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“Today we gather, hope of final peace,For our dear friend whose life did touch all whom
Did speak, did dream, did wish for a release
From loneliness, gain comfort of the womb.
Yet murdered were you in night’s slightest hour,
And stabbed with thy own dagger in thy sleep—
By whom?—a man with broken heart so dour
For you did leave his life, no love to keep.
Each lonely day you caused and heedless why;
Chance of redemption, Love, I pray to thee:
Take not my weary own soul into thy
Own lonesome grave in darkness you took he.
Alas beneath the earth, last words for thee,
O, Love interred, how hardly we knew ye.”
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Comments: 9
HiddenRelevance [2005-04-19 14:46:14 +0000 UTC]
interestinnnnnnng. I love it when every so often we get cool assignments in school! this is great... the flow is stunning and I love how you slip from one line to the next so seamlessly.. great work chico
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learntoswim In reply to HiddenRelevance [2005-04-19 17:26:48 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much. Im not even done with it. I decided to add three more sonnets to the whole piece. So stick around cuz theres more where that came from.
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learntoswim In reply to HiddenRelevance [2005-04-19 20:19:02 +0000 UTC]
I will repost it so just be on the lookout.
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HiddenRelevance [2005-04-19 14:46:14 +0000 UTC]
interestinnnnnnng. I love it when every so often we get cool assignments in school! this is great... the flow is stunning and I love how you slip from one line to the next so seamlessly.. great work chico
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enchanted-black-rose [2005-04-17 21:13:55 +0000 UTC]
You know what I think about this. It's amazing and wonderful and you're fantastic.
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learntoswim In reply to enchanted-black-rose [2005-04-17 22:27:01 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much.
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