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“Nocturnus.”A low voice suddenly pierced the darkness, and the batpony standing guard jumped. “M-my liege-” The pony dropped down onto their forelegs in a fumbling bow.
“At ease, Nocturnus. We wish to speak to thee.” Artemis, the heir to the night, emerged from the darkness, quiet and graceful as a prowling panther. Nocturnus swallowed, his throat suddenly dry.
“Ah...yes, your highness. Er….lovely moon out tonight?”
“Indeed.” Artemis glanced skyward. “Mother’s artistry with the night sky knows no limit. But forbear thy flattery, Nocturnus. We have come to discuss thy performance at guard training last night. Your spar against Gladiolus was a disaster. You were sloppy, unfocused, distracted. Had your opponent been a genuine threat, you’d have been finished. A moment of inattention is all it takes for a wayward sword to spill your guts to the ground, Nocturnus.”
“I...I know, my liege. Please, I implore your forgiveness-”
“You are our lieutenant, Nocturnus. We are captain of the royal guard. Incompetence on your end reflects poorly on us. Your failure is our failure, and we will not be dishonored because thou cannot stop daydreaming during battle practice.” Artemis’ glare was enough to shame stone, and Nocturnus looked away.
“I-I’m sorry. I just...I haven’t been sleeping very well.”
“Why?” Artemis barked, making the guard pony startle. “There are countless sleeping potions available to thee-”
“No, it’s not that...I just….” Nocturnus’ ears slicked back, and he gave a quiet sigh. Artemis paused, before reaching out and placing an awkward hoof on the smaller pony’s shoulder.
“Nocturnus, what is the matter?”
“It’s nothing, your highness. You don’t need to concern yourself with me.” Nocturnus smiled, but it was half-hearted and sad, and quickly slid from his face.
Artemis was at a loss for what to do. They were a royal, a commander of ponies, not a giver of pep talks. For a moment, the alicorn considered leaving Nocturnus to sort himself out, but there was something about the slump of the batpony’s shoulders that compelled Artemis to try again.
“....Look into my eyes, Nocturnus.”
The batpony obeyed his leader. Nocturnus’ gaze was unsteady at first, afraid to look too long upon the heir to the night...but gradually, as Artemis wove a connection of magic between their minds, Nocturnus’ eyes grew dazed and lax.
“What is the source of your sorrow, my lieutenant?” Artemis’ voice echoed dully in Nocturnus’ mind, like cool rainwater dripping in a cave. The bat pony spoke, sluggish under the spell.
“....been sick….”
“Why have you not then gone to the infirmary?” Artemis’s tone was impatient. "Why have you not taken care of this earlier?"
“No, no….not me….” Nocturnus mumbled. “Her...her…....my daughter…...” A glint of worry flickered over the guard’s slack face. “Just a...filly…...can’t get out of bed…...fever, burning…..vomiting, can’t….the doctors…...don’t know what’s wrong…….told us….to get ready…..to say…...g-goodbye…” Noctunus’ eyes welled with tears.
“Dying…...”
Artemis suddenly understood. They summoned magic from their core, and probed deeper into Nocturnus’ mind. Artemis felt the smothering might of the bat pony’s despair, but pushed past it, deeper into the brain...until at last a memory floated up-a child’s bedroom. In the bed, tucked under the covers, was a tiny batpony filly, cheeks flushed with fever, being worriedly tended to by an elderly grandmother. The child let out a whimper, too weak to even cry, and the grandmother murmured desperate words of comfort and sponged at her brow.
“Nocturnus. Heed me.” Artemis barked. Despite the lulling effect of the spell, the guard pony stood at attention by habit.
“You will fly to the Whispering Mountains, and there you will fill a saddlebag with the Saussurea Obvallata flower heads you find. Return home, and mix the flower petals into a solution of equal parts meadowsweet, yarrow, and honey. Administer a spoonful thrice daily to your daughter, until her fever is broken. Do you understand?”
“Yes, my liege.” Nocturnus was waking from Artemis’ mind spell, and glanced about, baffled, but alert. “My liege...your words, I understand now...but how could you possibly know of a cure?"
"Mother Moon has been a master herbalist since the times of plague and famine. Did thou not think she'd teach me a few things?" Artemis offered a very rare smirk to the smaller pony, and Nocturnus gaped, incredulous. "Go, Nocturnus. Save your daughter."
Nocturnus' eyes burned suddenly, and without thinking, he surged forward to envelop the heir to the Night in a hug. "Thank you, my liege-"
Artemis went tense immediately, but did their best to remain calm and not shove the strange, sentimental pony away. Instead Artemis lifted a regal hoof and gingerly gave Nocturnus several quick, awkward pats on the head. "Ahem...yes. You are...er, welcome, we suppose. We will overlook this offense, Nocturnus, but, ah, touching a royal without consent can be considered treason-"
"Sincere apologies, your highness." Nocturnus hugged the alicorn even tighter for just a moment, before releasing them with a bright smile. "Perhaps imprisonment would be worth showing my gratitude to you."
