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Published: 2012-03-10 17:43:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 6685; Favourites: 255; Downloads: 20
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Description This pic is half fanfic, half KiddosNightmare Why, you ask? Since she was kind enough to donate some extra brain cells for Brambleclaw :3

It was three days after Leafpool's burial. Lionblaze had offered to help Whitewing when Brambleclaw and Squirrelflight proved to be late. The dead cat was already nicely put in the clearing by the time they returned.
The clan mourned, and as he sat vigil, Brambleclaw's eyes fell on the huddled ginger shape by Leafpool's muzzle. She looked completely broken where she lay, almost awaiting the moment when her sister would wake up and tell her it was a bad dream. But she never did.
If Squirrelflight had been down and depressed before, Brambleclaw couldn't even imagine how she would be now. He didn't really like the thought.
This morning, the deputy was up before dawn, arranging patrols and discussing hunting groups. But this morning, he had something to do, so he didn't bother argue with the slightly grumpy Dustpelt. Much to the older tabby's surprise.
Instead, he sat by in the clearing, gazing around. There, she's up, Brambleclaw thought. Squirrelflight emerged slowly from the den, and instead of bouncing off, slumped down into the sunlight. The deputy kept his amber eyes on her.
Am I really doing this? His gaze flickered across the camp, at all the cats present. What would they think? Oh, to StarClan with their opinions.
Awkwardly, Brambleclaw padded to the redpelted she-cat. She saw him, but her head remained on her paws. "Hi," he began. Squirrelflight's emerald eyes blinked curiously, but she wasn't going to let it show. Stubborn, really.
"I was thinking..." he spotted Mousefur and Purdy, who had been sunning themselves, were now watching them intently. The she-cat in guestion raised her head too. He cleared his throat. I am deputy. I will not embarrass myself.
"...whether you'd like to go hunting with me?" he finished at last.
It looked as if every cat in the clearing expected a hairball, or something of that caliber. Firestar had stopped his paw mid-wash, and Sorreltail, about to exit the nursery, instead stood blocking the way for her curious kits in still surprise. The deputy even imagined he could hear snicker come from the apprentices' den. Great.
The silence stretched on, and Brambleclaw fought the urge to shake the uneasiness from his pelt. Squirrelflight remained staring at him, her jaws parted but mute.
"Um...alright," she finally answered, and glanced nervously at the ground. But he didn't miss how her eyes seemed to light up.
As they were about to leave, Brambleclaw looked up at the sky. Just what am I doing?

Cheers to fluffy kindness :3 It's a disease, I can't help it...

(c) Erin Hunter
art and fanfic: Me
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KittyStorage In reply to ??? [2015-12-11 13:52:39 +0000 UTC]

Ehehehe glad you like'em. xD I had fun drawing those faces~

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CreativeCheetah In reply to KittyStorage [2015-12-11 17:38:16 +0000 UTC]

Well i'm glad yo decided to draw them.

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KittyStorage In reply to CreativeCheetah [2015-12-13 14:29:00 +0000 UTC]

Ehehehe :3

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CreativeCheetah In reply to KittyStorage [2015-12-16 14:57:49 +0000 UTC]

Β 

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KittyStorage In reply to CreativeCheetah [2015-12-16 17:59:51 +0000 UTC]

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Glintfang [2014-12-07 06:30:26 +0000 UTC]

hehe in the desc. don't you mean, 'Oh,Β to the Dark Forest with their opinions'? xD
I do like your writingΒ (and of course your art is fantastic) ^^!
<3

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KittyStorage In reply to Glintfang [2014-12-07 12:35:20 +0000 UTC]

Most likely a typo there alright xD

I'm glad you liked it though, and thanks ^^

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Glintfang In reply to KittyStorage [2014-12-08 09:00:46 +0000 UTC]

xD

sure!

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KittyStorage In reply to Glintfang [2014-12-08 09:25:38 +0000 UTC]

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KalahariMeerkatfan [2014-03-25 20:56:47 +0000 UTC]

I never noticed it, but I love Cherrypaw in this! I love how her coat looks, it easily could be the source of light and shadow, but I think that's how Firekit is and truly...there's not as many light ginger cats, most ginger cats are fairly dark without being listed as that. Do you think Cherrypaw matures a lot as she grows? I like her and Molepaw as kits, but as apprentices...both seem kind of dumb more or less, like they can't really take things serious without exaggerating (like how Cherrypaw said Hollyleaf was a killer), do you think they shapened up a bit after all the stuff?

