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Creating an Original Creepypasta OC for DummiesSo, you’ve probably seen all the awesome OCs floating around on DA. You may have heard that creepypasta OCs are hard to create. That’s not true at all, and I’ll show you why in a bit. Or maybe you received criticism for an earlier OC of yours. Well, even if your character is in fact poorly designed, all legitimate art is still art. So while you shouldn’t ignore constructive criticism, you shouldn’t listen to the haters. I’ve noticed most of those people don’t even do art at all and just troll the forums and insult shippings that aren’t their personal favourites. What losers, eh?
Which in a way brings me to my first point which is more about how to avoid criticism: don’t ship your character with an existing pasta unless you have permission. The original creator probably wouldn’t approve if they knew, and it’s just bad form. Nothing brings the critics out like making your super kawaii OC into Jeff the Killer’s girlfriend, and frankly I can see why. Besides, if you’re so set on romance why not just ship them with another OC of yours? That way no one’s going to get pissed off about the pairing, and if they do you can tell them to shut up because you’re their parent and they only date who you want.
Now, like every good story, every good OC needs a theme. What’s their motivation? Their background? Why do they do the things they do? And please give a better answer than something like “They went crazy, killed their family, and became a proxy”. To give example questions, why did they go crazy? Was their family abusive? Is that why killed them? How’d they become a proxy? Why exactly did Slenderman spare them? Did they have a talent he could use?
I find it helps to write a character profile/mini biography about a page long on size eleven type. Here's a sample one I made for one of my characters: shacklesoul.deviantart.com/art… . This will help give them a unique personality and flavour to set them apart from all those boring, generic creepypasta OCs out there. I can’t help you come up with their personality nor should I, but this is the fun part anyway. Don’t just ask yourself what sort of things they like and dislike. Rather, why do they like or dislike those things? How was their childhood? How do they usually interact with the world when it doesn’t involve killing? These are all just sample questions, I’m sure you will think of many more.
On the subject of your character’s backstory, please, treat dark subjects like rape and incest with respect. It is both disrespectful and ignorant to make them into some throwaway little feature. Not only does adding “And they were raped” really add nothing, it turns something which is incredibly dark into an unimportant detail. If you have to use these subjects, remember, use them as an important subject of horror and revulsion to make your character more tragic, not a teensy footnote. Believe me, if sexual abuse is treated as though it is just another detail it feels tacked-on and makes you as the author seem both uncaring and unimaginative.
Now that we’ve got that out of the way, we’re onto an aspect you probably already have in your head: physical appearance. What they look like, in other words. Let your imagination run wild; remember, this is horror so anything scary is possible. If you’re really having trouble thinking of something that hasn’t been done before, come up with a list of interesting details and then pick and choose ones which work well together until you have your character. As for drawing them, well, I’m more of a writer so you could probably teach me more in that area!
One last little thing about appearances. MASKS. F*&%ING MASKS. Why does every pasta have to have a mask now?! Okay, two of my OCs have masks but they’re at least original masks, not knockoffs of Eyeless Jack’s that were probably made in China! Seriously. Why masks? Sorry, it’s just a real pet peeve of mine. Masks aren’t bad, they’re just a little overdone so if you give your OC a mask, make it a damn good mask.
And that’s pretty much all I know. OCs are a lot of fun, and remember, no one’s OCs are perfect in the rough draft but just keep refining it and you’ll get better. Listen to the good advice you get, ignore the haters, and most of all be creative!
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CURI0USC0LLIN In reply to ??? [2016-10-10 22:10:54 +0000 UTC]
i have like no names. so i think ill just make a random name like jill or something
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KomradApex In reply to CURI0USC0LLIN [2016-10-10 22:15:44 +0000 UTC]
Sometimes an ordinary name can work best anyway.