"Thou can express thy gratitude with double guard shifts when thou return." Artemis coughed awkwardly, shooing the smaller pony away. "Fly, Nocturnus, make haste. Your task awaits you."
"Yes, my liege." Nocturnus spread his wings, and in an instant he was aloft and off, sailing into the light of the midnight moon. For a time, Artemis watched him fly, before they shook their body lightly, and trotted off to finish their nightly patrol.
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Princess Luna's innate magic-namely dream walking and astral projection-have manifested in strange new ways for her child, Artemis. Artemis has mysterious powers involving mind and memory...and one of their particular powers is hypnosis. Artemis can exert their will over other ponies and influence them into doing Arte's will. The ability requires steady, unbroken eye contact, long enough for Artemis to be able to command the other pony's mind (some ponies are stronger willed than others and require Arte to exert more power). Artemis usually just says "Look into my eyes", and most ponies feel automatically compelled to do so, so the eye contact thing isn't too much of a handicap
Ponies put under the spell describe it as feeling suddenly quite sleepy and pleasantly warm, with a gentle voice in their head telling them to do things.
no worries tho, artemis truly doesn't abuse this power (like Iridescence and Pandora suggest), but it really doesn't help the rumors in Canterlot that Artemis is secretly a goddamn vampire
now with dialogue. Artemis typically speaks in the royal we (unless relaxed or with friends and family), like season 2 Princess Luna
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Comments: 322
FluffyMarshmallow In reply to ??? [2016-10-19 18:30:20 +0000 UTC]
No I mean the picture. Probably saw it on Tumblr and don't remember, sorry to bother
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urzapw2000 In reply to ??? [2016-10-18 02:54:38 +0000 UTC]
so friggin awesome!!!
Artemis keeps getting more and more amazing!
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AmrasFelagund [2016-10-18 01:37:30 +0000 UTC]
Artemis, you just become so much more awesome, even though we all know you're also a socially awkward dork bird deep inside...!
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NekonaHisaki In reply to ??? [2016-10-18 01:30:55 +0000 UTC]
I must admit I am an Artemis fangirl. They are awesome. <3
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NekonaHisaki In reply to NekonaHisaki [2016-10-18 01:32:45 +0000 UTC]
Also a Tibetan medicinal lotus plant? Nice touch.
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C3ByDana In reply to ??? [2016-10-18 00:58:08 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm......wonder if Arte could use their powers on a blind pony like my OC or somepony else? Would their ability still function if they have eyes visible but non-functional?
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Alorxico [2016-10-17 22:59:44 +0000 UTC]
Question, why does Artemis speak in first person plural and why do you refer to Artemis in third person plural?
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Lopoddity In reply to Alorxico [2016-10-18 00:38:27 +0000 UTC]
Artemis generally speaks using the royal "we". Luna referred to herself this way back in season 2. She's quoted as saying "It is tradition to speak using the royal we, and to use this much volume when addressing our subjects!" The royal we is a really old tradition in monarchies, where the king/queen/whatever refers to themselves as "we", rather than "I". It's done to give an impression of divinity in their leadership.
Artemis is referred to as a "they" because they are non-binary (don't identify as male or female). Because there isn't really a common gender neutral pronoun in the English language, many non-binary people opt to use "they", rather than "he/she".
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aphhongice In reply to Alorxico [2016-10-17 23:56:40 +0000 UTC]
the third person plural (im assuming you mean they) is a pronoun used for non-binary people (most of the time)
the first person plural is just a speech thing, i guess
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CraftyAllie In reply to KaylaKedziora [2018-02-07 02:36:23 +0000 UTC]
Artemis is nonbinary and uses they/them pronouns
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sphynn In reply to ??? [2016-10-17 21:38:34 +0000 UTC]
This is a beautiful step forward in the evolution of HRH Artemis. They are clearly learning to become a leader, instead of simply being in charge. I love it and can't wait to see where they go from here.
"Leadership is solving problems. The day soldiers stop bringing you their problems is the day you have stopped leading them. They have either lost confidence that you can help or concluded you do not care. Either case is a failure of leadership." - Colin Powell
"Management is doing things right; leadership is doing the right things." - Peter Drucker
"There is a difference between being a leader and being a boss. Both are based on authority. A boss demands blind obedience; a leader earns his authority through understanding and trust." - Klaus Balkenhol
"If you can’t swallow your pride, you can’t lead. Even the highest mountain had animals that step on it." - Jack Weatherford
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Kimera-KiMeS In reply to ??? [2016-10-17 20:05:48 +0000 UTC]
It feels like Artemis possesses eye-lasers. pew pew pew!
