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learntoswim β€” Your Name
Published: 2004-01-27 17:23:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 157; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 9
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Description Desperately clutching to hope,
I see my reflection in your eyes.
This feeling overwhelms me so,
The shadows must arise.
And in my darkest moment,
When there is no light to touch my face.
The phantom’s shadow cast upon me,
I am saved by your embrace.

I have spent so much time pondering this,
It is in you that I confide.
Jagged truth has cut my tattered wings,
Forced the spear into my side.
And in my loneliest moment,
When there is no one to dry my bitter tears.
The shade of past overcome by luminance,
The cloak of darkness disappears.

And in my dying moment,
When there is no one but the reaper to blame.
With my final breath, grasping to life,
My last words will be your name.
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Comments: 16

Geladrial [2005-06-17 08:55:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh my lord!! That is truly amazing, inspirational, phenomenal, fantastic. Really truly amazing... romantic, just downright gorgeous!!

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learntoswim In reply to Geladrial [2005-06-17 17:33:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much.

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forty-six-und2 [2005-06-10 20:02:05 +0000 UTC]

Wow. That's amazing. It paints a picture in my mind that I could only hope to put on paper. Very Maynard inspired.

love Harper

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learntoswim In reply to forty-six-und2 [2005-06-10 21:25:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the comment. But actually this is not inspired by Tool or any Maynard-related things whatsoever....Its about my undying love for a girl who will probably never see it.

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forty-six-und2 In reply to learntoswim [2005-06-10 23:23:09 +0000 UTC]

How depressing. Did she ever read it? If she did and didn't see how much you loved her, she's vapid. Beautiful poem.

love Harper

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learntoswim In reply to forty-six-und2 [2005-06-11 02:33:53 +0000 UTC]

Shes seen it. I wrote it when she was with me. When we were in love.

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forty-six-und2 In reply to learntoswim [2005-06-11 18:55:57 +0000 UTC]

*tear* that's so sweet, I wish my bf wrote me poems... that's ok tho. I love him anyways!!

You rock

Harper

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learntoswim In reply to forty-six-und2 [2005-06-11 21:59:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I just wish shed see what shell always have in me.

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forty-six-und2 In reply to learntoswim [2005-06-12 02:37:54 +0000 UTC]

Welcome. Girls are dumb. Don't get involved. Keep up the writing though, I love it. And I love Tool, and Nathan.

Love Harper

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learntoswim In reply to forty-six-und2 [2005-06-12 02:44:30 +0000 UTC]

I love her more than anything. I cannot just not get involved. I care about her too much.

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jbabygurl711 [2004-08-27 04:51:14 +0000 UTC]

ur last words better be my name bia! whats my name b!x)h hehe j/k i like this one a lot too!!

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learntoswim In reply to jbabygurl711 [2004-08-27 21:41:32 +0000 UTC]

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FaernaPhira [2004-05-28 19:18:07 +0000 UTC]

:favlove: This is powerful . . . You are good

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learntoswim In reply to FaernaPhira [2004-05-28 20:34:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you greatly for your support.

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loveathena [2004-04-09 13:40:29 +0000 UTC]

this is really beautiful. you are extremly talented and creative

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LiquidWind [2004-03-02 20:52:01 +0000 UTC]

-stare- no one's commented on this?

Shame on them!

It paints a very interesting picture.

great job! keep it up!

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