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If I'm gonna develop the Kenomaera's headworld you can be SURE AS ALL FUCK that there's gonna be a Kenomaera marine subspecies. And no, they're not water-based Kenos, they're a subspecies of their own that live mainly in the sea!
The previous design looked too much like Eerays and Manta Sharks, so I've reworked them and based them off of the lionfish. They've lost in the cute department, but goddamn they're badass now, and extremely easy to tell apart from the other two!

More info about the Makolians here! (being rewritten)
Species Information: MakoliansWhat you can do with your Makolian
- Roleplay
- Put them in AUs or make them interact with other species
- Put them in fandoms, as long as it's a non-canon au for their life
- Give them whatever outfit you want, although keep it simple: most of them don't wear anything!
- Change their markings a bit, or give them a few, if you want
- Work with them in OR out of the given canon headworld. We want this group and species to be as free as it can be!
What you cannot do when you adopt a Makolian
- Change their element
Basics
The Makolians are a marine cousin species of the Kenomaera. Their skin is leathery and difficult to tear, and always hydrated when out of the water. If the Makolian is too dehydrated, they must be rehydrated immediately or they may die.
As a species, they're widespread across Eslion, as they're an extremely adaptable species. They live in oceans, seas and even lakes. However it's known that they prefer warm, salty waters, so the t

There isn't much about them for now, but here are a few pointers.
- Soul Gem just like their land living cousins, the Kenos and Strings. The colour is affected by the element
- Elements are almost all available aside from Earth, Fire, Ice and Electricity.
- In lack of a tail blade, this species has developed spikes all over the length of their tail and sometimes on their back.
- In lack of back spikes, the Makolian may have a transparent fin.
- May have horns but it's not mandatory.
- One or two pairs of large fin-like wings, they can glide over the air for a few seconds after jumping out of the water. The wings are based off a lionfish's fins, with semi-transparent membrane and cartilaginous / crystalline spikes.
- Ears and fins come in normal or crowned variations, both equally common. Crowned fins will still have the crystalline spikes, but the membrane will be more opaque.
- Gills on neck.
- Feet type can be spear (common) or fairy (uncommon).
- The creature itself can be based on any kind of existing marine / lake fauna or completely randomized design wise.
- Unlimited possibilities colour and design wise.
- They live underwater, but can survive on land for about 8 hours. They must remain hydrated if they want to survive more.

FUCK I love them.
it took me two hours to design them because I wanted them to be easily recognizable from the Eerays. I know the adopt community here is a lot more accepting than the dragon one, but having something I can call 100% my own is great <3

Other people allowed to make adopts of these guys will be Pati-Adopts and HariotAdopts . Β They can also own unlimited amounts of characters from this species.


The Makolian is a CLOSED SPECIES by Vanideita , do NOT make your own!
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Comments: 52

J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to ??? [2019-06-25 18:53:14 +0000 UTC]

Yes they are! I never managed to make them a proper reference, but they're still one of the species related to World-Of-Eslion - there are some Makolian adoptables there, in case you're interested in seeing a bunch of them!

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LucienCreates In reply to J-E-N-0-V-A [2019-06-28 00:38:25 +0000 UTC]

Will you ever be accepting guest artist for them?

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to LucienCreates [2019-06-28 10:50:50 +0000 UTC]

Unsure, maybe in the future!

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LucienCreates In reply to J-E-N-0-V-A [2019-06-30 17:33:53 +0000 UTC]

Alright- could you contact me if you ever want me to be one?