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KittyStorage In reply to KalahariMeerkatfan [2014-03-25 21:17:35 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, thanks really. Yeah, the idea was to make Cherrypaw somewhere inbetween bright orange and dark sandy yellow, and apparently whatever I managed to make of it worked. And you're right, some of the characters are unnecessarily dark coloured. Not all cats have the same amount of saturation in their fur, there's a reason we have grey cats. I mean, they're only the desaturated version of black.
Not to mention that some of the more recent colour palettes the Erins have chosen is way out there... I for one, have never seen a cat even similar to Kestrelflight, just to say.
Hmmm...maturing you say. Well, they're only young in the last book, and somehow they don't sound too bad. But it's not like they have the smartest of parents, and stuff like that is inherited. Berrynose has never shown signs of outstanding intelligence, and for all her kindness Poppyfrost hasn't either. That could be a factor, but when I think of the Erins as authors, highly unlikely. What I think as a writer is that the Erins wrote them this way in order to emphazise the fact that they're "children" because apprentice translates to child in my opinion. And at the time, they were the only apprentices too, which in turn makes their perks more prominent.
Another thing that could make us react to their rashness of speech, is that we're so used to other main charas. None of the mains in the second series were children, and even if we followed Lionblaze and co. from kittenhood, their story never focused on their state as kittens. It was always "prophecy, blindness, warrior code, drama etc."Β 
But like any other apprentice in training, I do believe that both Cherry and Mole will be growing up nicely. Maybe Cherry won't be rid of her outspoken attitude, but at least she is energetic. And as Brackenfur spawn I cannot imagine them having a cruel bone in them at all.

... Man what a rant.

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KalahariMeerkatfan In reply to KittyStorage [2014-03-25 21:37:49 +0000 UTC]

Well to me there seems to be only a set number of gingers. There's 'normal' ginger (like Starlingwing, Rowanclaw, Flametail), pale ginger (Sandstorm, Goldenflower, Brackenwing) then dark ginger (Squirrelflight, Russetfur, Sharpclaw) and that seems to be all. So it's like all the cats pretty much are the same ginger color except if they have something to mention otherwise. Like Firestar is said to have a flame-colored coat. It would be nice if there was maybe light ginger which kind is how Cherrypaw seems, she is light without being the pale range. I imagined him as being more normal gray then spotted, Redwillow kind of was cool with his ginger and brown coat (I like Newtspeck's black and ginger coat), but really just saying Unknown: ginger she-cat or tom, that doesn't really help. I do like that Seedkit is a very pale one, that's new.

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KittyStorage In reply to KalahariMeerkatfan [2014-03-25 21:50:41 +0000 UTC]

Yes, they have become so darn lazy with their descriptions it's not even funny. For those who seek to perfect their fanart of said cats, it's torture. Not that I would know, of course not... *fake smile*
But three types of ginger is getting old. There are hundreds of different hues in between, like golden(Lionblaze must be feeling lonely), sandy red, peach, apricot, flaxen, orange with a tinge of brown... I should stop now.

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KalahariMeerkatfan In reply to KittyStorage [2014-03-25 21:28:45 +0000 UTC]

a very good speech I would say. I think Berrynose can be smart, but he's just...not arrogant, but he seems to think more in the box and kind is more centered on himself. I don't think we get much of Poppyfrost actually, I think most of it is centered on Cinderpaw and Poppypaw isn't really as mentioned, Poor Honeypaw is just mentioned as always gushing over Berrynose so...Poppyfrost might be smart, but I think she is more mellow. I do get what you mean, most of what we got from Lion, Jay, and Holly's kithood is from flashbacks, like when Squirrelflight said Hollyleaf thought the sky was falling and hide in the nursery (I wonder if Lion and Jay laughed at her). It would of been nice to see that since they were born in unusual circumstances, outside the nursery in the cold and had to make a long journey to the camp...it's epic then most kits get. Maybe Cherrypaw will think a bit before speaking, but maybe she'll end up like Squirrelflight and Sandstorm.

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KittyStorage In reply to KalahariMeerkatfan [2014-03-25 22:06:27 +0000 UTC]

Gee, thank you. I felt that really, this time I had to have taken it too far.Β 
Could be. But sadly, for the last series the Erins have seriously been lacking in developing the characters of those who AREN'T the mains. It's sad, because their input loses much of its value. Instead, we get loads of emoing from Crowfeather, snarks from Jayfeather and general whining from all the others. It doesn't matter that it isn't perhaps over the top; the problem is the fact that others get so little focus we grow tired with those we see most of.Β 
Which is proven when we discover that there really isn't much behind either Poppy or Honey than the tiniest flicker the authors focused on. In this case, gushing over Berrynose, God help us all. Cinder perhaps got the most of it, but she was so obviously important from the start it lost its glow darn fast.Β 
And those flashbacks are sweet. And sadly way too few.Β 
When you think of it as fiction, the way they were born in the snow and had a difficult start could have been more pronounced. I, on the other hand, wish it could have been handled otherwise. Newborn kittens tend not to survive in the cold like that. I've seen two-week olds die in a shed due to heat loss, even if I gave them my mittens (it pains me to this day that I was a young child and couldn't help them more. They were the neighbours' kittens, and those shitheads couldn't have cared the least) so if we look at it realistically, it's impossible.Β 
Heh, having Cherry as a new Sandstorm wouldn't bother me the least. On the opposite, I would be ΓΌber-happy! Β 

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Tamayako [2014-01-02 00:28:06 +0000 UTC]

They're all just like, "Wuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut...?"

