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Description   “Nocturnus.”


A low voice suddenly pierced the darkness, and the batpony standing guard jumped. “M-my liege-” The pony dropped down onto their forelegs in a fumbling bow.


“At ease, Nocturnus. We wish to speak to thee.” Artemis, the heir to the night, emerged from the darkness, quiet and graceful as a prowling panther. Nocturnus swallowed, his throat suddenly dry.


“Ah...yes, your highness. Er….lovely moon out tonight?”


“Indeed.” Artemis glanced skyward. “Mother’s artistry with the night sky knows no limit. But forbear thy flattery, Nocturnus. We have come to discuss thy performance at guard training last night. Your spar against Gladiolus was a disaster. You were sloppy, unfocused, distracted. Had your opponent been a genuine threat, you’d have been finished. A moment of inattention is all it takes for a wayward sword to spill your guts to the ground, Nocturnus.”


“I...I know, my liege. Please, I implore your forgiveness-”


“You are our lieutenant, Nocturnus. We are captain of the royal guard. Incompetence on your end reflects poorly on us. Your failure is our failure, and we will not be dishonored because thou cannot stop daydreaming during battle practice.” Artemis’ glare was enough to shame stone, and Nocturnus looked away.


“I-I’m sorry. I just...I haven’t been sleeping very well.”


“Why?” Artemis barked, making the guard pony startle. “There are countless sleeping potions available to thee-”


“No, it’s not that...I just….” Nocturnus’ ears slicked back, and he gave a quiet sigh. Artemis paused, before reaching out and placing an awkward hoof on the smaller pony’s shoulder.


“Nocturnus, what is the matter?”


“It’s nothing, your highness. You don’t need to concern yourself with me.” Nocturnus smiled, but it was half-hearted and sad, and quickly slid from his face.


Artemis was at a loss for what to do. They were a royal, a commander of ponies, not a giver of pep talks. For a moment, the alicorn considered leaving Nocturnus to sort himself out, but there was something about the slump of the batpony’s shoulders that compelled Artemis to try again.


“....Look into my eyes, Nocturnus.”


The batpony obeyed his leader. Nocturnus’ gaze was unsteady at first, afraid to look too long upon the heir to the night...but gradually, as Artemis wove a connection of magic between their minds, Nocturnus’ eyes grew dazed and lax.


“What is the source of your sorrow, my lieutenant?” Artemis’ voice echoed dully in Nocturnus’ mind, like cool rainwater dripping in a cave. The bat pony spoke, sluggish under the spell.


“....been sick….”


“Why have you not then gone to the infirmary?” Artemis’s tone was impatient. "Why have you not taken care of this earlier?"


“No, no….not me….” Nocturnus mumbled. “Her...her…....my daughter…...” A glint of worry flickered over the guard’s slack face. “Just a...filly…...can’t get out of bed…...fever, burning…..vomiting, can’t….the doctors…...don’t know what’s wrong…….told us….to get ready…..to say…...g-goodbye…” Noctunus’ eyes welled with tears.


“Dying…...”


Artemis suddenly understood. They summoned magic from their core, and probed deeper into Nocturnus’ mind. Artemis felt the smothering might of the bat pony’s despair, but pushed past it, deeper into the brain...until at last a memory floated up-a child’s bedroom. In the bed, tucked under the covers, was a tiny batpony filly, cheeks flushed with fever, being worriedly tended to by an elderly grandmother. The child let out a whimper, too weak to even cry, and the grandmother murmured desperate words of comfort and sponged at her brow.


“Nocturnus. Heed me.” Artemis barked. Despite the lulling effect of the spell, the guard pony stood at attention by habit.


“You will fly to the Whispering Mountains, and there you will fill a saddlebag with the Saussurea Obvallata flower heads you find. Return home, and mix the flower petals into a solution of equal parts meadowsweet, yarrow, and honey. Administer a spoonful thrice daily to your daughter, until her fever is broken. Do you understand?”


“Yes, my liege.” Nocturnus was waking from Artemis’ mind spell, and glanced about, baffled, but alert. “My liege...your words, I understand now...but how could you possibly know of a cure?"

"Mother Moon has been a master herbalist since the times of plague and famine. Did thou not think she'd teach me a few things?" Artemis offered a very rare smirk to the smaller pony, and Nocturnus gaped, incredulous. "Go, Nocturnus. Save your daughter."

