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Description   “Nocturnus.”


A low voice suddenly pierced the darkness, and the batpony standing guard jumped. “M-my liege-” The pony dropped down onto their forelegs in a fumbling bow.


“At ease, Nocturnus. We wish to speak to thee.” Artemis, the heir to the night, emerged from the darkness, quiet and graceful as a prowling panther. Nocturnus swallowed, his throat suddenly dry.


“Ah...yes, your highness. Er….lovely moon out tonight?”


“Indeed.” Artemis glanced skyward. “Mother’s artistry with the night sky knows no limit. But forbear thy flattery, Nocturnus. We have come to discuss thy performance at guard training last night. Your spar against Gladiolus was a disaster. You were sloppy, unfocused, distracted. Had your opponent been a genuine threat, you’d have been finished. A moment of inattention is all it takes for a wayward sword to spill your guts to the ground, Nocturnus.”


“I...I know, my liege. Please, I implore your forgiveness-”


“You are our lieutenant, Nocturnus. We are captain of the royal guard. Incompetence on your end reflects poorly on us. Your failure is our failure, and we will not be dishonored because thou cannot stop daydreaming during battle practice.” Artemis’ glare was enough to shame stone, and Nocturnus looked away.


“I-I’m sorry. I just...I haven’t been sleeping very well.”


“Why?” Artemis barked, making the guard pony startle. “There are countless sleeping potions available to thee-”


“No, it’s not that...I just….” Nocturnus’ ears slicked back, and he gave a quiet sigh. Artemis paused, before reaching out and placing an awkward hoof on the smaller pony’s shoulder.


“Nocturnus, what is the matter?”


“It’s nothing, your highness. You don’t need to concern yourself with me.” Nocturnus smiled, but it was half-hearted and sad, and quickly slid from his face.


Artemis was at a loss for what to do. They were a royal, a commander of ponies, not a giver of pep talks. For a moment, the alicorn considered leaving Nocturnus to sort himself out, but there was something about the slump of the batpony’s shoulders that compelled Artemis to try again.


“....Look into my eyes, Nocturnus.”


The batpony obeyed his leader. Nocturnus’ gaze was unsteady at first, afraid to look too long upon the heir to the night...but gradually, as Artemis wove a connection of magic between their minds, Nocturnus’ eyes grew dazed and lax.


“What is the source of your sorrow, my lieutenant?” Artemis’ voice echoed dully in Nocturnus’ mind, like cool rainwater dripping in a cave. The bat pony spoke, sluggish under the spell.


“....been sick….”


“Why have you not then gone to the infirmary?” Artemis’s tone was impatient. "Why have you not taken care of this earlier?"


“No, no….not me….” Nocturnus mumbled. “Her...her…....my daughter…...” A glint of worry flickered over the guard’s slack face. “Just a...filly…...can’t get out of bed…...fever, burning…..vomiting, can’t….the doctors…...don’t know what’s wrong…….told us….to get ready…..to say…...g-goodbye…” Noctunus’ eyes welled with tears.


“Dying…...”


Artemis suddenly understood. They summoned magic from their core, and probed deeper into Nocturnus’ mind. Artemis felt the smothering might of the bat pony’s despair, but pushed past it, deeper into the brain...until at last a memory floated up-a child’s bedroom. In the bed, tucked under the covers, was a tiny batpony filly, cheeks flushed with fever, being worriedly tended to by an elderly grandmother. The child let out a whimper, too weak to even cry, and the grandmother murmured desperate words of comfort and sponged at her brow.


“Nocturnus. Heed me.” Artemis barked. Despite the lulling effect of the spell, the guard pony stood at attention by habit.


“You will fly to the Whispering Mountains, and there you will fill a saddlebag with the Saussurea Obvallata flower heads you find. Return home, and mix the flower petals into a solution of equal parts meadowsweet, yarrow, and honey. Administer a spoonful thrice daily to your daughter, until her fever is broken. Do you understand?”


“Yes, my liege.” Nocturnus was waking from Artemis’ mind spell, and glanced about, baffled, but alert. “My liege...your words, I understand now...but how could you possibly know of a cure?"

"Mother Moon has been a master herbalist since the times of plague and famine. Did thou not think she'd teach me a few things?" Artemis offered a very rare smirk to the smaller pony, and Nocturnus gaped, incredulous. "Go, Nocturnus. Save your daughter."