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RigelWeiss [2015-02-08 13:40:03 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh I love them ! *v*
They have a really interesting concept and design <33

Β Can't wait to see more of those ! ;v; β™₯

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SiriusFlux [2015-02-05 15:02:58 +0000 UTC]

OH GOD THE NEW VERSION IS MY FAVE HOLY CRUD WHY YOU GOTTA MAKE IT SO PRETTY

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to SiriusFlux [2015-02-05 15:11:40 +0000 UTC]

THE NEW VERSION IS SO MUCH BETTER
spiky and transparent fish babies

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SiriusFlux In reply to J-E-N-0-V-A [2015-02-05 15:24:52 +0000 UTC]

yes

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Giiana [2015-02-05 12:16:03 +0000 UTC]

OH DEAR GODΒ 

If I loved them before, NOW I NEED ONE NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

They are going to look fab with some colours on ;u;

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to Giiana [2015-02-05 12:28:32 +0000 UTC]

THEY'RE SO GREAT NOW they've just gone "FUCK YO CUTENESS I'M GOING MAXIMUM BADASS OVERDRIVE"
I'm actually going to work on some adopts this evening, we'll see how they end up!

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Giiana In reply to J-E-N-0-V-A [2015-02-05 12:36:29 +0000 UTC]

Would it be ok to make some questions about this species? As what do they eat, how they sleep...? I am quite curious about them *u*

I've already read the species info that's why I ask

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to Giiana [2015-02-05 12:42:02 +0000 UTC]

Sure thing! That's some stuff I didn't cover, haha
Makolians are usually omnivore, being able to eat both fish, shark meat and if needed algae, vegetables and fruits coming from the land such as pineapples, bananas, apples and tomatoes. They can't eat potatoes though as their stomach can't digest them, so if they were to eat one, they'd most likely feel horribly sick for a day or even two. Β They're also immune to puffer fish venom, so they eat them without a single problem. They seem to absolutely adore sepia and octopi, so those are their favorite food along with fruit.
They usually sleep in patterns of 3/4 hours at a time, wake up for a little bit and then fall asleep again. They do it until they've gathered 7-8 hours of sleep at most, and then they'll be fully active for the rest of the day. They prefer to go to sleep around 1 or 2 AM as they can be extremely active at dusk.

Other questions? ovo

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Giiana In reply to J-E-N-0-V-A [2015-02-05 12:57:33 +0000 UTC]

OHHHH THAT'S COOL. So let's say that fruit, food or some kind of meats(from other kind of fish or creature) that are not common in their habitat can be kind of ''poisonous'' such as the potato. Would that be correct?. And with poisonous I mean hard to digest or assimilate.

YES I HAVE MORE QUESTIONS *Excited*

So their teeth is characterized for being functional for an omnivorous diet, or do they have some sharp teeth as sharks or orcas?Β 
When it comes to eat animals in general, how do they hunt? Also, about their culture. Do they live in caves, in some kind of houses, between algae or in coral forest?Β 
Do they have voice? (Since they are mainly aquatic creatures) It so, can it travel through water? And through oxygen?Β 

I have a few more but I think I will stop here by now. I hope they are not annoying! ;u;/

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to Giiana [2015-02-05 13:04:21 +0000 UTC]

Not exactly, they can eat meat (although they highly prefer chicken and turkey to cattle (harder to digest)) and fruits equally well, just not potatoes. They're hella poisonous for them.
Salad, spinach and the likes? They can eat them perfectly fine.

Their teeth are like Kenomaeras, coming in two variations: vampire (normal human teeth with longer canines) or shark-like. Shark toothed Makolians of course prefer to eat fish because algae and other things get stuck between their teeth pretty badly and they're difficult to chew for them.
They hunt in groups with large fishnets to catch fish, or with spears and tridents to take down sharks and other large fishes and whales. They don't attack killer whales though, they're too much for them to take.
Their culture isn't still developed, so I can't really answer that one
They live in either wooden / mud houses close to the seashore / ON the beach, or in underwater towns made of algae and wooden sticks and planks. Some can also create cave settlements and use luminescent gemstones as their light sources, but cave settlements are uncommon compared to those built between coral forests and algae forests.
They do have a voice, but while their language is mainly blubbers and glubs underwater, they can speak normally outside of it and communicate with Kenos and Strings well. Their voice tends to be of a higher pitch than that of the other two species though, but not extremely annoying to hear.

