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Description Creating an Original Creepypasta OC for Dummies

So, you’ve probably seen all the awesome OCs floating around on DA. You may have heard that creepypasta OCs are hard to create. That’s not true at all, and I’ll show you why in a bit. Or maybe you received criticism for an earlier OC of yours. Well, even if your character is in fact poorly designed, all legitimate art is still art. So while you shouldn’t ignore constructive criticism, you shouldn’t listen to the haters. I’ve noticed most of those people don’t even do art at all and just troll the forums and insult shippings that aren’t their personal favourites. What losers, eh?

Which in a way brings me to my first point which is more about how to avoid criticism: don’t ship your character with an existing pasta unless you have permission. The original creator probably wouldn’t approve if they knew, and it’s just bad form. Nothing brings the critics out like making your super kawaii OC into Jeff the Killer’s girlfriend, and frankly I can see why. Besides, if you’re so set on romance why not just ship them with another OC of yours? That way no one’s going to get pissed off about the pairing, and if they do you can tell them to shut up because you’re their parent and they only date who you want.

Now, like every good story, every good OC needs a theme. What’s their motivation? Their background? Why do they do the things they do? And please give a better answer than something like “They went crazy, killed their family, and became a proxy”. To give example questions, why did they go crazy? Was their family abusive? Is that why killed them? How’d they become a proxy? Why exactly did Slenderman spare them? Did they have a talent he could use?

I find it helps to write a character profile/mini biography about a page long on size eleven type. Here's a sample one I made for one of my characters: shacklesoul.deviantart.com/art… . This will help give them a unique personality and flavour to set them apart from all those boring, generic creepypasta OCs out there. I can’t help you come up with their personality nor should I, but this is the fun part anyway. Don’t just ask yourself what sort of things they like and dislike. Rather, why do they like or dislike those things? How was their childhood? How do they usually interact with the world when it doesn’t involve killing? These are all just sample questions, I’m sure you will think of many more.

On the subject of your character’s backstory, please, treat dark subjects like rape and incest with respect. It is both disrespectful and ignorant to make them into some throwaway little feature. Not only does adding “And they were raped” really add nothing, it turns something which is incredibly dark into an unimportant detail. If you have to use these subjects, remember, use them as an important subject of horror and revulsion to make your character more tragic, not a teensy footnote. Believe me, if sexual abuse is treated as though it is just another detail it feels tacked-on and makes you as the author seem both uncaring and unimaginative.

Now that we’ve got that out of the way, we’re onto an aspect you probably already have in your head: physical appearance. What they look like, in other words. Let your imagination run wild; remember, this is horror so anything scary is possible. If you’re really having trouble thinking of something that hasn’t been done before, come up with a list of interesting details and then pick and choose ones which work well together until you have your character. As for drawing them, well, I’m more of a writer so you could probably teach me more in that area!

One last little thing about appearances. MASKS. F*&%ING MASKS. Why does every pasta have to have a mask now?! Okay, two of my OCs have masks but they’re at least original masks, not knockoffs of Eyeless Jack’s that were probably made in China! Seriously. Why masks? Sorry, it’s just a real pet peeve of mine. Masks aren’t bad, they’re just a little overdone so if you give your OC a mask, make it a damn good mask.

And that’s pretty much all I know. OCs are a lot of fun, and remember, no one’s OCs are perfect in the rough draft but just keep refining it and you’ll get better. Listen to the good advice you get, ignore the haters, and most of all be creative!
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Lilademon [2021-04-01 12:12:13 +0000 UTC]

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adeerwithnotlogic [2021-01-01 00:28:04 +0000 UTC]

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MzMarionette01 [2020-08-25 00:56:50 +0000 UTC]

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discord79 [2019-10-12 11:37:25 +0000 UTC]

what about saa 20 year old un dead /ghost   of a mafia boss

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Tinkerchu [2019-05-30 22:09:11 +0000 UTC]

hi! i just recently (like two days go) got into creepy pasta and already want to make an oc. I have this idea that I came up with myself but may be used. I was looking at the web to find out how to make that idea pop into action and came across this amazing thing here! thanks for making this!