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CURI0USC0LLIN In reply to KomradApex [2016-10-10 22:22:02 +0000 UTC]
yea i already have a name for her
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KomradApex In reply to CURI0USC0LLIN [2016-10-11 01:10:29 +0000 UTC]
Good to hear. Best of luck!
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B4bz13 [2016-08-16 19:17:57 +0000 UTC]
I have a question :'u
Is it good if I make a Creepypasta (idk if make her a creepypasta or just a serial killer relative to Creepypastas and Horror movies)
who kills for the sake of others?
(Like: Some dude kills for fun and without reason, someone informs her about him and she chase him) She's like a cop, but more violent xD
/Sorry for my bad English\
~Also her nickname is Hevn = Revenge~
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IVE3 In reply to B4bz13 [2016-12-12 18:31:31 +0000 UTC]
Ey! R u Norwegian? Cuz hevn means revenge in norwegian, and yeah... Or maybe Danish, idk.
Im just wonderin cuz i am Norwegian and it would be cool if i've finally get to meet another Norwegian here on Deviantart, hehehhhh..
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KomradApex In reply to B4bz13 [2016-08-16 19:26:23 +0000 UTC]
She kills for the sake of others? As in, on the behalf of others?
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B4bz13 In reply to KomradApex [2016-08-16 19:55:25 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, something like that! I was thinking about it in the last few months.
But still I'm not sure about that ;_;
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KomradApex In reply to B4bz13 [2016-08-16 19:56:35 +0000 UTC]
There's nothing wrong with it in principle. It could be creepy if the person they're killing for doesn't realize your OC is murdering people on their behalf.
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B4bz13 In reply to KomradApex [2016-08-16 20:08:54 +0000 UTC]
That could work, thanks for the advice!
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HakinaManga In reply to ??? [2016-08-11 09:51:55 +0000 UTC]
Thanks ! It will help me, i'm going to write something for my OC drawing. (-* 3*)-
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f-u-t-e-flowering [2016-07-13 00:51:50 +0000 UTC]
Can you look at mine please?
f-u-t-e-flowering.deviantart.c…
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KomradApex In reply to f-u-t-e-flowering [2016-07-13 11:56:45 +0000 UTC]
I like him! Although I notice a tiny historical inaccuracy, in that Canada wasn't colonized until the 1600s.
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f-u-t-e-flowering In reply to KomradApex [2016-07-13 12:03:31 +0000 UTC]
Okay thank you. Can I have a source on that please?
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KomradApex In reply to f-u-t-e-flowering [2016-07-14 10:36:43 +0000 UTC]
I just used wikipedia. There was some colonization in the mid-1500s, but it was very sparse:
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/History_…
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TheBoredAsHell In reply to ??? [2016-06-25 11:37:59 +0000 UTC]
If it's not too late would you mind giving a look at this and see if I need to change anything?
theboredashell.deviantart.com/…
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herotime98 [2016-06-24 04:38:09 +0000 UTC]
I have this OC, I need a name, and I'd love if you'd critique it.
Here:
herotime98.deviantart.com/jour…
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KomradApex In reply to herotime98 [2016-06-24 10:10:23 +0000 UTC]
I just took a look at them. :3
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Chesshire-Code In reply to ??? [2016-06-13 04:42:06 +0000 UTC]
Hey, I've got a Concept for a new Creepypasta OC but I don't really know what to do with her. I'm only looking for what you think would be a better direction to go with her, because I'm sadly stuck in whether I want her to be more of a crazy-stalker-human or a hungry-crazy-stalker-monster-shapeshifter-demon-thing... So yeah.. And I know you get questions like this all the time so I'm really sorry.
I had this idea while listening to the song "Copycat" by Megpoid Gumi, it's a really good song, looking back now though I'm beginning to wonder how my mind spawned this from listening to it...