Not annoying at all! If anything, they're helping me develop aspects of them I didn't think about

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Giiana In reply to J-E-N-0-V-A [2015-02-05 13:22:29 +0000 UTC]

OH, OK, I got it now! And poor babies, I can imagine them kind of angry at the algae getting stuck at their teeth xDD

About their teeth again, how many times do they ''change'' them? And also their cleanliness and their skin. Are they quite sensible at for example mud or dirt? If so, how they clean theirselves?. Their skin is strong against physical harm, but how about for example fire or acids? Like for example fuels or even urea. Are their fins-wings (I don't know how exactly call them) strong? And how do they work in wanter? I imagined them kind of glide through water *___* Do they use water currents to move around or mostly swim? Are those fin-wings heavy at land?

AND YOU CANNOT EVEN IMAGINE HOW MUCH I LIKED THE LUMINESCENT GEMSTONES AS LIGHTSOURCE

ALSO, I don't know if in your headworld there are humans along these creatures? They are also welcoming with them? And how is their relationship with pirates, fishers...?

Are they viviparous?

And finally, do they have a predator? :0

By now that's all! I really like tridents as their weapon of hunting, and I find their voice really cute aaaaaaaaaaaaa I can't wait to see the adopts!

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to Giiana [2015-02-05 13:37:25 +0000 UTC]

"God DAMNIT I love algae so much but my mouth hates it! ;A;
Im gonna have mashed algae. Screw all of you normal toothed people"

They change their teeth only once in their lives, like humans, but if they loose one or two teeth, new ones will grow back in a few weeks.

They aren't too sensible to mud and dirt, though if they were to be covered in mud they'd have to clean themselves up quickly, especially if the mud is close to the gills, they may suffocate. But otherwise dirt doesn't bother them too much, in fact they can survive on land for a few hours before going back in the water to rehydrate.
Oh man their skin is super weak to fire and acid. They basically turn into fried fish if they're burnt or zapped by another elemental, so they try to stay at a safe distance from any kind of flame. They can cook when they're on land (Makos used to living on land will enjoy some cooked or roasted treats) but will still be extremely cautious. They're not exactly flammable thanks to their usually wet skin, but it still burns them horribly if they touch it for even just a fraction of a second.

Their fin-wings are extremely light both on land and water, kind of like a sheet of paper, and they're easy to tear, but they're at the same time difficult to harm because of the crystalline bendable spikes that connect them. They're pretty sharp on the end so they may stab or sting those who get too close to them.Β 
And yes, you guessed right! They basically glide through water rather than swimming. Β They do move their fin-wings to propel themselves though, and the best example I can give you is this
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No humans in this world, only Kenos and Stringtails ovo and they all live peacefully together.

They have a good relation with fishermen (usually helping them in exchange of seashells or some of the fish they get) and even with pirates! Some Makolians will even be pirates themselves, always in search of lost treasures and the likes.

And yes, they're viviparous, with six months of pregnancy. The baby will be sustained by a mixture of milk and mashed algae, so the new parents leave the underwater towns to settle on the seaside / shoreline until the child is at least 7 years old, grown enough for the depths of the ocean / sea / lake.

And finally, they have predators! Great white sharks, sea serpents and killer whales are their natural enemies, sea serpents being the most dangerous for them.

I'm so happy someone's so curious about them omfg <333

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Giiana In reply to J-E-N-0-V-A [2015-02-05 14:47:05 +0000 UTC]

*WHEEZES* I want one so badly *grabby hands

I HAVE ANOTHER QUESTION I JUST COME UP WITH. How sensitive is their sight?(With sun for example) Do they see ''more colours'' that we do, or less, or even the same?Β 

DUSGFDFS They are seriously a lovely species ;u;

SEA SERPENTS LEAVE THE KIDS ALONE *SHOO SHOO* >C

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to Giiana [2015-02-05 15:04:17 +0000 UTC]

JSAKKJSKAfkSf <333

HM I THINK their sight is slightly blurred outside of the water, but crystal clear IN the water. They see as many colours as humans though, and when looking at direct sunlight, they see everything black for a few minutes. Basically they go temporarily blind.

