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Description   “Nocturnus.”


A low voice suddenly pierced the darkness, and the batpony standing guard jumped. “M-my liege-” The pony dropped down onto their forelegs in a fumbling bow.


“At ease, Nocturnus. We wish to speak to thee.” Artemis, the heir to the night, emerged from the darkness, quiet and graceful as a prowling panther. Nocturnus swallowed, his throat suddenly dry.


“Ah...yes, your highness. Er….lovely moon out tonight?”


“Indeed.” Artemis glanced skyward. “Mother’s artistry with the night sky knows no limit. But forbear thy flattery, Nocturnus. We have come to discuss thy performance at guard training last night. Your spar against Gladiolus was a disaster. You were sloppy, unfocused, distracted. Had your opponent been a genuine threat, you’d have been finished. A moment of inattention is all it takes for a wayward sword to spill your guts to the ground, Nocturnus.”


“I...I know, my liege. Please, I implore your forgiveness-”


“You are our lieutenant, Nocturnus. We are captain of the royal guard. Incompetence on your end reflects poorly on us. Your failure is our failure, and we will not be dishonored because thou cannot stop daydreaming during battle practice.” Artemis’ glare was enough to shame stone, and Nocturnus looked away.


“I-I’m sorry. I just...I haven’t been sleeping very well.”


“Why?” Artemis barked, making the guard pony startle. “There are countless sleeping potions available to thee-”


“No, it’s not that...I just….” Nocturnus’ ears slicked back, and he gave a quiet sigh. Artemis paused, before reaching out and placing an awkward hoof on the smaller pony’s shoulder.


“Nocturnus, what is the matter?”


“It’s nothing, your highness. You don’t need to concern yourself with me.” Nocturnus smiled, but it was half-hearted and sad, and quickly slid from his face.


Artemis was at a loss for what to do. They were a royal, a commander of ponies, not a giver of pep talks. For a moment, the alicorn considered leaving Nocturnus to sort himself out, but there was something about the slump of the batpony’s shoulders that compelled Artemis to try again.


“....Look into my eyes, Nocturnus.”


The batpony obeyed his leader. Nocturnus’ gaze was unsteady at first, afraid to look too long upon the heir to the night...but gradually, as Artemis wove a connection of magic between their minds, Nocturnus’ eyes grew dazed and lax.


“What is the source of your sorrow, my lieutenant?” Artemis’ voice echoed dully in Nocturnus’ mind, like cool rainwater dripping in a cave. The bat pony spoke, sluggish under the spell.


“....been sick….”


“Why have you not then gone to the infirmary?” Artemis’s tone was impatient. "Why have you not taken care of this earlier?"


“No, no….not me….” Nocturnus mumbled. “Her...her…....my daughter…...” A glint of worry flickered over the guard’s slack face. “Just a...filly…...can’t get out of bed…...fever, burning…..vomiting, can’t….the doctors…...don’t know what’s wrong…….told us….to get ready…..to say…...g-goodbye…” Noctunus’ eyes welled with tears.


“Dying…...”


Artemis suddenly understood. They summoned magic from their core, and probed deeper into Nocturnus’ mind. Artemis felt the smothering might of the bat pony’s despair, but pushed past it, deeper into the brain...until at last a memory floated up-a child’s bedroom. In the bed, tucked under the covers, was a tiny batpony filly, cheeks flushed with fever, being worriedly tended to by an elderly grandmother. The child let out a whimper, too weak to even cry, and the grandmother murmured desperate words of comfort and sponged at her brow.


“Nocturnus. Heed me.” Artemis barked. Despite the lulling effect of the spell, the guard pony stood at attention by habit.


“You will fly to the Whispering Mountains, and there you will fill a saddlebag with the Saussurea Obvallata flower heads you find. Return home, and mix the flower petals into a solution of equal parts meadowsweet, yarrow, and honey. Administer a spoonful thrice daily to your daughter, until her fever is broken. Do you understand?”


“Yes, my liege.” Nocturnus was waking from Artemis’ mind spell, and glanced about, baffled, but alert. “My liege...your words, I understand now...but how could you possibly know of a cure?"

"Mother Moon has been a master herbalist since the times of plague and famine. Did thou not think she'd teach me a few things?" Artemis offered a very rare smirk to the smaller pony, and Nocturnus gaped, incredulous. "Go, Nocturnus. Save your daughter."

