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juanrock — Element of Generosity part 3

Published: 2012-08-14 15:05:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 72835; Favourites: 1128; Downloads: 971
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part 2 - [link]
part 3 - this one

part three and final of element of generosity, now that the three parts are done i hope it does better than it has so far, anyway, i hope everyone enjoys it!
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had to reupload because of a problem
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alternative ending - [link]
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Comments: 596

GreenFrogRibbit In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:46:09 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! I love you portrayl of Rarity as a hardcore bussiness woman. you really do a great job with this little comic. Well done!

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juanrock In reply to GreenFrogRibbit [2012-08-20 18:51:42 +0000 UTC]

harcore at bussiness, generous deep inside, that what i always thought of her

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RangerStew In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:45:47 +0000 UTC]

Critical Hit right in the feels
Good job! Loved the art style in this!

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juanrock In reply to RangerStew [2012-08-20 18:50:28 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot!

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Gefey In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:43:13 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha! This is perfect. My friends never understand when I hound them for the money they owe me, only to turn around and buy them lunch. I love how you touched on the duality of generosity is such a tasteful way! Huzzah to you!

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emax130 In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:39:56 +0000 UTC]

Right in the heart, very nice and well drawn to, love the art style
Congrats, you earned a new watcher

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juanrock In reply to emax130 [2012-08-20 18:50:01 +0000 UTC]

boom! heart shot, thanks for the watch!

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Dairychris In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:38:03 +0000 UTC]

And then you made a grown man cry... Hehe, this is awesome bro.

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juanrock In reply to Dairychris [2012-08-20 18:48:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot! thats a big acomplishment

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Mayuen In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:37:21 +0000 UTC]

Really cute and you have a very nice art style.
Keep up the good work! ^^

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juanrock In reply to Mayuen [2012-08-20 18:48:00 +0000 UTC]

will do!

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Mecha-Ryan In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:36:38 +0000 UTC]

That was nice; but I feel bad that all her friends, think she a cheap-scat.

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prof-scarlet In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:31:48 +0000 UTC]

hello! im here to play devil's advocate. somehow a pony who nags other ponies for owed money so they can give some to an orphanage doesn't seem as generous if she had simply given the money she already had beforehand. but dont get me wrong, i did like it!

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juanrock In reply to prof-scarlet [2012-08-16 01:59:04 +0000 UTC]

bussiness is slow as she mentions in page two, she doesnt have enough for her monthly contribution

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Solaris90 In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:30:48 +0000 UTC]

This is my head canon.

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mahlielpwnee In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:29:44 +0000 UTC]

So why doesnt rarity tell her debtors that shes sending the money to an orphanage? it would probly make her freinds less mad at her.

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KingInYellowTatters In reply to mahlielpwnee [2012-08-15 23:49:35 +0000 UTC]

That was exactly what I wondered. There would have probably have been a lot less drama with Rainbow if she had just informed her what the project was that she needed the money so badly for.

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juanrock In reply to KingInYellowTatters [2012-08-16 01:57:44 +0000 UTC]

yeah but saying "hey i need the money you owe me for an orphanage" seems to apply a bit much preassure, maybe rarity prefers to take the hit

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Starcat5 In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:28:23 +0000 UTC]

Did Luna get re-banished? I almost convinced myself that this was pre-pilot, but that "Element" crack by Rainbow on page 2 kind of kills THAT theory...

So yeah. Big, huge, gaping continuity error.

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juanrock In reply to Starcat5 [2012-08-16 01:56:21 +0000 UTC]

just like that look for equestria's moon xD i have no more coments on the subject

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FlyFFSky In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:26:02 +0000 UTC]

Holy....celestia...I almost cried. Because in the last two parts, I was talking to someone on Skype how I found a comic with Rarity being a prick...

I feel terrible now...*Hugs Rarity Plush*

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juanrock In reply to FlyFFSky [2012-08-20 18:47:22 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha, thats ok, rarity forgives you

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Reed-Libro In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:25:56 +0000 UTC]

Awww..Great nowI feel selfish.Every time I get 20 $ the first thing I tell whom ever gave it to me "MINE!!"

