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Left to right: Hollykit, Nightcloud, Jaykit, Lionkit, Breezekit
Hey so how about a Warriors AU where Leafpool pulled a Bluestar and sent her kits to be raised by Crowfeather and Nightcloud
More details under the cut!
Okay so, Leafpool finds out that she’s pregnant. She’s not quite sure what to do, or who to confide in; I do think that she’d tell Squirrelflight, and maybe suggest that Squirrelflight raise the kits, but understandably Squirrelflight wouldn’t be so supportive of this idea, as she and Brambleclaw’s relationship is on the rocks still and she can’t lie to her Clan like that, and Leafpool would understand completely
She’d also tell Crowfeather, I think, when she’s able to corner him. He’d be surprised, maybe a little happy? But overall he’s panicked, because he’s trying to prove his loyalty to WindClan, and Nightcloud is expecting his kits now, so it’s not like he can join ThunderClan to raise his kids or have Leafpool join WindClan; that isn’t possible for Leafpool anyways, as she’s ThunderClan’s only medicine cat right now, and she can’t leave them when they’re so vulnerable
However, the answer comes unexpectantly from Barkface, who confides in Leafpool that it looks like many of WindClan’s kits won’t survive being kitted; Nightcloud’s pregnancy, for instance, is going south, and Barkface worries that the kits won’t survive
When she can, Leafpool goes to Nightcloud and explains that she’s pregnant, and offers her kits to Nightcloud to raise. At first, Nightcloud would be enraged; how dare the disloyal ThunderClan medicine cat try to replace her litter before they were even born?? However, as Nightcloud’s pregnancy continues and the lucklihood of the kit’s survival gets less and less, she agrees to take in Leafpool’s kits
So, Nightcloud, Leafpool, and Crowfeather make a plan (and maybe Barkface is in on it too); once the kit’s arrival gets closer, Nightcloud tells WindClan that she wants to give birth to her kits on her own and far away (as most the Clan believes that these kits are on the verge of death, they support her decision and let her grieve); meanwhile, Leafpool and Squirrelflight leave ThunderClan and meet up with her. The three mollies travel together to find a safe place for the kits to be born
Nightcloud starts kitting prematurely, to the surprise of them all. It’s a very complicated birth, and Nightcloud ends up giving birth to four kits, only one of whom survives. Nightcloud herself barely survives, but with Leafpool’s expertise and Squirrelflight’s assistance, she’s able to pull through. Nightcloud names him Breezekit, after he survived the blistering winds that he was born in. All three mollies dot on him endlessly, even as Nightcloud grieves the death of her other three kits
Not soon after, on a particularly snowy night, Leafpool gives birth. Fortunately, she gives birth to three healthy kits; Jaykit, Hollykit, and Lionkit. Immediately, Nightcloud grows fond of them; she believes that maybe, the spirits of her three dead kits will live on in these three. It takes Nightcloud no time to love them as much as she loves Breezekit, and Leafpool knows that they’ll be in good hands
After a few moons, Nightcloud decides its time to take the kits back to WindClan, before they can start developing memories. Leafpool and Squirrelflight are sad to see their kin go, but Nightcloud thanks them for what they’ve given her, and says she’ll tell them all about the kits and how they grow; internally, she already plans for Hollykit’s warrior name to be Hollyleaf
WindClan is surprised, but incredibly delighted to see Nightcloud return with four healthy kits. Breezekit, Lionkit, Hollykit, and Jaykit are all considered blessings to WindClan, and the children of Crowfeather and Nightcloud
Some extra things:
- Since Kestralflight is a little older than Jayfeather, he’d become the medicine cat of WindClan, giving Jayfeather the chance to be a warrior
- Hollyleaf and Breezepelt are the mama’s kids; Jayfeather and Lionblaze are the kids who are all “ew mom gross stop trying to groom uS IN FRONT OF OUR FRIENDS”
- Breezepaw’s mentor was canonically Whitetail; I think Hollypaw’s mentor would be Onestar (because I think Holly always had a sort of ‘bossy’ attitude and Onestar saw that she had potential to be a great leader when she grew up, so he wanted to ‘guide’ her; it resulted in a young Hollypaw constantly disagreeing with his leadership skills), Jaypaw’s given Ashfoot (because 1. thats his grandma and 2. shes the only cat patient enough for him), and Lionpaw would probably get Weaselfur