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KittyStorage In reply to Tamayako [2014-01-02 00:39:20 +0000 UTC]

Exactly.

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Tamayako In reply to KittyStorage [2014-01-02 00:56:36 +0000 UTC]

LOL, why? I've read the part with... the badger and Leaf, but I'm kind of lost...

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KittyStorage In reply to Tamayako [2014-01-02 01:24:53 +0000 UTC]

Well, this should pick up some time after Leaf's been killed. Squirrel's down in the dumps, she and Bramble still have a rocky relationship, and he's too kind to simply watch her rot away in sorrow this time around. When he makes that move it comes as quite the shock on them all, Squirrel included. I hope I'm not too confusing.Β 

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Tamayako In reply to KittyStorage [2014-01-02 01:34:50 +0000 UTC]

It's OK, I understand a little more now.

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KittyStorage In reply to Tamayako [2014-01-02 10:38:02 +0000 UTC]

^^

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azurakittyartist [2013-09-30 19:13:41 +0000 UTC]

i hate you two brambleclaw and squirrelflight

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KittyStorage In reply to azurakittyartist [2013-09-30 19:46:14 +0000 UTC]

Good. I happen to like them.

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TheNervousMedic [2013-05-19 19:01:36 +0000 UTC]

akwaaaaaaard

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KittyStorage In reply to TheNervousMedic [2013-05-20 19:32:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeeeep

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TheNervousMedic In reply to KittyStorage [2013-05-21 14:40:48 +0000 UTC]

lol

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KyraStrong [2013-02-02 19:58:00 +0000 UTC]

lol firestar is watching XD

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KittyStorage In reply to KyraStrong [2013-02-02 22:35:46 +0000 UTC]

He sure is XP

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BxSandTxDfAVOURITES [2012-09-29 09:59:36 +0000 UTC]

everyone is watching how funny

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KittyStorage In reply to BxSandTxDfAVOURITES [2012-09-29 11:03:33 +0000 UTC]

hehe

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RavensSongOfLove [2012-06-28 01:54:44 +0000 UTC]

Qhy isn't brambleclaw, bramblestar? When does this take place?

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KittyStorage In reply to RavensSongOfLove [2012-06-28 11:19:45 +0000 UTC]

This picture is only a fanart, and set before I read the forgotten warrior ^^

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RavensSongOfLove In reply to RavensSongOfLove [2012-06-28 01:56:27 +0000 UTC]

oh wait, nvm.

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DemonHeartXX [2012-04-29 22:21:54 +0000 UTC]

Lol. Other cats: WTF?!!?

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KittyStorage In reply to DemonHeartXX [2012-04-30 05:54:05 +0000 UTC]

Yes XD

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Jayfeathe-r [2012-04-18 09:23:24 +0000 UTC]

bahahaa~ I love how shocked everyone is~!! Great pic + great fic = happy reader

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KittyStorage In reply to Jayfeathe-r [2012-04-18 11:36:01 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ^^ I'm really glad~

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Jayfeathe-r In reply to KittyStorage [2012-04-18 11:45:41 +0000 UTC]

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Twillytherainbowwolf [2012-04-17 12:14:49 +0000 UTC]

omg i wanna read more BUT I CANT!!! im sad now...sad face

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KittyStorage In reply to Twillytherainbowwolf [2012-04-17 13:53:21 +0000 UTC]

Poor thingy Here, I'll give ya a hug

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Twillytherainbowwolf In reply to KittyStorage [2012-04-17 20:42:14 +0000 UTC]

Im not a thingy but ya know ty i like hugs :Hug: or i think thats how u do it lawl i did it wrong

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KittyStorage In reply to Twillytherainbowwolf [2012-04-18 07:01:39 +0000 UTC]

Haha, is just fine

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Darkpaw-Lights [2012-04-14 05:03:44 +0000 UTC]

wait leafpool dies how???

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KittyStorage In reply to Darkpaw-Lights [2012-04-14 10:53:21 +0000 UTC]

This is just my fanfic, rest assured ^^

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Fireflower112 [2012-04-07 04:42:37 +0000 UTC]

Brambleclaw's face is so kind here~ <3

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KittyStorage In reply to Fireflower112 [2012-04-07 10:59:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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Fireflower112 In reply to KittyStorage [2012-04-08 04:53:36 +0000 UTC]

No problem~

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Swiftfeatherz [2012-04-05 11:32:37 +0000 UTC]

YOU KILLED LEAFPOOL? D;

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KittyStorage In reply to Swiftfeatherz [2012-04-05 11:39:33 +0000 UTC]

hehe, that I did ^^
Sorry, I had to in order for the story to work...

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Drink-Your-Milk-Kids [2012-03-11 13:34:48 +0000 UTC]

Lol Firestar and Sorreltail's expressions. It's almost like they're thinking: "What the hell is going on here?"

I adore BramblexSquirrel, I wish something like this would happen in the books. I'd love to see them get back together, but that's probably not going to happen :C

Love your fanfic BTW.

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