Nocturnus' eyes burned suddenly, and without thinking, he surged forward to envelop the heir to the Night in a hug. "Thank you, my liege-"

Artemis went tense immediately, but did their best to remain calm and not shove the strange, sentimental pony away. Instead Artemis lifted a regal hoof and gingerly gave Nocturnus several quick, awkward pats on the head. "Ahem...yes. You are...er, welcome, we suppose. We will overlook this offense, Nocturnus, but, ah, touching a royal without consent can be considered treason-"

"Sincere apologies, your highness." Nocturnus hugged the alicorn even tighter for just a moment, before releasing them with a bright smile. "Perhaps imprisonment would be worth showing my gratitude to you."

"Thou can express thy gratitude with double guard shifts when thou return." Artemis coughed awkwardly, shooing the smaller pony away. "Fly, Nocturnus, make haste. Your task awaits you."

"Yes, my liege." Nocturnus spread his wings, and in an instant he was aloft and off, sailing into the light of the midnight moon. For a time, Artemis watched him fly, before they shook their body lightly, and trotted off to finish their nightly patrol.


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Princess Luna's innate magic-namely dream walking and astral projection-have manifested in strange new ways for her child, Artemis. Artemis has mysterious powers involving mind and memory...and one of their particular powers is hypnosis. Artemis can exert their will over other ponies and influence them into doing Arte's will. The ability requires steady, unbroken eye contact, long enough for Artemis to be able to command the other pony's mind (some ponies are stronger willed than others and require Arte to exert more power). Artemis usually just says "Look into my eyes", and most ponies feel automatically compelled to do so, so the eye contact thing isn't too much of a handicap

Ponies put under the spell describe it as feeling suddenly quite sleepy and pleasantly warm, with a gentle voice in their head telling them to do things.

no worries tho, artemis truly doesn't abuse this power (like Iridescence and Pandora suggest), but it really doesn't help the rumors in Canterlot that Artemis is secretly a goddamn vampire

now with dialogue. Artemis typically speaks in the royal we (unless relaxed or with friends and family), like season 2 Princess Luna
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Comments: 322

Mikkillerib In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 10:52:36 +0000 UTC]

* furiously attempting not to make eye contact with Artemis *

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Zannolin In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 10:38:27 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like the Imperius curse

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LongLiveHarryPotter7 In reply to Zannolin [2016-09-30 11:26:21 +0000 UTC]

I was thinking the same! Especially the warm feeling and the gentle voice-part :3

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sangenjin In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 09:25:52 +0000 UTC]

wonder if they use this power to influence unpleasant characters and make them better ponies, similar to their mothers dream walking.

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LiteraryJabberwocky [2016-09-30 07:20:22 +0000 UTC]

Strange, beautiful creature of the night is spooky in a dreamy way! I don't think we've ever gotten a look at Artemis' cutie mark. Can we see it, pls? 

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tomo-dachii In reply to LiteraryJabberwocky [2016-10-01 02:29:37 +0000 UTC]

It's a bow and arrow since their talent is archery, it was in an old concept photo Lop drew of them o3o

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LiteraryJabberwocky In reply to tomo-dachii [2016-10-10 03:33:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I will hunt it down

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ShimiMouse In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 07:15:30 +0000 UTC]

Most people think "AH! EVIL!!!"

And really Artie is just telling the guard it's ok to go home and get some rest, to spend time with his wife and new foal. That being distracted on duty is more unforgivable than having someone else take his shift.

....Ok that was a lot but I think you get my gist XD

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NaTabhairSuas In reply to ShimiMouse [2016-09-30 11:48:47 +0000 UTC]

Ye I do XD

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anniemomi In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 06:44:11 +0000 UTC]

Not sure why but I suddenly thought of a Siren instead of a Vampire. I'm sure they would have a lovely singing voice though.

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luna-is-best-pony1 In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 06:41:40 +0000 UTC]

Dialogue pls

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dakotadugger In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 05:39:20 +0000 UTC]

sorry not sorry  www.youtube.com/watch?v=YZvbCg…

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XuaryXth666 In reply to dakotadugger [2016-09-30 06:17:36 +0000 UTC]

loving this comment because Mass Effect is my life

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dakotadugger In reply to XuaryXth666 [2016-10-01 05:43:13 +0000 UTC]

I understand XP 

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KaroK51 In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 05:31:36 +0000 UTC]

FLASHLIGHT ON!!

