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Published: 2005-11-24 16:00:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 218; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 37
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Squeaky swings and tall grassThe longest shadows ever cast
The water's warm and children swim
And we frolicked about in our summer skin
I don't recall a single care
Just greenery and humid air
Then Labor day came and went
And we shed what was left of our summer skin
On the night you left I came over
And I knew your heart I couldn't win
Cause the seasons change was a conduit
And we left our love in our summer skin
- This one's for my ex, for the way he made me smile 24 hours a day.
Because he really is the sweetest boy alive.
Photo: Slight contrast edits. For those that are wondering, the white wall was not photoshopped in. Someone painted half the wall so it was bright white while the other half was filthy.
[Edit] was really unsatisfied with the original so I decided to include the door and make it a bit more panorama. Hope u like it..
Model: ~tearingmascara
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Comments: 13
Idiosyzygic [2005-12-09 02:06:28 +0000 UTC]
This is an interesting way to express this concept. You did a fairly good job in expressing the them of light versus dark by the way the walls are painted and the way the women is dressed. The constrast is okay, but it does not really help seperate the women from the "dark" background. The women appears to be centered in this photo, which is a plus. The angle os this shot probably needs the most improvment because of the way the door is shot. It looks really "slanted" in a sense and that it really throws off the perspective (of seeing the wall as "flat" in this photo). I'm not too enthusiatic about the color scheme of this photo, probably because of the green and black stains on the unpainted wall. In all intents, this is a good photo that expresses a concept in a creative and original way, but I do not think this is the way to do it, in my opinion.
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tearingmascara [2005-11-26 14:52:47 +0000 UTC]
HEY ADE. yes ive got an acc for my poetry. do drop by LOVE THIS PIC btw. n not just because im in it. glam.
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0sphinx0 [2005-11-26 02:04:31 +0000 UTC]
nice contrast. good idea, but what's with the weird pixels and stuff?
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Jadedinc In reply to 0sphinx0 [2005-11-26 04:30:14 +0000 UTC]
lol. I don't know! for some reason this one came out really pixellated. Faark.
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ZiggyDog [2005-11-25 08:14:14 +0000 UTC]
If the wall was black it will be a masterpiece. Sometimes i wish
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charbee [2005-11-25 00:04:10 +0000 UTC]
sigh.
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superb idea! very very very smart. i didn't have any slight idea about utilising that new painted wall and you saw the potential in this photo.
greaaaat job ade!!
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Jadedinc In reply to charbee [2005-11-25 00:14:53 +0000 UTC]
lol.. thanks xb, i'm not very satisfied with this one though..
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Jadedinc In reply to charbee [2005-11-25 07:52:43 +0000 UTC]
i dunno.. im just not feeling it.
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charbee In reply to Jadedinc [2005-11-25 08:25:54 +0000 UTC]
yokay! photoshoot coming up soon again!
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jayfp09 [2005-11-24 16:03:49 +0000 UTC]
Great job,
the poem and photograph really go great together
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