Nocturnus' eyes burned suddenly, and without thinking, he surged forward to envelop the heir to the Night in a hug. "Thank you, my liege-"

Artemis went tense immediately, but did their best to remain calm and not shove the strange, sentimental pony away. Instead Artemis lifted a regal hoof and gingerly gave Nocturnus several quick, awkward pats on the head. "Ahem...yes. You are...er, welcome, we suppose. We will overlook this offense, Nocturnus, but, ah, touching a royal without consent can be considered treason-"

"Sincere apologies, your highness." Nocturnus hugged the alicorn even tighter for just a moment, before releasing them with a bright smile. "Perhaps imprisonment would be worth showing my gratitude to you."

"Thou can express thy gratitude with double guard shifts when thou return." Artemis coughed awkwardly, shooing the smaller pony away. "Fly, Nocturnus, make haste. Your task awaits you."

"Yes, my liege." Nocturnus spread his wings, and in an instant he was aloft and off, sailing into the light of the midnight moon. For a time, Artemis watched him fly, before they shook their body lightly, and trotted off to finish their nightly patrol.


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Princess Luna's innate magic-namely dream walking and astral projection-have manifested in strange new ways for her child, Artemis. Artemis has mysterious powers involving mind and memory...and one of their particular powers is hypnosis. Artemis can exert their will over other ponies and influence them into doing Arte's will. The ability requires steady, unbroken eye contact, long enough for Artemis to be able to command the other pony's mind (some ponies are stronger willed than others and require Arte to exert more power). Artemis usually just says "Look into my eyes", and most ponies feel automatically compelled to do so, so the eye contact thing isn't too much of a handicap

Ponies put under the spell describe it as feeling suddenly quite sleepy and pleasantly warm, with a gentle voice in their head telling them to do things.

no worries tho, artemis truly doesn't abuse this power (like Iridescence and Pandora suggest), but it really doesn't help the rumors in Canterlot that Artemis is secretly a goddamn vampire

now with dialogue. Artemis typically speaks in the royal we (unless relaxed or with friends and family), like season 2 Princess Luna
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Comments: 322

HaelHallo In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 04:33:44 +0000 UTC]

I love this

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Hydrophius In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 02:30:21 +0000 UTC]

You should draw pink fluffy unicorn and Chrysalis

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Yingtheeevee In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 02:29:05 +0000 UTC]

i love artemis's mane colors ewe

jellliiissss

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SilverShade2402 In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 02:28:47 +0000 UTC]

Ship

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templar127 [2016-09-30 02:28:35 +0000 UTC]

Artemis: You did not see me steal Luna's cookies last night

XD

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Hydrophius In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 02:25:52 +0000 UTC]

They are so cool

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Owl-Beast In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 02:23:33 +0000 UTC]

I adore Artemis. They are truly one of my favorite characters of yours. <3

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RainbowPhoenix16 In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 02:11:59 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me of the imperius curse, but very cool.

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SinjaAussiaAngels In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 02:11:18 +0000 UTC]

Artemis looks so mystically majestic!

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DragoLord19D In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 02:07:53 +0000 UTC]

Artemis: You did not see or hear me singing love ballads to my Consort Jamboree Jessie Sandwich
Luna Guard: I... saw Nothing... I... heard nothing.... I... know nothing...

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zenitraMsj In reply to DragoLord19D [2016-09-30 03:50:20 +0000 UTC]

SCHULTZ!

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SilverStarStrike In reply to DragoLord19D [2016-09-30 02:15:54 +0000 UTC]

This is brilliant.

(sorry for the sudden reply)

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Poison-Anthem In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 02:02:16 +0000 UTC]

That guard is so handsome <3

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Shadowisker In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:59:59 +0000 UTC]

needs dialogue.

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Numbuh-27 In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:55:58 +0000 UTC]

I bet they get tired of all the Canterlot tabloids.

They tear those up and make it into paper maché balls for Jam's party cannon.

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wild-blank In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:55:35 +0000 UTC]

"look into my eyes."

>Run away?
HECK YEAH.

Got away safely...

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Maddi-Sans In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:55:19 +0000 UTC]

Wonder of he can do this with Jamboree X3

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OddishCrafts In reply to Maddi-Sans [2016-09-30 02:01:44 +0000 UTC]

Artemis uses they/them pronouns.

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Maddi-Sans In reply to OddishCrafts [2016-09-30 10:38:42 +0000 UTC]

Ah dang, I forgot XD Sometimes it slips.

But as I was saying, wonder if they can do this to Jamboree?

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SaphiraDragonHert In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:54:33 +0000 UTC]

Ooh! This really adds to his character. I imagine him upswing N. That power to help others with phobias or have trouble sleeping. Imagine if he had a younger sibling and they had a nightmare, he could use that power to help them back to sleep.