SEA SNAKES BE EATING THE KIDS which is why they move closer to the beach. Sea serpents are more of depth dwellers

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Giiana In reply to J-E-N-0-V-A [2015-02-06 12:28:22 +0000 UTC]

I HAVE ANOTHER QUESTION. And this is why I didn't answer yesterday just in case I had xD

How long, more or less can they live?

Poor babies, we shall give them sun glasses, They will look badass >D It would be cool if they use some kind of googles with water inside them so they can see crystal clear outside of the water! :0

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to Giiana [2015-02-06 12:30:36 +0000 UTC]

They live about 110 / 120 human years. Their life spans are longer than ours but the same as Kenos and Strings!


I can only imagine this rn

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Giiana In reply to J-E-N-0-V-A [2015-02-06 12:34:42 +0000 UTC]

YES, THAT'S HOW I IMAGINE THEM.

And that's all I needed to now by now! Sorry if I am spamming you with way too many questions 8'D

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CorruptedWaffles [2015-02-05 11:46:05 +0000 UTC]

I want onneeee

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to CorruptedWaffles [2015-02-05 11:56:26 +0000 UTC]

aaaa ;v;
I'm working on them now so I can finally doodle up a few designs fff <3

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CorruptedWaffles In reply to J-E-N-0-V-A [2015-02-05 11:58:15 +0000 UTC]

Huffsss

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HariotAdopts [2015-02-04 23:55:45 +0000 UTC]

I so fuckin sorry but they're a lot like eerays probably bc I've not seen much of things like this yet but omfg * v *
Also stop spoiling me so much this isjust hnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnngh
I'm just a little,,, hhh bc eerays are my idols species thats probably why I cant get to like it so much so so so sorry ; v ; also have u seen the klk based eeray holy fUCK
///emphasis the reason stated before, im still sorry gOD

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to HariotAdopts [2015-02-05 12:00:47 +0000 UTC]

SENPAI SENPAI since Hana's your idol and all can you give me your opinion on the new design?
I think it's much better and definitely easy to tell apart from the Eerays now ;V;

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HariotAdopts In reply to J-E-N-0-V-A [2015-02-05 16:32:08 +0000 UTC]

like holy shit marts they took a HUGE turn for the better now! Very different from the eerays yes! <3
and still based on your kenos yess
very very cool but I'm really excites to see a character design with this!!((also clothes,,, will be a pain,,,,))

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to HariotAdopts [2015-02-05 16:38:27 +0000 UTC]

Fuck yes I did good ;v;
Your approval was immensely needed for me bc you know Eerays better than me, so if you can tell them apart without a problem, then I'm good to go.

Remember that you CAN make adopts of these too, and if you want I can make you contributor of the Keno group (to post the adopts there without a problem)

I'm gonna design a few later, we'll see where my creativity takes them. XD
Clothes will be a paaaaaaain

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HariotAdopts In reply to J-E-N-0-V-A [2015-02-05 16:44:46 +0000 UTC]

aaah that makes me reallyl happy tho that you needed my opinion askljas ;;

also yES PLS

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to HariotAdopts [2015-02-05 16:47:07 +0000 UTC]

I do need your help though. You know hana's species better than me so any opinion you may have on them is extremely important for me

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to HariotAdopts [2015-02-05 09:45:16 +0000 UTC]

Its ok, looking at them the day after they ARE a lot like them, so I'm going to think of ways to base them off other kinds of fish and make them stand out ovo
EDIT - Found the perfect fish, they're going to be based on the lionfish

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SlaveToTheMocha [2015-02-04 23:08:57 +0000 UTC]

There needs to be more marine babies out there!