Nocturnus' eyes burned suddenly, and without thinking, he surged forward to envelop the heir to the Night in a hug. "Thank you, my liege-"

Artemis went tense immediately, but did their best to remain calm and not shove the strange, sentimental pony away. Instead Artemis lifted a regal hoof and gingerly gave Nocturnus several quick, awkward pats on the head. "Ahem...yes. You are...er, welcome, we suppose. We will overlook this offense, Nocturnus, but, ah, touching a royal without consent can be considered treason-"

"Sincere apologies, your highness." Nocturnus hugged the alicorn even tighter for just a moment, before releasing them with a bright smile. "Perhaps imprisonment would be worth showing my gratitude to you."

"Thou can express thy gratitude with double guard shifts when thou return." Artemis coughed awkwardly, shooing the smaller pony away. "Fly, Nocturnus, make haste. Your task awaits you."

"Yes, my liege." Nocturnus spread his wings, and in an instant he was aloft and off, sailing into the light of the midnight moon. For a time, Artemis watched him fly, before they shook their body lightly, and trotted off to finish their nightly patrol.


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Princess Luna's innate magic-namely dream walking and astral projection-have manifested in strange new ways for her child, Artemis. Artemis has mysterious powers involving mind and memory...and one of their particular powers is hypnosis. Artemis can exert their will over other ponies and influence them into doing Arte's will. The ability requires steady, unbroken eye contact, long enough for Artemis to be able to command the other pony's mind (some ponies are stronger willed than others and require Arte to exert more power). Artemis usually just says "Look into my eyes", and most ponies feel automatically compelled to do so, so the eye contact thing isn't too much of a handicap

Ponies put under the spell describe it as feeling suddenly quite sleepy and pleasantly warm, with a gentle voice in their head telling them to do things.

no worries tho, artemis truly doesn't abuse this power (like Iridescence and Pandora suggest), but it really doesn't help the rumors in Canterlot that Artemis is secretly a goddamn vampire

now with dialogue. Artemis typically speaks in the royal we (unless relaxed or with friends and family), like season 2 Princess Luna
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Comments: 322

RenagadeGam3r In reply to ??? [2016-10-17 08:29:12 +0000 UTC]

There's an opportunity for a "Would you kindly" in there somewhere.

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SirinaRuth [2016-10-17 08:19:08 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwe!!!!!

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TheodoraBMisfit [2016-10-17 07:30:55 +0000 UTC]

Nocturnus now favorite background character. He needs a hug

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Poison-Anthem In reply to ??? [2016-10-17 07:24:26 +0000 UTC]

I got all misty eyed~ Artemis <3

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babyhallow [2016-10-17 07:02:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh Artemis. You act so stoic, yet at heart, you're a big softie.

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Madness-Made-Fresh In reply to ??? [2016-10-17 06:55:17 +0000 UTC]

Such an interesting story. Such good character development.

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ScribbleSketchRD In reply to ??? [2016-10-17 06:52:16 +0000 UTC]

Ah jesus, reading these always gives me feels. I love these, honestly, you are my favorite artist on Deviantart, not only are your skills in drawing and shading immense and overwhelming in a good way, but the meaning behind some of them really tug at your heart strings

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Cherry-Trees [2016-10-17 06:51:52 +0000 UTC]

HONESTLY, BLESS EVERYTHING ABOUT ARTEMIS.

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RainwingArts In reply to ??? [2016-10-17 06:49:27 +0000 UTC]

Arte, why you say touchy is treason? Thats mean. They were being nice!

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ChickenDoodleS0up [2016-10-17 06:46:59 +0000 UTC]

Honestly this and the elaboration on Jamie's and their relationship has made them my absolute favorite character 

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Martyn-Arts In reply to ??? [2016-10-17 06:40:11 +0000 UTC]

Jezums. Really didn't expect the feels smack from that dialogue.

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FluffySkittleHorse In reply to ??? [2016-10-17 06:39:03 +0000 UTC]

Poor Nocturnus! I hope his daughter is okay! ^^

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owl--star In reply to ??? [2016-10-17 06:37:11 +0000 UTC]

Hooray! Go, Nocturnus, go!

COMMENCE THE SWARM OF PEOPLE WHO DEMAND THAT HE BE AN ACTUAL CHARACTER

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Artswork In reply to owl--star [2016-10-17 06:44:44 +0000 UTC]

Get behind my shield, m8.
Prepare for the demands.

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owl--star In reply to Artswork [2016-10-17 06:45:56 +0000 UTC]

Roger that! *hides*

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Pheonomon In reply to ??? [2016-10-06 08:03:48 +0000 UTC]

This needs dialog!

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EcliptorCalrissian In reply to ??? [2016-10-06 07:21:28 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh. Cool to see a good character with such a 'bad-guy' power. I'd like to know the context of this, to know why brainwashing one of the guards is a good thing on this occasion.