- Jayfeather absolutely 100 percent has a big gross crush on Kestralflight and his siblings keep embarrassing him about it
- Breezepelt actually has a really good relationship with his other siblings; finding out that they don’t share the same mother is a harsh blow to him (I’m not sure how that’d effect the story down the line, but it’d probably be super dramatic and give Breezepelt a bit more of a sympathetic character arc)
- With Jayfeather in WindClan, I think maybe Icecloud would become Leafpool’s apprentice? Why not it’s cute
- I think Crowfeather would still be kind of a shitty dad??? Like I don’t think the guy is very Father material, and like he only had kids to seem ‘more loyal’ to WindClan, but Nightcloud would make up for it by being NUMBER ONE MOM and all four siblings would support each other
IDK its just a goofy au that im suddenly very attached too and i would be MORE than happy to discuss it in further detail
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Comments: 57
NexusPieXIII [2021-08-25 11:45:11 +0000 UTC]
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Stumpspirit35 [2021-01-22 14:48:08 +0000 UTC]
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mathes0n In reply to valvacana [2019-11-23 17:42:10 +0000 UTC]
Aaa thank you!! ^^
Truth be told, I haven't quite figured out how I want the secret to come out -- the fire scene is such an iconic one, so changing it is a task. The ideas I've had consisted of "it's Sol who confronts them and uses this secret against them as a means to manipulate them", or "an overly jealous Breezepelt who's been manipulated by the Dark Forest confronts his siblings on this secret", but I'm not too sure yet! Thank you so much for your interest though ^^
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undyne1235 In reply to mathes0n [2020-08-28 19:37:56 +0000 UTC]
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DarkWitchling [2019-08-19 02:49:10 +0000 UTC]
'Leafpool wpuld understand completely'
Well we know how long ago this was written.
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mathes0n In reply to DarkWitchling [2019-10-17 01:03:00 +0000 UTC]
LMAO yeah, I have a few disagreements with how canon treated things lol
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Goldheartart19 [2019-08-09 22:39:14 +0000 UTC]
I would read this. This sounded like a much more interesting story. I literally wrote an entire rant about how they could have done more with Breezepelt. This would have done a fantastic way to do that.
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mathes0n In reply to Goldheartart19 [2019-10-17 01:05:24 +0000 UTC]
Oh I agree!! It seems like the authors could never decide on if Breezepelt was a sad character with flaws or a straight up villain -- it goes back and forth a bit? Him having siblings to worry about would change things a bit... as well as the reveal that his siblings are apart of a god sent prophecy and he is not...
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Goldheartart19 In reply to mathes0n [2019-10-22 21:46:46 +0000 UTC]
I agree also I support Nightcloud being #1 mom.
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LamsIsLoveLamsIsLife [2019-06-07 21:33:51 +0000 UTC]
My AU now. I'm gonna brag about it and make art
(You get credit tho)
Like how did you come up with this? It's my new fave AU
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mathes0n In reply to LamsIsLoveLamsIsLife [2019-06-13 01:09:56 +0000 UTC]
Awww thank you so much!!!! And I mostly came up with it because WindClan is my favorite Clan so I liked the idea of an arc taking place there -- then I thought it'd be interesting to put Nightcloud in a more sympathetic light, and, well ;v; the rest is history
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xXXThunderstormXXx [2019-05-24 21:55:51 +0000 UTC]
Why am I just now finding this!? I love it! Great job!
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mathes0n In reply to xXXThunderstormXXx [2019-06-13 01:10:05 +0000 UTC]
aaa thank you!!! <3 <3 <3
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Autumnderp [2018-10-13 20:52:16 +0000 UTC]
great starclan this is one of the best warriors au I've ever read
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mathes0n In reply to Autumnderp [2018-10-21 17:31:24 +0000 UTC]
<3 <3 <3 thank you so much!!!!