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to SlaveToTheMocha [2015-02-04 23:11:13 +0000 UTC]

YAS
and considering I dropped the marine alien species for Vestaleon, this one is gonna be my focus.
I love these guys

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SlaveToTheMocha In reply to J-E-N-0-V-A [2015-02-04 23:14:41 +0000 UTC]

They're pretty cool looking to be sure! Like flying fish peeps haha
I feel like I need to work on my barilo more but other than their species info I dunno what needs explaining

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to SlaveToTheMocha [2015-02-04 23:16:01 +0000 UTC]

You can work on their behavior, society, anything really. Even the headworld itself.
If you've done all that, then you can even set up a storyline for your characters or writing / roleplay prompts

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SlaveToTheMocha In reply to J-E-N-0-V-A [2015-02-04 23:29:38 +0000 UTC]

True true, ill have to see what pops in my mind

Oh while I remember, would you want me when designig your barilo to design their humanoid form also?

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to SlaveToTheMocha [2015-02-04 23:31:25 +0000 UTC]

Yes, just don't overly stress yourself. The best ideas come unexpected!

OH GOSH, that would be great! If that's not a problem for you, that is. ;v; (he's gonna be a guuuuy)

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SlaveToTheMocha In reply to J-E-N-0-V-A [2015-02-04 23:35:17 +0000 UTC]

Of course, ill do my best not to strain myself.

No problem at all~ woo dragonoid mermen all the way!

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SiriusFlux [2015-02-04 21:57:36 +0000 UTC]

ohhhh shiiiiiiiiiiit <3

*dies from pretty*

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to SiriusFlux [2015-02-04 22:05:49 +0000 UTC]

FISH BABIES

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SiriusFlux In reply to J-E-N-0-V-A [2015-02-04 22:06:57 +0000 UTC]

YUSSSSS

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RieNamkrow [2015-02-04 20:44:56 +0000 UTC]

These are super cool! Yeah, kind of reminded me of Eerays at first, but they're still very different. Nice job ouo

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to RieNamkrow [2015-02-04 20:51:58 +0000 UTC]

All water-based humanoid species kinda look like each other, but I've tried to make them different! For example, eerays can have fur on their tails, these guys only additional fins.Β 
Thanks!

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RieNamkrow In reply to J-E-N-0-V-A [2015-02-04 21:49:01 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that's true. And I noticed that ouo
The soul gems also add onto their own twist.

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to RieNamkrow [2015-02-04 21:55:38 +0000 UTC]

It's a shame really, but in a way it's refreshing? I'm so used to seeing dragonoids that all look the same that working on a humanoid species and making them stand out from similar ones was a real, nice challenge.
The soul gem is a recurring theme for the Keno's world, as are the crystalline horns. Once I set that theme, I couldn't help but work with it

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RieNamkrow In reply to J-E-N-0-V-A [2015-02-05 02:51:57 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it's nice to see new designs and more unique characters!
And that's a nice theme to keep ouo

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to RieNamkrow [2015-02-05 11:37:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm actually changing them because after a good night of sleep, I could barely distinguish them from the Eerays PFFFFFT.
I'm posting the updated design now!

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RieNamkrow In reply to J-E-N-0-V-A [2015-02-06 02:02:23 +0000 UTC]

XD fff whoops. haha, alright!

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Ascherune [2015-02-04 20:42:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh man can't wait to see some of these babes!!

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J-E-N-0-V-A In reply to Ascherune [2015-02-04 20:44:06 +0000 UTC]

Hopefully I'll have some Β designs out soon! Right now I'm completely burnt out of ideas (between designing adopts and having to keep my mom's health in check (FEVER PFFFT)), I kind of lost inspiration to doodle out designs XD
I'll try to have a bunch done soon though!

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