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Adolfhangtler [2016-10-05 15:59:10 +0000 UTC]

一颗赛艇

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fletchstar [2016-10-05 14:43:59 +0000 UTC]

who needs telling to look into those gorgeous eyes

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aqdrobert [2016-10-05 02:00:51 +0000 UTC]

"This is not the droid you are looking for."

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sephirios [2016-10-04 10:20:24 +0000 UTC]

NOW KISS!!

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KiattyKatty In reply to ??? [2016-10-03 16:07:36 +0000 UTC]

Arte is so cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute >///////u///////>

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Grendelkin In reply to ??? [2016-10-03 07:35:09 +0000 UTC]

"Look into my eyes and feel the stress slip away. Yes, you were in battle. Yes, you fought bravely. But you can rest now. You don't need to stay on edge. Listen to my voice and know that you can be at peace once more..."

Hypnosis can be a powerful tool for therapy, after all.

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SilkaLiveDoll In reply to ??? [2016-10-03 05:26:37 +0000 UTC]

... this would be an excellent interrogation technique, as it wouldn't harm the pony being questioned, though there WOULD still be questions as to the veracity of the testimony gained this way (false memory syndrome being a thing and all).

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Zambiino [2016-10-02 20:15:19 +0000 UTC]

Amazing work!

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ShaiDoro [2016-10-02 17:57:35 +0000 UTC]

the ASMR princess

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Legacy-Galaxy In reply to ShaiDoro [2017-07-25 19:37:22 +0000 UTC]

There's no agender word for those prince/princess types, so you're gonna have to call them a moon bird.

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ShaiDoro In reply to Legacy-Galaxy [2017-08-06 04:24:57 +0000 UTC]

the asmr moon bird

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Legacy-Galaxy In reply to ShaiDoro [2017-08-06 15:14:35 +0000 UTC]

Better.

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JustJohn11 [2016-10-02 15:07:55 +0000 UTC]

Artemis-"Bring me any cute fuzzy animals you find, tell no one."

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manta-rae In reply to ??? [2016-10-02 00:40:51 +0000 UTC]

"These are not the ponies you are looking for..."

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Neoklaitus In reply to manta-rae [2016-10-03 13:35:48 +0000 UTC]

...These are not the ponies we are looking for...

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7ricefest [2016-10-01 23:50:43 +0000 UTC]

imagine how many ponies got seduced by it   

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Decepticonspy [2016-10-01 17:32:46 +0000 UTC]

Probably trying to sneak off to see Jam and has to hypnotize the guards

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alissajuett In reply to ??? [2016-10-01 07:44:38 +0000 UTC]

My universe crossover ship is defs annie x arty like imagine
Shes blind so can she be hypnotised? Arty would be all "confusing..." and bam

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darkpurity4 In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 22:59:09 +0000 UTC]

Am I the only one hearing I Put a Spell On You from Hocus Pocus?

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Ash-Bash-Honey-Smash In reply to darkpurity4 [2016-10-01 05:05:33 +0000 UTC]

YES PLS <3 

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ShadowLoverForever1 In reply to darkpurity4 [2016-10-01 03:05:51 +0000 UTC]

omg i could imagine Pandora and iridescence singing that in order to try to convince Artemis to abuse his power but they end up failing to convince. either Lopoddity or someone needs to draw that or make a video of it. XD that would be cool and funny.

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assainwolf9 In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 22:09:40 +0000 UTC]

Is it bad I now ship these two?

WHOOPSIES!!!!

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fgvdad123 In reply to assainwolf9 [2016-09-30 22:18:54 +0000 UTC]

Yeeeea same

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assainwolf9 In reply to fgvdad123 [2016-10-01 13:18:31 +0000 UTC]

woo someone does as well XD!!

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fgvdad123 In reply to assainwolf9 [2016-10-01 17:32:49 +0000 UTC]

Yea not to be weird but I think these to would be great together

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assainwolf9 In reply to fgvdad123 [2016-10-05 18:38:21 +0000 UTC]

i know,they'd be so adorable!

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fgvdad123 In reply to assainwolf9 [2016-10-05 18:55:17 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaw yea

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assainwolf9 In reply to fgvdad123 [2016-10-05 19:08:21 +0000 UTC]

yeahhh

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urzapw2000 In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 21:51:27 +0000 UTC]

very awesome!!

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SleepingOnCloud9 In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 20:55:21 +0000 UTC]

*low key ships it*
.3.

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grisador [2016-09-30 20:31:14 +0000 UTC]

İn my view Artemis is similiar to hobbit Thranduil; in behaviore.
Not good but not bad; neutral

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wingedswordyunagi [2016-09-30 20:28:54 +0000 UTC]

What does she use the powers for then?

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ImaniM18 In reply to wingedswordyunagi [2016-09-30 21:00:45 +0000 UTC]

Artemis uses They/them pronouns

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