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OddishCrafts In reply to SaphiraDragonHert [2016-09-30 02:01:29 +0000 UTC]

Artemis uses they/them pronouns. They are non-binary.

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dragonlover278 In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:51:59 +0000 UTC]

It reminds me of the older vampire legends....

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CollinMagney In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:49:09 +0000 UTC]

This is pretty interesting.

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NervousArtgurl In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:48:28 +0000 UTC]

I mean he might at well be! hates sunlight, night owl(pun intended), and know hypnosis?! C'mon

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OddishCrafts In reply to NervousArtgurl [2016-09-30 02:00:57 +0000 UTC]

Artemis uses they/them pronouns.

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Lopoddity In reply to OddishCrafts [2016-09-30 02:38:45 +0000 UTC]

Please, you don't need to correct everyone.

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OddishCrafts In reply to Lopoddity [2016-09-30 13:20:58 +0000 UTC]

Alright, sorry. I guess I went a little overboard.

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NervousArtgurl In reply to OddishCrafts [2016-09-30 02:19:00 +0000 UTC]

I forgot,my bad

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ChaoticAstronaut In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:42:59 +0000 UTC]

Arte is by far my favorite!

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LunaSpyker In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:42:41 +0000 UTC]

What would happen if they accidentally used this with Jam?

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KnightofBlueEyes In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:39:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh my Ra! I love your artwork, Pandora is my favorite of your creations, I always picture her when I think of Dissy (Discord) and Twi (Twilight) having children, specifically a daughter  

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CreativiZ-Rocks In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:36:31 +0000 UTC]

Galaxy Cotton Candy Pony (JamxArtemis): Bleh, Bleh Bleh!

Artemis: I DO NOT SAY BLEH, BLEH BLEH.

**when no one's looking**

Jam: Bleh, Bleh Bleh...

G.C.C.P.: Bleh, Bleh Bleh!

Artemis: IT WAS YOU!!!!

((srry i couldn't pass up that opportunity...))

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BenevolentBovine In reply to CreativiZ-Rocks [2016-09-30 02:57:37 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE THIS MOVIE SO MUCH

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Kale-Stars In reply to CreativiZ-Rocks [2016-09-30 01:41:38 +0000 UTC]

omg I love this so much!!

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LittleSlimy In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:35:23 +0000 UTC]

worship me x1000

.... what? He gets luna inferior complex!

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Sn00zin In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:33:38 +0000 UTC]

Artemis being a vampire?
Wowie that's an interesting rumor XD

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Tineid In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:31:20 +0000 UTC]

I imagine Artemis using this when they just don't have time for a proper pep talk.
"Look into my eyes. The rumours about your next assignment don't frighten you. You are braver than you think. You will be a shining example to the ponies that follow you."

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Emmadagood In reply to Tineid [2016-09-30 01:40:28 +0000 UTC]

I feel like that's exactly what she'd do. Because screw trying to be social, hypnotism is easier.

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OddishCrafts In reply to Emmadagood [2016-09-30 02:00:30 +0000 UTC]

Artemis uses they/them pronouns.

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Emmadagood In reply to OddishCrafts [2016-09-30 02:02:12 +0000 UTC]

Woops, forgot.

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NunChops In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:30:02 +0000 UTC]

Wow this looks awesome great work with this i like the colors :3.

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RamDaPanda In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:28:54 +0000 UTC]

I see artemis as a boy in pony form and a girl in human form.
Is that accepted in this society?

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CreativiZ-Rocks In reply to RamDaPanda [2016-11-20 18:50:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm pretty sure they wouldn't mind.

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Screamvee In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:28:38 +0000 UTC]

i want them to smooch that guard pony

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bluethedjfurry2 In reply to Screamvee [2016-09-30 01:40:46 +0000 UTC]

*them

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Screamvee In reply to bluethedjfurry2 [2016-09-30 01:48:07 +0000 UTC]

heCk my bad ;;
sorry,,

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bluethedjfurry2 In reply to Screamvee [2016-11-14 03:05:47 +0000 UTC]

It's cool and sorry just realized you replied

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Dadjoke-Ness In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:27:06 +0000 UTC]

"Do not raise any alarms. Do not follow me. I am merely going on a hunt."

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RenegadeEmerald In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:26:41 +0000 UTC]

I love this. I love the tone, the design.   

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jackwolf1 In reply to ??? [2016-09-30 01:26:23 +0000 UTC]

Has Arte ever used this power to (attempt to) get rid of Jamboree? I can see a lot of hilarity resulting from the uses of this power.

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