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Danze-e [2018-02-27 07:58:15 +0000 UTC]

Hello! Sorry for bothering. I want to ask, do you mind to review my ocs? I want to make sure they are not op and mary sue/ Gary stu.

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beckyLaLax3 [2018-01-26 00:22:15 +0000 UTC]

Is there possibly a way you can give ideas for the storyline?
Like, making a creepypasta comes with stories by default, there's a reason behind going crazy and becoming what they become. is there a possibility you can list a few ideas for backgrounds?
Maybe write the story for your oc, if you have one.

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YNOPPLHR [2017-08-29 16:44:12 +0000 UTC]

This inspired me to make a new oc, named Dr. Julia May Welsh. She was a brain surgeon who was overstressed at work, but loved it. That job was her life and it seemed as if nothing else mattered. But she became over stressed to the point she thought that it wasn't anyone else's fault but hers. She became obsessed with the human brain and did so much research and over-worked so hard she had actually figured out how the human brain worked. And that's something that nobody knows. Shortly after she was let go from her job since she was a bit weird, always seemed extremely tired and was bothering her co-workers since she was yelling at them and annoying them when they did something wrong. After she'd been let go from that, with nothing but a worthless fast food job, came not only obsessed with the brain but obsessed with the idea of leading to control it. After a few more years of obsession, research, experimenting and overall hell she figured it out. She then used that to convince others to do things for her, very easily. It was practically mind control. She convinced her old boss to cheat on his wife, her ex-boyfriend to do graffiti and get arrested and even convinced some old co-workers to jump off a 12 story building. After one of them did the last time she dragged his body into the forest. Slender man watched as she did so, since he planned on killing her. After she found a good hole to hide the guy and buried him, she saw slender out of the corner of her eye. Not knowing what the hell he is, she tried to do her mind controlling stuff on him. It almost worked, which surprised the large creature since he does have telekinesis. It didn't fully work because slender is humanoid, not fully human. He decided to kidnap her and take her back to the mansion in which she became a proxy. After that she did Slender's chores, whatever he told her to, and all that. You'd probably guess, and I don't like going into detail on what slender asks. I was wondering if this was a decent back story of kinda Mary Sue-ish? 

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TannythePheonix [2017-07-20 07:23:45 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I'm currently Creating a 'good' If you can say oc

So her name is Betty Bullet
Her age is around 22
So when she was little, She looked at very old bandit movies, that is why she became in love with guns, When she was older,Middle school and Highschool, She went through lots of Bullying for her tomboy features, her love for guns and bandits, when she was older, she inspired herself to become an actor, though was rejected in any upcoming movie auditions, She went out for deer hunting one night, She knew other Hunters were around the are, so she looked for a forest that looked Hunter free, she walked into the dark forest, it had been a few hours and nothing, guessing no deer's were in the area, she lowered her gun and started to walk out, a bright red point suddenly aimed at her chest, her eyes widened as she heard a bang luckily, the bullet missed her chest, but hit her stomach, the presumed hunter saw she wasn't dead, and started shooting again, shot her in her hip and arm, she collapsed on the floor, and crawled somewhere, far in the forest, she used her bandana to cover most of her wounds, Continued to crawl until she passed out , a few days later, Slender found her and took her back to the Slender Mansion, Giving mercy to the dying hunter, a few days later she woke up, She had been, modified?, the corners of her mouths were stitched, but she could still open her mouth widely, She grabbed her gun, she was determined to find the Hunter that wounded her, and she'll kill them, and everyone they care about, She walked out of the room she was kept in, Her bandana covering her mouth, boots hitting the wooden floor of the mansion, that day, she joined Slender, Slender kept her cause she has aim, an eagle's eye, perfect for killing, Now she looks for the Hunters bloodline, ready to murder anyone in her way, revenge the only thing on her mind

//I hope it was ok :^

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xXFantasmiaXx [2017-06-21 03:00:21 +0000 UTC]

I feel you with the masks, this is old, but tbh I love fucking masks, if only they were easier to make. 

