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Description   “Nocturnus.”


A low voice suddenly pierced the darkness, and the batpony standing guard jumped. “M-my liege-” The pony dropped down onto their forelegs in a fumbling bow.


“At ease, Nocturnus. We wish to speak to thee.” Artemis, the heir to the night, emerged from the darkness, quiet and graceful as a prowling panther. Nocturnus swallowed, his throat suddenly dry.


“Ah...yes, your highness. Er….lovely moon out tonight?”


“Indeed.” Artemis glanced skyward. “Mother’s artistry with the night sky knows no limit. But forbear thy flattery, Nocturnus. We have come to discuss thy performance at guard training last night. Your spar against Gladiolus was a disaster. You were sloppy, unfocused, distracted. Had your opponent been a genuine threat, you’d have been finished. A moment of inattention is all it takes for a wayward sword to spill your guts to the ground, Nocturnus.”


“I...I know, my liege. Please, I implore your forgiveness-”


“You are our lieutenant, Nocturnus. We are captain of the royal guard. Incompetence on your end reflects poorly on us. Your failure is our failure, and we will not be dishonored because thou cannot stop daydreaming during battle practice.” Artemis’ glare was enough to shame stone, and Nocturnus looked away.


“I-I’m sorry. I just...I haven’t been sleeping very well.”


“Why?” Artemis barked, making the guard pony startle. “There are countless sleeping potions available to thee-”


“No, it’s not that...I just….” Nocturnus’ ears slicked back, and he gave a quiet sigh. Artemis paused, before reaching out and placing an awkward hoof on the smaller pony’s shoulder.


“Nocturnus, what is the matter?”


“It’s nothing, your highness. You don’t need to concern yourself with me.” Nocturnus smiled, but it was half-hearted and sad, and quickly slid from his face.


Artemis was at a loss for what to do. They were a royal, a commander of ponies, not a giver of pep talks. For a moment, the alicorn considered leaving Nocturnus to sort himself out, but there was something about the slump of the batpony’s shoulders that compelled Artemis to try again.


“....Look into my eyes, Nocturnus.”


The batpony obeyed his leader. Nocturnus’ gaze was unsteady at first, afraid to look too long upon the heir to the night...but gradually, as Artemis wove a connection of magic between their minds, Nocturnus’ eyes grew dazed and lax.


“What is the source of your sorrow, my lieutenant?” Artemis’ voice echoed dully in Nocturnus’ mind, like cool rainwater dripping in a cave. The bat pony spoke, sluggish under the spell.


“....been sick….”


“Why have you not then gone to the infirmary?” Artemis’s tone was impatient. "Why have you not taken care of this earlier?"


“No, no….not me….” Nocturnus mumbled. “Her...her…....my daughter…...” A glint of worry flickered over the guard’s slack face. “Just a...filly…...can’t get out of bed…...fever, burning…..vomiting, can’t….the doctors…...don’t know what’s wrong…….told us….to get ready…..to say…...g-goodbye…” Noctunus’ eyes welled with tears.


“Dying…...”


Artemis suddenly understood. They summoned magic from their core, and probed deeper into Nocturnus’ mind. Artemis felt the smothering might of the bat pony’s despair, but pushed past it, deeper into the brain...until at last a memory floated up-a child’s bedroom. In the bed, tucked under the covers, was a tiny batpony filly, cheeks flushed with fever, being worriedly tended to by an elderly grandmother. The child let out a whimper, too weak to even cry, and the grandmother murmured desperate words of comfort and sponged at her brow.


“Nocturnus. Heed me.” Artemis barked. Despite the lulling effect of the spell, the guard pony stood at attention by habit.


“You will fly to the Whispering Mountains, and there you will fill a saddlebag with the Saussurea Obvallata flower heads you find. Return home, and mix the flower petals into a solution of equal parts meadowsweet, yarrow, and honey. Administer a spoonful thrice daily to your daughter, until her fever is broken. Do you understand?”


“Yes, my liege.” Nocturnus was waking from Artemis’ mind spell, and glanced about, baffled, but alert. “My liege...your words, I understand now...but how could you possibly know of a cure?"

"Mother Moon has been a master herbalist since the times of plague and famine. Did thou not think she'd teach me a few things?" Artemis offered a very rare smirk to the smaller pony, and Nocturnus gaped, incredulous. "Go, Nocturnus. Save your daughter."

Nocturnus' eyes burned suddenly, and without thinking, he surged forward to envelop the heir to the Night in a hug. "Thank you, my liege-"

Artemis went tense immediately, but did their best to remain calm and not shove the strange, sentimental pony away. Instead Artemis lifted a regal hoof and gingerly gave Nocturnus several quick, awkward pats on the head. "Ahem...yes. You are...er, welcome, we suppose. We will overlook this offense, Nocturnus, but, ah, touching a royal without consent can be considered treason-"

"Sincere apologies, your highness." Nocturnus hugged the alicorn even tighter for just a moment, before releasing them with a bright smile. "Perhaps imprisonment would be worth showing my gratitude to you."