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CP Name: Changeling
Aliases: Copycat, The Collector, Substitute
Way She Kills: She obsessively "observes" (stalks) her prey, learning every little thing she can about her victims personal preferences in a romantic partner, from watching his current relationship to finding absolutely everything she can about his past relationships and all his female friends as well as any female in his life. After physically and mentally molding herself to his tastes she then worms her way into his life as the "perfect partner" until he becomes either completely infatuated or terrified of her.
And then it could go two totally different directions depending upon the species I end up choosing... So I'm really stuck...
Option 1 (Human): She kidnaps him, kills him, carefully preserves the body, eats his heart, and keeps him with her other "dolls" in a secure place.
Option 2 (Shapeshifter-Demon-Thing): She keeps up the ruse until she has his complete love and trust, feeding off of those emotions like a leech, slowly but surely tearing him away from his life and those he cares about until they all just stop caring or break contact with him making it easier for her to drag him into the darkness and go after whatever is left of him.
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KomradApex In reply to Chesshire-Code [2016-06-13 10:23:51 +0000 UTC]
First off, this is a great concept. I think she would work even better as a human, because it would sound like the sort of thing that could conceivably be real. Realism adds a lot to the scare factor. For instance, I realize this example is slightly different but it illustrates my point: Ted Bundy was a real-life serial killer who was married throughout much of his "career", and his wife never had a clue what he was doing. Basically what I'm saying is, it's always terrifying to think our romantic partner might have some dark secret.
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Chesshire-Code In reply to KomradApex [2016-06-13 10:38:32 +0000 UTC]
Alright, thank you so much!! And I think you're right, while it would be interesting to have another monster under my belt, realism does add to the scare factor a bit more.
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Chesshire-Code In reply to KomradApex [2016-06-13 12:50:39 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!! I'll give you a link to her when des finished so you can see how she turned out!!
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KomradApex In reply to Chesshire-Code [2016-06-13 18:11:41 +0000 UTC]
I look forward to it. :3
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pastelpunkprincess In reply to ??? [2016-04-22 21:48:53 +0000 UTC]
Hey, can you give me some feed back on my oc? It would be a big help ( www.quotev.com/pastelhomo/jour… )
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KomradApex In reply to pastelpunkprincess [2016-04-22 22:43:41 +0000 UTC]
The link just goes to your quotev account. Could you give me a link to the story itself?
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pastelpunkprincess In reply to KomradApex [2016-04-22 23:04:07 +0000 UTC]
www.quotev.com/pastelhomo/jour…
It's a journal entry and I had it on private because I wanted to get some art first.
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KomradApex In reply to pastelpunkprincess [2016-04-22 23:16:02 +0000 UTC]
She's pretty good. Not perfect, but better than many I've seen. If I were you I'd set about writing some stories for her now.
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pastelpunkprincess In reply to KomradApex [2016-04-23 00:14:22 +0000 UTC]
Is there anything specifically I could improve?
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KomradApex In reply to pastelpunkprincess [2016-04-23 11:26:13 +0000 UTC]
That's a tough one. Maybe making her a little more genuinely wary/hurt, and less angsty?
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pastelpunkprincess In reply to KomradApex [2016-04-22 23:00:39 +0000 UTC]
www.quotev.com/pastelhomo/jour…
it's a journal entry and here it is
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KomradApex In reply to RebornRenewed [2016-04-22 22:42:39 +0000 UTC]
They're somewhat overdone, just like masks. However, if the character themselves is good, it wouldn't really matter.
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MinaraBear In reply to ??? [2016-04-19 00:19:42 +0000 UTC]
Can you help me a little with a OC?
Name: Doesn't have one yet
Species: Monster/demon/???
Appearance: Usually shows like a half-humanoid creature, with a dog-like head and a (goat?) cranium on it, covering the upper half. Constantly smiling, they have very sharp teeth and a big mouth (Yeah, this sounds like smile.jpg). The upper half of their body resembles a dog, and the rest is like a big, furry tail with orange markings on it.