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TheBlueUmbreonComics [2017-05-17 02:54:26 +0000 UTC]

Is my new OC too Mary-Sue? She isn't very developed yet, but I have the basic idea.

Basically, she finds people who purposely break hearts, and transforms into their ideal vision of beauty. She charms them, leads them away, then steals their souls and encases their heart in ice, leaving them wandering this earth forever as ghosts, unnoticed and unable to ever feel love.

Her real form will resemble an older teen girl, appearing around 19, with silver eyes, white hair, and pale skin. Basically, she is actually a "blank slate" under her apparent beauty.

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KomradApex In reply to TheBlueUmbreonComics [2017-05-17 10:10:53 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like an okay idea to me. I don't think the basic idea is Sue-ish.

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TheBlueUmbreonComics In reply to KomradApex [2017-05-20 04:16:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the feedback! I REALLY try not to make Mary-Sues.

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TheBlueUmbreonComics In reply to TheBlueUmbreonComics [2017-05-17 03:02:00 +0000 UTC]

Her name will be Amara Dillon, which basically means "Love destroyed eternally"

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AOS1981 [2017-04-16 12:39:30 +0000 UTC]

Yeah Im pretty sure it's difficult to create a decent CP OC

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dragonflame43243 [2017-04-03 17:32:54 +0000 UTC]

Um, Hi... Sorry for bothering you again....

But I did a lot of work on my OC and wanted some help if you can... Please... You don't have to if you don't want to... I'd understand...

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KomradApex In reply to dragonflame43243 [2017-04-03 18:21:13 +0000 UTC]

What do you want to know?

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dragonflame43243 In reply to KomradApex [2017-04-03 18:50:33 +0000 UTC]

Um, so, I need help on a name... If it isn't to much trouble...

Her real name is Twila Hunter and she's somewhat related to wolves...

Twila sounds like Twilight so I was thinking something involving Twilight or wolves or both...

I don't know why, but I cant think of a good name...
 

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KomradApex In reply to dragonflame43243 [2017-04-03 20:11:35 +0000 UTC]

How about Moonlight, since it evokes both twilight and wolves?

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dragonflame43243 In reply to KomradApex [2017-04-03 20:12:35 +0000 UTC]

Ok, thank you again...

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KomradApex In reply to dragonflame43243 [2017-04-03 20:13:25 +0000 UTC]

Above all, though, just choose whatever name you like best.

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dragonflame43243 [2017-03-31 12:36:53 +0000 UTC]

Um, can you please help me? (it's ok if you can't)

I don't know how to make good stories (I don't write stories, but I want to write a creepypasta) and I just wanted to ask if this was ok or if there's anything I should change...

My OC is still in early development, she was an OC I made a while ago and I couldn't make a backstory by myself and I couldn't find anyone who could help me... I'm also updating her design...

This is what I got so far...

- Her parents are kind and actually act like parents! (I always see the parents are abusive, so I changed it)

- She was 17 when she became a creepypasta and is 20 currently)

- Her weapon is a hammer

- She had a younger sister (She was the only person, other than her parents, who she would talk to)

- She's a proxy

- Slender man made her a proxy because she's obedient, loyal, smart and fast (if they try to run away she can catch them)

- She was stalked by Slender man for years

- She's afraid of Slender man

- Her dad is a carpenter (that's how she got the hammer)

- Slender man is/had driving/driven her insane

- She has social anxiety

- She's allergic to pollen (kinda unimportant, but I wanted to add it)

- Her motive is that her parents and sister were murdered when she was not home, she thinks that she can find who did it with Slender mans help and if it doesn't work, she will try to find them on her own (Slender man uses that belief to get her to stay with him, and he will kill her if she tries to leave)

Also, is a hoodie to cliché?  A hoodie would be good for hiding their identity, it would work better with a mask, but is that bad? And is Shadow a good name?

