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Published: 2005-11-28 12:39:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1158; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 99
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Description I'll remain in your hold
Body, mind, heart and soul
As long as I breathe
Though consequence takes its toll
All is out of our control
That's how it will be
So close your eyes
Listen to me one last time
There's something I have to say
When your faith turns to despair
Always will my love be there
And never fade away

We're star-crossed and can't escape
We're condemned and can only wait
At this time now it's far too late
To save us from our fate

You know that I'd die for you

- Starcrossed by Ash

Another one inspired by a song. Set this one up the same day I shot 'One Hit Wonder '. I know it's particularly emo, but I've never quite tried a romantic shot. Comments would be welcome. (:
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Comments: 21

heimatgewaesser [2006-01-20 15:55:31 +0000 UTC]

looks like they are shining.
great emotions

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tomegatherion [2005-12-04 16:12:36 +0000 UTC]

aww cute shot

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jeej83 [2005-12-03 04:41:42 +0000 UTC]

That's pretty cool. Love the aspect and the contrast. Nice shot.

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Drapehs [2005-12-02 02:07:10 +0000 UTC]

A very nice shot. I like that there are two people in it. Most shot I see of people on tracks give kind of a sense of solitude, or a lonely journey. Two rails destined never to meet, two lives connected at this moment.

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Simmar [2005-12-01 09:30:40 +0000 UTC]

very nice shot..nice models and great colors

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jayfp09 [2005-12-01 02:24:37 +0000 UTC]

This is really nice. It looks like it took a lot of work. Great models.

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angeleyes79 [2005-11-30 19:26:45 +0000 UTC]

Very romantic image! I really like the colours in this one! Good job

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damaskangel [2005-11-29 02:43:49 +0000 UTC]

they kinda look uncomfortable together...but youve pulled it off...it a great shot and i love the tones...and i think placing them in the middle of the tracks is good cos the titles gives that more meaning...and the sky is ok...like that cos its not drawing attention away from the both of them...

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ElusiveReality [2005-11-29 02:10:18 +0000 UTC]

Very cute! I love the setting. . . it is so natural. Beautiful shot.

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AshleighPopplewell [2005-11-28 21:03:42 +0000 UTC]

Very romantic...the only thing I would suggest is to not have the couple in the exact center of the photo...that sometimes will detract interest from the center point

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misprinted-lies [2005-11-28 20:20:06 +0000 UTC]

Nice idea, good colours, good composition. Nice work!

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DeviantWitch [2005-11-28 17:37:42 +0000 UTC]

i like it. love the colors, pose, perspective...

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Criccle [2005-11-28 16:32:32 +0000 UTC]

Nice! The pose looks great, but why did you pick this location?

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kidscruff [2005-11-28 15:37:22 +0000 UTC]

well done for burning the skies tones in...it is a stronger piece because of it.
a nice composition, but the mans left hand looks like he doesnt quite know where to put it-maybe next time give some more direction to the subjects as to their poses..

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jtbott [2005-11-28 15:03:28 +0000 UTC]

beautiful pic and a beautiful poem. like the color of the rocks. unusual to have colorful rocks on a train track. Also i think i catch the symbolism of the couple being on the track together. if that was the intention?

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lazy-lizzard [2005-11-28 14:57:22 +0000 UTC]

The pose, the place and everything else is great, but I do not like the composition. Try to move the subject away from the centre of the frame, that way it will look much better.

Other than that, I can see that you had the trouble with the details in the sky. Polarising filter could help. Also, you could take few pictures, one with proper exposure on the subject, another with proper exposure on the sky and one between them. When you mix them up, you get colour dynamics of the colour negative film!

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Tunneler [2005-11-28 13:38:45 +0000 UTC]

great photo lots of emotions in it

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charbee [2005-11-28 13:26:12 +0000 UTC]

love the tones and colours of the track. nice pose, but rett seems abit stiff and reza's other hand should be on her hips or something.. but hey, other than the models, the composition is good, i like the idea and starcrossed's a nice song..

the sky......................... i hate the skies in Singapore. they suck.

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Jadedinc In reply to charbee [2005-11-28 14:09:40 +0000 UTC]

YES. THE FUCKING SKY. It was such a huge pain trying to get the colours out. I almost apologised for the level of editting the sky went through. originally it was plain white. HAHA .. i had to dodge and burn until the shades started coming out.

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charbee In reply to Jadedinc [2005-11-28 14:27:30 +0000 UTC]

man. stinks eh. we should start taking stocks of nice skies to superimpose. LOL

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murskaa50makki [2005-11-28 13:05:42 +0000 UTC]

it's nice...
i like this tone,

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