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Neoklaitus [2016-10-17 19:49:33 +0000 UTC]
"Mother Moon has been a master herbalist since the times of plague and famine"
...Somebody Remind me how the father of Artemis die °_°
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chuck-vic-norris [2016-10-17 19:14:03 +0000 UTC]
Looks like they can kill you but is actually a cinnamon roll
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Mikkillerib In reply to chuck-vic-norris [2016-10-17 21:29:11 +0000 UTC]
I kinda get the same vibe from Artemis.
A single attack from her and you're dead.
But she knows not to just kill a random person without having reason.
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TheMysteryfox8 In reply to Mikkillerib [2016-10-18 01:37:10 +0000 UTC]
Artemis is non-binary,they're referred to as a "They"
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Mikkillerib In reply to TheMysteryfox8 [2016-10-18 05:33:31 +0000 UTC]
Oh right. I totally forgot that detail about Artemis.
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RainWolf-28 [2016-10-17 19:10:22 +0000 UTC]
reminds me of when spirit users (and christian) use compulsion in the vampire academy series. i can deff see how ponies would assume arty's a vampire. long as they don't come with stakes and crosses they can think what they wish about their owl pony heir
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LadyXaila [2016-10-17 18:41:41 +0000 UTC]
Arte is Best Pony, confirmed. Or Best Pony/Owl creature of darkness?
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Katlover2219 In reply to ??? [2016-10-17 15:37:16 +0000 UTC]
Aww... Artie you're such a sweetheart ☺️
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assainwolf9 In reply to ??? [2016-10-17 14:10:44 +0000 UTC]
the update has made me ship them more
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spiderwilliam13 [2016-10-17 13:38:16 +0000 UTC]
Ah, Artemis is using thier powers for good. That's all I wanted.
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PegasiToast In reply to ??? [2016-10-17 13:21:02 +0000 UTC]
I hope Nocturnus's child is alright ;w;
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Sn00zin In reply to ??? [2016-10-17 12:51:04 +0000 UTC]
Aaaaa yes Artemis is such a nice lil' cutie patootie
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Kaze-Blue [2016-10-17 12:50:59 +0000 UTC]
i wonder if there is a pony that Artemis cant use this trick on. like they resist it no matter how much artemis tries
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SombraTwiLuver In reply to Kaze-Blue [2016-10-17 13:34:12 +0000 UTC]
Artie can't do it to Jam. For whatever reason, she is immune to them.
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Snail-Duck In reply to SombraTwiLuver [2016-10-18 01:20:18 +0000 UTC]
it's pinkie pie's daughter, don't question it.
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ArchangelNathaniel In reply to ??? [2016-10-17 12:06:20 +0000 UTC]
Awww, it's too precious... I know that you have already settled that Artemis is with Jam but after this little story I can't help but ship them with that guard. And that brings up a question, if I may ask, has Artemis ever tried any closer contact with their subjects before they started a relationship with Jam? Or maybe having fun with them? Sorry, just curious...
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GalaxyCatReporting In reply to ??? [2016-10-17 12:01:29 +0000 UTC]
TBH Artemis is just
Everything I'd want in a ruler
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tigreanpony In reply to ??? [2016-10-17 11:56:23 +0000 UTC]
Very nicely done, that was amazing. The picture and the dialogue just work so well together.
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BreakdanceTheBird [2016-10-17 11:46:25 +0000 UTC]
Very beautiful! The added dialogue was intense!
But were these names inspired by Final Fantasy 15? "Nocturnus" sounds like "Noctis," and the name "Gladiolus" was directly in the game. If this isn't the case, then that coincidence is hella scary.
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LadyXaila In reply to BreakdanceTheBird [2016-10-17 18:40:41 +0000 UTC]
I'm guessing it's just Latin inspired naming. And Gladiolus is a genus of flower, related to the word for "sword".
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BreakdanceTheBird In reply to LadyXaila [2016-10-17 19:34:22 +0000 UTC]
That's why I shrugged. It just seems too close to be a mere coincidence. As stated before, there was always a chance that it was one (which is fine), just needed some confirmation on that. Thanks for the input.
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Unkownbrony52 [2016-10-17 10:13:56 +0000 UTC]
They are the noble we all desire: one who is truly noble.
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alipopsie [2016-10-17 09:46:52 +0000 UTC]
Artemis and I seem to have a lot in common when it comes to these situations..
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zenitraMsj In reply to ??? [2016-10-17 09:13:23 +0000 UTC]
Good story, Artemis is a fine noble, well aware of their position, responsibility and ability and not abusive of them. Knows something is wrong with an officer, doesn’t just reprimand the officer, but wants to know why.
I love the embarrassed of being shown affection, Jam has to work on that. Artemis now has the absolute loyalty of this officer for saving not just his daughter, but showing concern (kind of) for him.
Artemis will be an excellent monarch.
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