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KomradApex In reply to dragonflame43243 [2017-03-31 12:38:55 +0000 UTC]

This sounds pretty good so far, although Shadow is a pretty overused name so you might want to change that.
Also, if you want to know how to improve your writing skills, just keep practicing. That's the only way to improve. It's slow, but it works. My writing used to be terrible, but because I wrote constantly I think it's pretty good now. :3

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dragonflame43243 In reply to KomradApex [2017-04-01 04:06:19 +0000 UTC]

Um, I have another question...

I redesigned her and wanted to know if it is ok... -----> Wip

I tried to make the mask as original as I could, it's suppose to look like a wolf, but it kinda looks like a raccoon to me...

I don't know if someone already has a wolf mask... If someone does, then is it ok if I make it another animal mask?

I most likely will update it again soon, this was a quick design...

And if it's ok, can you maybe help with a name? I was thinking something to do with hunting or wolfs... or if I change it, another animal...

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KomradApex In reply to dragonflame43243 [2017-04-01 11:42:01 +0000 UTC]

An animal mask could work. Don't worry if it's been done before, since it probably has. Just focus on making the mask look original.
If you wanted a hunting-related name, how about Trapper, after the old profession?

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dragonflame43243 In reply to KomradApex [2017-04-01 12:33:37 +0000 UTC]

I'm still working on the design and didn't add very many details, but an animal mask is something I'd like her to have...

Trapper might be good, but she doesn't really trap them or use traps (she might, but I didn't add that)... she hunts them down and kills them, kinda like an animal hunting their pray, but with a hammer...

I don't know if that makes sense...

Also, if it isn't to much trouble, I added some more info...

Name: To be added
Real Name: To be added
Nicknames: To be added
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Race: Asian (Thailand specifically)
Species: Human
Personality: Paranoid, resourceful, quiet, keeps to herself, observant, loyal, clever
Date Of Birth: August 12
Weight: 157 lbs.
Height: 5'9
Eye Color: Dark brown
Skin Color: Tan
Hair Color: Black
Fears: Slender man, never finding who killed her family
Weapons: Hammer
How She kills in Combat: blunt force trauma/Bashing their heads in
Weaknesses: Sharp weapons, fire
Strengths: Finding solutions to problems, hunting, quick learner, fast runner
History: Her parents and sister were killed when she wasn't home, she went to Slender man's woods with her sister when she was 14 because they heard stories about it being where Slender man lives (they went to investigate the woods to see if they could find him) and he stalked her ever since (because when they were there, she showed that she was fast, clever and observant. He saw potential in her)
Notes:  She's one of Slender man's proxies, She wants to find and kill whoever killed her family, she has social anxiety

Is this ok? I'm still working on it... also, this is an edited version of InvaderIka information sheet...

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KomradApex In reply to dragonflame43243 [2017-04-01 12:36:15 +0000 UTC]

Don't focus entirely on asking other people if your OC is okay, including me. Focus primarily on making an OC you want to enjoy.

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dragonflame43243 In reply to KomradApex [2017-04-01 12:44:42 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry if I bothered you...

I just don't know if its good...

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KomradApex In reply to dragonflame43243 [2017-04-01 12:47:43 +0000 UTC]

No, you're not bothering me. I just wouldn't even worry about whether it's "good" at this point. Just start off by making a character you like, and then you can focus on making them a character that other people like too.

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dragonflame43243 In reply to KomradApex [2017-04-01 12:51:17 +0000 UTC]

Ok... I can do that...

Thanks for helping me by the way...

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KomradApex In reply to dragonflame43243 [2017-04-01 12:58:49 +0000 UTC]

No problem. Best of luck!

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dragonflame43243 In reply to KomradApex [2017-03-31 23:09:55 +0000 UTC]

Ok, thank you ^^

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Cookie-Crumbz [2017-03-01 00:34:11 +0000 UTC]

I have an OC and already got the name and design and everything, but I'm having trouble writing my character's overall story. The first couple of times (more like 5 & up), I made bullet points, wrote stuff and major points about the OC's story (I'm a good writer and my L.A. teacher praises me on being creative), but it didn't sound good enough. Just in January I had a decent story, but then, I didn't save it... Yeah, a whole bucket of negativity and irritation washed over me. So I didn't bother starting anything about my OC (a break ). So now I'M wondering if you can give me some tips. I've got the points now, but it's just the matter of "putting" it all together. And when I decide to DO it, I just stare blankly at my computer screen. Last story (the one that got deleted/not saved) I just added bit by bit, though now, I'm kind of impatient and want the story to get done quick. I'm an artist too, so I know that time is key, with rereading and bits of editing along the way. Got any tips?... (hopefully).

