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A stillness flows over the Orange and red carpeted land.A strange comfort within the solitude.
The winds whispering stutter the only thing to be heard.
A confidential image only found once a year,
And for a little while the earth is filled with a silence,
Softened around the edges.
With the raindrops, glisstening on the bear branches.
The drip,drip,dripping echoing thrue the forest trees.
From the tiny little jewels
Still descending from the crying sky.
As I see my exhaling breath fill the morning air.
I breath in deeply and let the smell of the fresh
damp fragrenced air fill my lungs.
I feel infinite collaged amongst the orange hughes.
The wind began caressing my already scarlet cheeks,
turned red from the cold autumn air.
The sun slowly started creeping out from behind the angry clouds,
Their tears slowly started to miss there rhythmatic beat,
That had existed just a moment ago.
I raise my hands to the sky, letting myself be doused
In the last of the tiny diamonds.
I open my eyes and lower my arms, and I let myself feel at peace
even if for just this moment.
I feel as if the worlds being compassionate for me.
The sun now at my back I take a glance at this place,
and one last breath.
And slowly waslk away from the place that made me feel infinate.
Even if only for a moment.
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Comments: 7
missaquaitaine [2012-06-14 16:36:33 +0000 UTC]
Very nice job! I like all the imagery you depicted in the poem. I can see it so vividly, it's just...wow. absolutely enchanting.
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FadingSunset [2006-12-24 22:33:43 +0000 UTC]
nice work kiddo,hope Christmas goes well for you
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Scorpion-Heiress In reply to Java027 [2006-12-24 19:49:48 +0000 UTC]
Yea!! Gues what!! I talked to Walter last night! lol it was fun, he said he missed me :S lol
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Java027 In reply to Scorpion-Heiress [2006-12-26 22:07:26 +0000 UTC]
Awwww lol walter...thats that goth guy who moved right?
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Scorpion-Heiress In reply to Java027 [2006-12-27 00:59:20 +0000 UTC]
yea thats who walter is lol
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