"Thou can express thy gratitude with double guard shifts when thou return." Artemis coughed awkwardly, shooing the smaller pony away. "Fly, Nocturnus, make haste. Your task awaits you."

"Yes, my liege." Nocturnus spread his wings, and in an instant he was aloft and off, sailing into the light of the midnight moon. For a time, Artemis watched him fly, before they shook their body lightly, and trotted off to finish their nightly patrol.


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Princess Luna's innate magic-namely dream walking and astral projection-have manifested in strange new ways for her child, Artemis. Artemis has mysterious powers involving mind and memory...and one of their particular powers is hypnosis. Artemis can exert their will over other ponies and influence them into doing Arte's will. The ability requires steady, unbroken eye contact, long enough for Artemis to be able to command the other pony's mind (some ponies are stronger willed than others and require Arte to exert more power). Artemis usually just says "Look into my eyes", and most ponies feel automatically compelled to do so, so the eye contact thing isn't too much of a handicap

Ponies put under the spell describe it as feeling suddenly quite sleepy and pleasantly warm, with a gentle voice in their head telling them to do things.

no worries tho, artemis truly doesn't abuse this power (like Iridescence and Pandora suggest), but it really doesn't help the rumors in Canterlot that Artemis is secretly a goddamn vampire

now with dialogue. Artemis typically speaks in the royal we (unless relaxed or with friends and family), like season 2 Princess Luna
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Comments: 322

MilesGK [2020-01-03 00:21:41 +0000 UTC]

I get it, because their name is Artemis, Greek god of protecting young girls and curing diseases (that she may or may not have given). 

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MadnessOfTheMind [2019-05-08 21:34:43 +0000 UTC]

OK FUN FACT
When I first stumbles across your work a good few years ago, (I was like nine or ten), I had heard of non binary/agender/genderqueer, or at least the concept of gender outside of male amd female, but Artemis was my first encounter with an actual being fitting this description. All I read of Art was them saying 'we' amd 'us' and 'our'. You had me convinced for almost a year that agemder/genderqueer spoke with plural pronouns and refered to themselves as we. I was confused.

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Bella-Pink-Savage [2019-01-26 03:24:47 +0000 UTC]

Wow Look at Arte! She looks so majestic!!!

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Bella-Pink-Savage In reply to Bella-Pink-Savage [2019-01-31 06:40:38 +0000 UTC]

Er. They. My bad.

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hdashdak [2018-07-11 16:23:25 +0000 UTC]

what the female pony name?

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SingularityOfKhaos In reply to hdashdak [2018-08-15 03:52:58 +0000 UTC]

Read the description 😜

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overdose-on-ink In reply to hdashdak [2018-08-01 10:04:35 +0000 UTC]

Artemis is their name, and they aren't female but non-binary.

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ReyReyReShawn [2018-05-08 18:07:52 +0000 UTC]

Well if the vampire rumor was true, Artemis would be the only vampire I'm glad to see sparkle.

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rnko26 In reply to ReyReyReShawn [2018-06-12 00:12:03 +0000 UTC]

and they do lol

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CitrusEucalyptus [2017-12-15 00:21:17 +0000 UTC]

Wow. 

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Helloitsyellow [2017-12-13 23:10:19 +0000 UTC]

I know it's been ages since you posted this, but in case you look at this again, "thou" is only used as the subject of the sentence (Did thou not think she'd teach me a few things?) but "thee" is used as the object (We wish to speak to thee.) Also, scientific names are written with the first word capitalised, and the second in lowercase. (Saussurea obvallata.) (I'm guessing that's a scientific name.) Sorry for being nitpicky. I'm just trying to help

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Scout99IsHere [2017-09-05 22:46:03 +0000 UTC]

holy fluff-
THIS IS AWESOME

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Emberinthefurs [2017-08-19 14:28:41 +0000 UTC]

sorry but
looks like they're about to smooch there, my dude

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Raidyance In reply to Emberinthefurs [2018-04-26 13:42:49 +0000 UTC]

what the heck why do I see you everywhere
owo

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Emberinthefurs In reply to Raidyance [2018-04-27 17:25:37 +0000 UTC]

fuckj why D:
how did you also get stuck in an mlp nextgen downhill slop

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Raidyance In reply to Emberinthefurs [2018-04-28 00:48:37 +0000 UTC]

👁 u 👁
thb I have no idea, but I freaking love the way this person draws mlp

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Emberinthefurs In reply to Raidyance [2018-05-05 00:17:53 +0000 UTC]

same-o, it's s i n

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Noxella206 [2017-07-17 21:07:42 +0000 UTC]

Poor filly D':>

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meganhulan [2017-07-13 12:04:34 +0000 UTC]

nocturnus and chakra would be really cool, really love nocturnus' character!!