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KomradApex In reply to Cookie-Crumbz [2017-03-01 11:39:27 +0000 UTC]

You're doing everything right. It sounds to me like a classic case of writer's block. What I do when I can't focus on a long-term/major story is write a simple vignette or short story with the same character. I find it's simpler than trying to tackle the long-term project I have in mind, and it helps to get my brain into the mood for writing with that particular OC.

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Cookie-Crumbz In reply to KomradApex [2017-03-01 23:57:42 +0000 UTC]

Ok, thanks! I'll try it

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UniPotatoe101 [2017-02-28 06:17:29 +0000 UTC]

May I ask a question?
What if they had powers?

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KomradApex In reply to UniPotatoe101 [2017-02-28 13:42:59 +0000 UTC]

A lot of creepypasta OCs have powers of some variety. Just don't make them overpowered, or give them some sort of power which doesn't make sense with their backstory or theme.

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UniPotatoe101 In reply to KomradApex [2017-02-28 14:54:40 +0000 UTC]

Ah! Thanks!

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YayGal [2017-02-26 15:03:29 +0000 UTC]

This really helped me! Thanks!
Could you have a look at my Creepypasta OC and maybe give some feedback?

yaygal.deviantart.com/journal/…

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KomradApex In reply to YayGal [2017-02-27 12:20:27 +0000 UTC]

I took a look at her, and while I saw some areas that need fine-tuning, overall I was impressed! I particularly liked her story. She's very good for a first attempt. Keep writing for her and refining her, cause I think you have a natural talent for this. :3

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KomradApex In reply to YayGal [2017-02-26 22:32:56 +0000 UTC]

Sure, but I'll prefer to do it tomorrow. I've had maybe fifteen hours sleep in the past four days and I'm feeling really unwell ATM.

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creepypesto [2017-02-14 23:32:51 +0000 UTC]

a thing about masks: most proxies have something going on with thier face. toby has a mouthguard, cursor has tape over her eyes, kate has a mask, even firebrand has a weird anime glasses shine. masks are good for proxies, but hard to be original.

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KomradApex In reply to creepypesto [2017-02-15 00:28:24 +0000 UTC]

I agree. I love masks, personally, but too many are either mono-colored slates or a copy of another design.

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spilt-apple-juice [2016-10-22 15:33:06 +0000 UTC]

I justwant too know if there is any other CreepyPasta that is possessed by a ghost because I really want my OC, Wolf Cry, too not be like any other CreepyPasta.

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KomradApex In reply to spilt-apple-juice [2016-10-22 15:41:15 +0000 UTC]

There probably are, but don't let that stop you if it's the character you feel like making.

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spilt-apple-juice In reply to KomradApex [2016-11-06 23:52:01 +0000 UTC]

Mkay thanks!

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CURI0USC0LLIN [2016-10-10 21:40:22 +0000 UTC]

Whats A Good Creepypasta name? thats where im getting stuck on

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KomradApex In reply to CURI0USC0LLIN [2016-10-10 21:59:43 +0000 UTC]

It really depends on the character or story in question.

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CURI0USC0LLIN In reply to KomradApex [2016-10-10 22:01:06 +0000 UTC]

I Want A Creative  Name Like Laughing Jack like anything like that. Only Random Names Pop To Mind. Im Writing My First Creepypasta and I Think She Would Become Insane and stuff like dat :>

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KomradApex In reply to CURI0USC0LLIN [2016-10-10 22:10:09 +0000 UTC]

If you want something truly creative that you can be proud of, I'm afraid you'll have to think of it yourself. After all, if they became popular and people liked a name that I suggested, they'd be attracted to my writing as opposed to yours, and I assume you don't want that.

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