But seriously i like face expressions here ^^

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SleepyWiredStudios In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 05:30:59 +0000 UTC]

"Have my usual midnight snack prepared and make extra, i have a...... special guest coming over. " 

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Skecchiart In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 05:19:37 +0000 UTC]

The first thing that came to mind seeing this was:
"Excuse me but i think you got your front lights still on"

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FallenHoneystar In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 05:18:24 +0000 UTC]

Artemis is a girl, am not mistaken?

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Lopoddity In reply to FallenHoneystar [2016-09-30 05:24:05 +0000 UTC]

Artemis is nonbinary. Not a "he" or a "she", but a "they".

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FallenHoneystar In reply to Lopoddity [2016-09-30 06:42:10 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhh, okay!

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NXD657 In reply to Lopoddity [2016-09-30 05:35:41 +0000 UTC]

Are you saying Artemis has a mind of many from "their" point of view, genderless, or both gender?

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Lopoddity In reply to NXD657 [2016-09-30 05:40:22 +0000 UTC]

I say "they" simply because there's not really any other English pronouns for someone who identifies as neither male or female.

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NXD657 In reply to Lopoddity [2016-09-30 05:48:04 +0000 UTC]

That explains it.

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EspyFandoms In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 05:13:44 +0000 UTC]

Awesomeness

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146tym In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 05:01:24 +0000 UTC]

She's totally ordering him to sneak her cookies.

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EspyFandoms In reply to 146tym [2016-10-01 03:29:26 +0000 UTC]

Artemis doesn't identify as a girl or a boy.

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146tym In reply to EspyFandoms [2016-10-01 07:40:29 +0000 UTC]

A part of me grants that that was a thoughtless oversight on my part.

And then another points out that if gender is so utterly irrelevant that someone can successfully identify as neither, then whichever term we use is utterly meaningless since it doesn't actually reflect anything meaningful about the person. It would be different if she were identifying as a third gender with its own set of characteristics, as with how some discussions of hermaphroditic identities use the terms shi and hir, but his very agender state rejects the value of gender assessments. Honestly we could probably call him an "it", except that term would actually be explicitly objectifying to her.

So yeah, I'm fine just flipping the pronoun coin for now.

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EspyFandoms In reply to 146tym [2016-10-02 06:47:40 +0000 UTC]

..... Mind has been blown.

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Badgerhead44 In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 04:43:30 +0000 UTC]

Love the lighting on this one! And the glow effect on the eyes looks really good. However, if I could make oneeeee nitpick... Artie's eyes really don't seem to be looking at the guards'. They look a little too low. However, I didn't even notice it until I zoomed in and really looked at it awhile. Overall though, fantastic work as always!

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Skyler-Bolt In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 04:37:12 +0000 UTC]

This is so cool!

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HaelHallo In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 04:35:06 +0000 UTC]

Artie; These are not the ponies you looking for.

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spiderwilliam13 In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 04:15:51 +0000 UTC]

Nice, glad to see the magical gene pool was kind to Artemis. Also i'm curious how Artemis benefits from these powers, he doesn't really seem to have a desire for... well, anything.

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WolfFurryMage [2016-09-30 04:15:44 +0000 UTC]

Leans in closers to the picture*

.......now kiss!


No but seriously, With Artie's serious and achingly beautiful look, it's no wonder it can be so easy to get into most pony's minds. This pony is definitely at his mercy...kinky. (jkjkjk!) XD

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Legacy-Galaxy In reply to WolfFurryMage [2017-07-25 19:44:44 +0000 UTC]

*their

How many times do I gotta say, Artemis does NOT have a gender, so we should just call Artemis a THEM!!!

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The-Realm-Eternal In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 03:49:19 +0000 UTC]

Dem purdy glowy eyes.

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zenitraMsj In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 03:46:01 +0000 UTC]

How can you look into those eyes and not want obey?

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TheodoraBMisfit In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 03:30:31 +0000 UTC]

Is it weird that I just wanna push the two of them together in a kiss. They're so close...gah. I wanna ship artie with a random nameless guard but Jammie is a thing dangit ;-;

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asuraludu In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 03:14:42 +0000 UTC]

Jammie claims to have the same power, but all she does is wiggle her flanks and flutters her eyes.  But there must be something to it because Artie cant seem to look away.

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Legacy-Galaxy In reply to asuraludu [2017-07-25 19:46:18 +0000 UTC]

Looking at de ass. That's what she's trying to accomplish that's got Artie so distracted and blushing!

