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Published: 2004-04-13 00:55:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 86; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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Description Glistening,
Reflecting light like a long forgotten diamond
brought up against
the blinding rays of the sun,
it waits.

Lifting my finger to the windows of my soul,
I catch that diamond of emotion
and there it stays.
Never losing its shine,
never losing its purpose.

This diamond reflects the light of my
past life, and life as I know it now,
showing me both things that
have kept me on my feet,
and brought me to my knees.

I am blind in this sight I call my life.

Looking closer, I see
it shines on what you have done for me.
Its glistening reflects the truth of my feelings about you.
There's nothing more I can do,
but ask you if you will care;
Because this tear I shed for you,
like the fire in my soul,
It's the calling that's inside me,
that only you can answer.
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Comments: 5

FaernaPhira [2004-05-28 19:23:12 +0000 UTC]

That's it ... I love your work!! :fav+:

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FaernaPhira In reply to FaernaPhira [2004-05-28 21:31:35 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome

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learntoswim In reply to FaernaPhira [2004-05-28 20:33:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much.

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BkeyMak [2004-05-26 17:42:23 +0000 UTC]

wow this ones cool too! i like the whole description of the tear. It's really awesome!!! :clapping: made me think!

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learntoswim In reply to BkeyMak [2004-05-26 20:28:27 +0000 UTC]

why thank u

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