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Emberinthefurs [2017-04-21 08:37:05 +0000 UTC]

//flips the table
BISH I SHIP IT

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Curse-Never-Dying199 [2017-04-05 15:36:20 +0000 UTC]

I picture Artemis having a voice similar to Gwyndolin from Dark Souls. 

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Planetrix In reply to Curse-Never-Dying199 [2017-06-15 01:17:48 +0000 UTC]

Or like Galadriel from LOTR.

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suntwilig [2017-03-30 18:59:16 +0000 UTC]

looks super

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Sanluris [2017-03-28 17:35:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Using powers for good! 

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Wyverntooth [2017-03-13 22:22:14 +0000 UTC]

This is definitely hypnosis! To hypnotize someone to do something, they have to do it of their own decision and moral standing. Let's say I hypnotize someone to steal from a bank, unless they don't mind robbing people they won't do so 'cause it goes against their moral compass and they don't want to. Artemis' power worked here 'cause Nocturnus wanted to tell someone, anyone, about his dying daughter to hopefully get some answers or help

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LpsLover715 [2017-03-01 00:22:26 +0000 UTC]

     

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LpsLover715 [2017-03-01 00:21:32 +0000 UTC]

I ship it .3.    

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Summer-Rose-Ruby [2017-02-26 06:39:58 +0000 UTC]

Awe I hope his daughter will be all right      

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465lps [2017-02-26 02:20:43 +0000 UTC]

WHO? WHAT? WHERE? AND HOW?    

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LupinKurt [2017-02-14 19:29:26 +0000 UTC]

what gender is Artemis? they always refer to themselfs with no gender pronouns and the way you draw them sort of hints both ways.

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Lopoddity In reply to LupinKurt [2017-02-14 20:52:35 +0000 UTC]

Artemis doesn't have a given gender. They are not a "he" or a "she", but rather a "they".

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LupinKurt In reply to Lopoddity [2017-02-14 20:53:25 +0000 UTC]

cool

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HowlingWolf64 [2017-01-26 10:57:14 +0000 UTC]

Do my eyes deceive me or is there a hint of cutie mark on that there flank

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NomeArts [2017-01-20 00:13:38 +0000 UTC]

Artemis is HANDSOME. Its cool, he's not really hot or sexy like some other characters, just handsome. 

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HowlingWolf64 In reply to NomeArts [2017-01-26 10:54:48 +0000 UTC]

they*
Artemis doesn't identify as female or male, and prefers they/them pronouns

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NomeArts In reply to HowlingWolf64 [2017-01-26 22:54:24 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I realized that they were referred to as they after I posted that. Sorry I was too lazy to edit that comment 

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BloodbathDAnightwing [2017-01-16 01:14:22 +0000 UTC]

what a handsome alicorn design!

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MugenSeiRyuu [2016-11-23 12:30:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh, Artemis is doing the Dracula thing. But they are lacking their own Renfield...

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randumchris1 [2016-11-11 01:25:33 +0000 UTC]

Maybe I should make a funfic with my OC and Artemis meeting? Well only if I actually break through my OC's secrets and start writing again... And great story too, I don't find a lot of people willing to create a short story based off of their picture.

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Godzillamaster69 [2016-10-22 23:41:19 +0000 UTC]

D'aww, it's cute that Artemis has somewhat of a soft spot.

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PegasusMare [2016-10-21 11:58:23 +0000 UTC]

… I ship… 

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coolcat1510 In reply to PegasusMare [2016-11-07 16:05:29 +0000 UTC]

I ship it like FedEx

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LilLuluna In reply to PegasusMare [2016-11-05 10:31:34 +0000 UTC]

Same....

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MissSindale In reply to PegasusMare [2016-10-31 15:24:24 +0000 UTC]

i think i ship it too

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ShadyWinters [2016-10-21 02:49:52 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, I like that Arte has unique abilities derived from their mother, makes them more special than a direct copy of their parents. You get what I mean?

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Lapin-Demoness [2016-10-20 02:52:35 +0000 UTC]

Is that a hint of a Cutie Mark I see on Artemis' flank? 

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Miss-Half-Crazed [2016-10-19 01:23:49 +0000 UTC]

And that's why Artemis is one of my favorites

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thegamingice [2016-10-18 22:30:39 +0000 UTC]

SHUT UP I SHIP THIS

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FluffyMarshmallow [2016-10-18 21:54:42 +0000 UTC]

I think I've seen this before but I don't know where..

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TimeLadyDerpy In reply to FluffyMarshmallow [2016-10-18 23:29:34 +0000 UTC]

"Trust in me~"

Maybe it reminds you of the Jungle Book?

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