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2021toryng804 [2018-09-27 10:36:04 +0000 UTC]
Omg this has raised by life expectancy by 10000000000 years for this I thank U
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mathes0n In reply to 2021toryng804 [2018-10-21 17:31:34 +0000 UTC]
aaaaaaa im glad!!!! thank you!!! <3
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mathes0n In reply to Mopfish05 [2018-10-21 17:30:31 +0000 UTC]
I would love too!!! Unfortunately I am a busy adult who's not able to work on a lot of stuff on my down time, but I'd like to!!! I've been working on bits and pieces, theres just a lot of planning thats going behind it!
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Mopfish05 In reply to mathes0n [2018-10-22 05:16:08 +0000 UTC]
Aw that sucks. Its a really good au and i like the way you draw the characters.
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Blossom-heart44 [2018-09-10 00:47:14 +0000 UTC]
I don’t like the idea but it’s very creative!🙂
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WolfshadeofNightclan In reply to YumeQueen [2018-08-28 23:07:18 +0000 UTC]
No, she referenced Bluestar because Bluestar did the same thing and return her kits to Oakheart.
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MizukiGlow [2018-05-10 19:37:32 +0000 UTC]
Boy, I really like everything about this AU!
My darling Nightcloud deserves more love <3
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mathes0n In reply to MizukiGlow [2018-05-17 19:28:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!!!
Yeah, I agree ;-; I've always felt like Nightcloud was always given the short end of the stick in the series, when her biggest crime could really be defined as 'fiercely loved her son and wanted to keep her family together'. She could be extreme at times, but thats honestly what makes her a compelling character. Thats mostly why I wanted to make this AU, where Nightcloud is a main character ^^
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MizukiGlow In reply to mathes0n [2018-05-19 08:36:27 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! Thank you for replying
Sometimes I think that even the Erins want to demonize Nightcloud, when she is an actual character with realistic flaws and a not-so-easy life. Besides, she still has a fair amount of good traits - like, she's loyal, nurturing, devoted and a loving mother. I always found it hard to understand why people would hate her to such a degree. It especially annoys me when people say that Breezepelt's behaviour is completely her fault, like Crowfeather stated in The Last Hope. Well, I could go on and rant about this, but I prefer not to, I can be really bothersome at times ^^'
I have actually written a One-Shot about Nightcloud when she discovers Breezepelt's betrayal during the battle against the Dark Forest. I plan on uploading it here sometimes, but it's written in German (my mother tongue), so I would need to translate that and my English is far from perfect ^^ But I think I will, eventually.
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mathes0n In reply to MizukiGlow [2018-05-29 23:32:46 +0000 UTC]
I agree!!!! Nightcloud isn't a bad cat; an overprotective mother at worst, but she had PLENTY of positive traits. A scene that's often forgotten in The Sight is when after Breezepaw and Lionpaw are saved from the cave-in, Nightcloud dotes upon both of them equally -- she's a very loving cat, they just haven't had the chance to show that!!
And that sounds like an AWESOME idea for a fic; if you ever get the chance to translate it, I'd love to read it!!
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MizukiGlow In reply to mathes0n [2018-06-23 10:29:07 +0000 UTC]
Yes, finally! Nightcloud could have been such a great character if the Erins gave her more of a chance. But hey, that's what fan work and AUs are for. I'm excited to see more of this!
Thank you! I might get on that soon, then ^^
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pikipekker [2018-03-02 16:53:46 +0000 UTC]
im???? blessed?? this au is so pure and lovely, id really love to see this <33
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mathes0n In reply to pikipekker [2018-03-06 15:50:20 +0000 UTC]
!!!! thank you so much <3 <3
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AKitNamedMinty [2018-01-23 02:37:46 +0000 UTC]
This is way too cute, I love this AU, it is by far my favorite AU, that I have ever seen. Do you have any more art for this AU?
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mathes0n In reply to AKitNamedMinty [2018-03-06 15:50:09 +0000 UTC]
I plan on working on it on my own time; I'd really love to make a whole thing for it! Thank you so much <3
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AKitNamedMinty In reply to mathes0n [2018-03-07 06:13:08 +0000 UTC]
Awesome and I hope you do make a bunch of stuff for it. No problem just telling the truth.
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SnapCrackleLolliPOP [2017-11-08 02:02:37 +0000 UTC]
This is the most precious thing on earth.
Thank you so much for thinking of this blessed universe.
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