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philosipony In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:24:21 +0000 UTC]

that art style...mother of fucking god
:slowclapplz:
You have earned a new follower, everything about this is brilliant

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juanrock In reply to philosipony [2012-08-20 18:46:33 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot! every follower is apreciated, gonna be doing more stuff soon!

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DameonRaeth In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:23:37 +0000 UTC]

DAWWW!

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SaltyP3ppers In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:21:34 +0000 UTC]

what a twist

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firadart In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:20:14 +0000 UTC]

I like when art makes it seem like Rarity is acting against her element but at the end show that she is generous.

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GuyverSnake In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:18:31 +0000 UTC]

HnngggDawwwSquueeee*expload*

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McLarenMP4-27 In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:18:07 +0000 UTC]

I love this little series. Great job on this!

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juanrock In reply to McLarenMP4-27 [2012-08-20 18:44:03 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot! im considering working on the rest of the elements

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cobaltu In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:17:00 +0000 UTC]

I did enjoy it. You've got a unique style among pony artists and obviously some writing chops. I hope to see more!

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juanrock In reply to cobaltu [2012-08-20 18:43:26 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot, i hope to be doing this stuff for a long time!

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Shishioh In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:15:54 +0000 UTC]

This is a really touching story. The kind I can imagine (and would love to see) in an actual episode! One minor complaint: The font. I know everybody loves to use that FIM font, but it's just not the most legible for reading.

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juanrock In reply to Shishioh [2012-08-16 01:52:00 +0000 UTC]

noted, i actually have a hard time with the fonts, any feedback on what would work best for my style would be highly apreciated

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zaiali In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:13:23 +0000 UTC]

Even after seeing that, Rainbow dash still wanted her money . . .

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ZombieMonkey7 In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:10:33 +0000 UTC]

DAAAAWWW! Something like this comic should really be made for the show

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KoboldCleaver In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:09:52 +0000 UTC]

I love this art style. Subscribing!

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juanrock In reply to KoboldCleaver [2012-08-20 18:40:53 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot!

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kilokk In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:05:23 +0000 UTC]

HNNG! Rarity is best pony!

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kilokk In reply to kilokk [2012-08-15 23:07:58 +0000 UTC]

Wait a second though... Why is the mare in the moon still there? By the time she was the element of generosity Nightmare Moon was already out of the moon @.@

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juanrock In reply to kilokk [2012-08-16 01:50:42 +0000 UTC]

i have no good answer to that, i just like that look for equestria's moon xD

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kilokk In reply to juanrock [2012-08-16 05:59:55 +0000 UTC]

I approve of your logic!


[Kilokk's Seal of Approval]

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Helsaabi In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 23:03:53 +0000 UTC]

Aww that so cute! ^^

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DracoBlair In reply to ??? [2012-08-15 10:41:57 +0000 UTC]

Now to send it to RD

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Pink--Champagne In reply to ??? [2012-08-14 21:58:30 +0000 UTC]

Nice, except she has only been referred to as Miss Rarity in the show. Ms. (Mizz) sounds weird.

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ThatFurryOverThere In reply to Pink--Champagne [2012-08-15 23:35:24 +0000 UTC]

I believe Ms. = Miss, as Mrs. = Misses. Isn't that right?

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CrystallaLattice In reply to ThatFurryOverThere [2012-08-16 02:01:46 +0000 UTC]

Actually, no. Any female can be referred t'as Ms. (miz) as 'tdoes "not depend upon or indicate her marital status" (dictionary.com). Conversely, "Miss" is an unmarried woman, and "Mrs." is a married woman. Oftentimes teachers would refer t'themselves as "Ms." t'create ambiguity (t'keep their marital status a secret), or because they wish t'use their Maiden name.

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ThatFurryOverThere In reply to CrystallaLattice [2012-08-16 05:35:13 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, what about what I said are you disagreeing with? I fail to see any arguments against those stated facts.

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CrystallaLattice In reply to ThatFurryOverThere [2012-08-19 17:41:54 +0000 UTC]

Oh, erm. I'll paraphrase in a format similar t'your question, if that is simpler.

Ms. ≠ Miss, though Mrs. = Misses.
Ms. (pronounced as miz) = either married or unmarried (universal)
Miss = unmarried
Mrs. = married

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