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Martyn-Arts In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 03:12:01 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, fascinating. I wonder how Artemis uses this power? Is it a technique for calming others, thwarting enemies, or both? It's very intriguing.

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Void-Wolf In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 02:58:40 +0000 UTC]

"You will let Miss Jamboree Jessie Sandwich in whenever she requests it. She is my... special guest," Artemis tells the final guard of the night.

Artemis figures it would be easier to give her permission rather than risk her getting caught and punished.

Why Miss Jammie has become further and further on their mind, they do not know.

All they know is that she makes them happy.

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InTheNextGentury In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 02:44:27 +0000 UTC]

My headcannon that Artemis actually finds out one day from being in the forest and one of the animals looks into their eyes. Artemis wonders why this creature looks funny so they (somehow first thought) saying a command then the animal does this command. Artemis then tries it out on a pony then on a batpony (hence probably why he's doing this) and if that idea is wrong then here's another one for ya just slightly different.



Artemis actually finds out when they're little (like maybe in 4th grade or somethin?) when he goes a private school in Canterlot and a colt (or filly) looks in their eyes when examining them in curiosity and when the colt or filly looks into their eyes they immediately become in contact with their power. Artemis in curiosity(and in creepyoutiness) why this filly/colt was standing in front of them like they were in a daze, Artemis commands them to go away unknowingly not knowing the filly/colt was under their power. The filly/colt immediately goes away without a word. Artemis just shakes it off until when he tells his experience to Irie. Irie tells them they probably has cool powers to control pony's minds with them. Iriee tries to convince him to mind control ponies and stuff for fun but Artemis doesn't think this is true and doesn't listen to Irie until many years later when he finds out through studies (or through experiments he does on occasion) that they do have these powers. Then Artemis decides to use these powers for good (Much to Irie's and Pandora's dismay) and probably (because he has never done this with any other species before) experiments this power on this batpony guard.

Btw if you're thinking that Iridescence and Pandora could have been affected by this power and Artemis finds out in they're childhood years I have another headcannon that Pandora and Iridescence are prone to this power and can't be affected no matter what (maybe by genetics or something else). 

Sorry for the long post btw I just wanted to share this idea with you to help you with ideas for the dialogue. Beautiful picture and hopefully this comment doesn't get lost with the other million comments and great ideas (possibly better than mine heh) on this pic. Please reply to tell me what you think, what I did wrong, and what I should change or something along those lines and I hope you have a great night (or day depending when what time your reading this).

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PaintedPencil567 In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 02:43:40 +0000 UTC]

they look like they're going to kiss

now kiss~

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Candelee In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 02:39:37 +0000 UTC]

I SHIP THEM
I DONT EVEN KNOW THESE 2 AND I SHIP THEM

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TimeLadyDerpy In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 02:38:21 +0000 UTC]

Trust in me~

Reminds me of Kaa from jungle book.

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Unkownbrony52 In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 02:34:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh, how very ominous! (Also good to hear that phrase with out the violent use of the penance stare involved.)

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SplitMaw In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 02:31:36 +0000 UTC]

"Secretly a goddamn vampire"

Frick, ponies.  Lay off the kid.  He just might feel tempted to fuck with y'alls' minds after all if ya don't cut him some slack.

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Legacy-Galaxy In reply to SplitMaw [2017-07-25 19:50:00 +0000 UTC]

Artemis is non-binary!

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SplitMaw In reply to Legacy-Galaxy [2017-09-21 04:49:41 +0000 UTC]

Alrighty, then friendo.  I was unaware of that part of the character's info.  Chill.

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Icyangel12 In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 02:31:29 +0000 UTC]

This is the greatest thing, I can just imagine Jamie having an unusually strong will (or just a resistance to) Arte's hypnosis after one of her early relationship break ins.

"Jamboree look into my eyes..."

"Sure thing!" The sandwich daughter looks into the child of the nights eyes with a goofy expression.

"Good now, leave me I have much work to-"

"Wowie Sugar Bear I didn't know your eyes could glow like that, it makes them even more gorgeous than before!" Which causes poor Artmis to skwock indignantly and later preform a series of tests to figure out why the hell it doesn't work on this weird pink made who keeps breaking into their wing of the castle. (It may be because she has an innate magical ability due to residual effects of her mother's experience with different types of magic or it could also be because wears contacts after coaxing Errie to tell her of her cousins power and how it correlates to direct eye contact with a sugary delicacy, who knows.)

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