They can also show on different forms, depending on their victim (If it's a child -RARE-, they can look more like a dog, a cat, or whatever they like), but the cranium stays. And, yes, that also applies if they take a human form (RARE)
Powers: changing form, capable of not being visible to anybody except their victim, telekinesis, modify the appearance of their surroundings, probably can instakill a human if they want to (But it's boring to them so, nah)
Metod of killing: Inducing suicide or psycho instincts, doesn't kill directly.
Background: Who knows how this monster was created, probably they came from the depths of hell because they were bored. Maybe somebody wanted to invocate someone, and they appeared because that person wasn't good summoning. The thing is, they decided to stay in the human world and... have fun. And yes, that means death.
Weaknesses: For some reason they don't like to harm children. Doesn't use their full power never, they don't find it funny. Also, doesn't kills direcly unless they need to (practically never).
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KomradApex In reply to MinaraBear [2016-04-19 11:28:57 +0000 UTC]
They have potential, but I'd focus on their backstory. As of now it's pretty vague, almost noncommittal.
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MinaraBear In reply to KomradApex [2016-04-19 15:13:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
Actually, it isn't so detailed because I didn't know how to make a background for a monster/demon.
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KomradApex In reply to MinaraBear [2016-04-19 16:01:25 +0000 UTC]
I suggest tossing some ideas out to a few friends and seeing what they think.
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OnionFairy99 [2016-02-03 18:49:07 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry to bother, but I have a problem. I have an OC that came back to life (undead), but someone pointed out that I need a reason for them to come back. And I feel bad cause I'm stuck. Do you have any ideas or just tips on creating a reason? I want to try to make it something that seems realistic, but isn't?
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KomradApex In reply to OnionFairy99 [2016-02-03 19:50:08 +0000 UTC]
Revenge or a desire to change something are both cliched, but they do work.
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OnionFairy99 In reply to KomradApex [2016-02-03 20:17:42 +0000 UTC]
Ok. Thank you! Do I need a scientific reason? I know a few people have questioned how she could become undead more scientifically.
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KomradApex In reply to OnionFairy99 [2016-02-03 20:23:44 +0000 UTC]
I don't really think you can provide a convincing scientific explanation for an undead creature...
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OnionFairy99 In reply to KomradApex [2016-02-03 20:38:56 +0000 UTC]
That's what I thought, but oh well. Thank you very much for help! Sorry to bother you
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KomradApex In reply to OnionFairy99 [2016-02-03 20:39:57 +0000 UTC]
It's no bother. Best of luck!
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Kojamo In reply to ??? [2016-01-30 03:20:24 +0000 UTC]
I need a bit of help!
Plot: One day in a parallel world, a group of students attempt to summon a monster after playing with a puzzle possessed by the spirit of a girl.
Name of Girl: Yasu
Appearance: Thin faced, Pale skin, Blood tears dried on face, Baby blue dress, 16, Mangled black rose in hair, No shoes, scratches and bruises everywhere, Torn lace bolero, Eyes bright toxic green, Long purpleish-black hair, Smile is black pointy fangs
Relationship status: Single (no ship yet)
Nickname: Yasu the Insane (I know, it sucks)
Catchphrase: Don't cry, and see the light (sucks aswell)
Symbol: Bloody heart
Backstory: Yasu was murdered by her older brother, Kono, whom had many trips to prison for killing. Yasu came back from the dead and killed him in his sleep, slowly and painfully, while saying her catchphrase in her normal singsong voice. After he was dead, she was devastated at what she had done, so she haunted his favorite puzzle: a sleeping wolf. Whenever summoned, she drives whoever summoned her bonkers until they have finally lost their sanity, then she kills them with a pistol she had grabbed from her brother right before he killed her and pulled the trigger. She wears a bloody, torn outfit in baby blue, her favorite dress, and a ripped lace bolero. When she smiles, her eyes glow brighter green and a shrill laughing is heard that drives whoever hears it insane slowly.
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