000 UTC]

Those shows suck ass. They're so damn fake.

It's kinda based off of my thoughts, observations, and discussions with Austin. I have a grudge against modern teenagers and their decadence. But, I understand them. That's what this cartoon will look over. That kind of double-edged sword of teenage rebellion.

They're all symbolic characters, but Dumpling is based off of me from a couple of years ago. I'm sure he will be a fan-favorite. Him and Tater.

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HulaCookie In reply to hyperboy [2006-07-13 04:44:35 +0000 UTC]

I know...They make me want to eat babies...

Haha...I know what you mean, as far as teenage decadence. It really does sound like an awsome flash. How long have you and Austin been friends?

That's what I originally thought...Haha...Tater...

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hyperboy In reply to HulaCookie [2006-07-13 04:54:52 +0000 UTC]

Almost 4 years. All of High School and most of 8th grade. We came up with Hyperboy in 8th grade.

Brick Wall was originally a comedy Flash series we were going to make. Same characters, but they were very cutesy and simple. Hyperboy replaced it as my first Flash.

Then, this year, I decided to do a serious Flash cartoon, and remade those old characters into more detailed ones with backstories and personalities.

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HulaCookie In reply to hyperboy [2006-07-13 05:03:53 +0000 UTC]

Awsome. Thanks for answering all my stupid quesitons. xD;;

Haha...I'm definitely a fan! I can't wait to see the first installment! I'm a sucker for backstories of any kind.

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hyperboy In reply to HulaCookie [2006-07-13 06:08:18 +0000 UTC]

Haha..well, actually, the backstories aren't important. Its what's happening to them now that matters. I haven't even bothered with their backstories. It's not an RPG, you know. They're very interesting characters, though.

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HulaCookie In reply to hyperboy [2006-07-14 23:07:05 +0000 UTC]

That's true. You don't need backstories to make a great character. I originally saw the Hyperboy flash before reading the comics ( Please don't kill me...My friends already beat me up for that. xDD;;; ), and I thought it was great. After all the flashes I've seen, I still like Hyperboy the most.

On a side note, some of my friends RP with your Hyperboy characters...

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hyperboy In reply to HulaCookie [2006-07-14 23:24:36 +0000 UTC]

Well, if you liked it before reading the comics, that means it's good enough to stand along without a backstory.

How does that work? They use my characters in RPs? Have they none of their own?

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HulaCookie In reply to hyperboy [2006-07-15 02:22:34 +0000 UTC]

It's not that they do let's say...Real RPs ( Where they go online and act like the people ). They just enjoy quoting the comics and flashes. And...sometimes...tend to act like them ( Both of these things done in the public, which I assure you is quite funny ). Of course, this probably freaks you out, but I guarantee you that it's meant for fun...Not to take any of your ideas. And no, they're not stalkers either. xD

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hyperboy In reply to HulaCookie [2006-07-15 04:07:03 +0000 UTC]

Haha, no....that's cool.

I remember one of my fans told me that him and his friends play Hyperboy at recess. I thought that was awesome, because I remember how I used to play my favorite shows when I was little.

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logana16 [2006-07-13 02:46:02 +0000 UTC]

I`ve always wanted to try something dramatic aswell. someday...

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hyperboy In reply to logana16 [2006-07-13 03:25:01 +0000 UTC]

Yes...good luck with that.

We need to see more of that.

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logana16 In reply to hyperboy [2006-07-13 15:26:48 +0000 UTC]

All to true, these days it`s either violence, comedy or hentai.

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hyperboy In reply to logana16 [2006-07-13 16:08:54 +0000 UTC]

All of which are good.

But, we need some serious Flash series.

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Tairu In reply to hyperboy [2006-07-16 03:34:32 +0000 UTC]

there are enough as it is.

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hyperboy In reply to Tairu [2006-07-16 04:19:41 +0000 UTC]

No...there really isn't.

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Tairu In reply to hyperboy [2006-07-16 05:09:25 +0000 UTC]

More than I ever care to watch, anyways.

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hyperboy In reply to Tairu [2006-07-16 05:30:51 +0000 UTC]

That's your problem.

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