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Meliran — Time to wake up
Published: 2016-05-10 00:10:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 32467; Favourites: 349; Downloads: 216
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Well, wrote 4,300 words of a little short story I'm doing and wanted to publish something, so wrote a quick little cap.Commissions are open for caps and stories!
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You do humor? This one made me chuckle for some reason.
Anyway, I like the simplicity of this one.
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Oh man, I haven't written an outright humor story since I was in high school - 10 years ago. It'd be interested to try again, though a lot of the things that make me chuckle are slapstick which can't really be written.
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Yeah saying "Karry slapped Doug upside the head for that minor offense" doesn't carry the same weight as seeing it. The closest techniques to slapstick readily available in writing are surreal, irony and wordplay.
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Why wouldn't you choose the locked room ? The lock looks so tempting...
Oh, and maybe horror game habits.
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the scary thing about this story is how familiar it is, i had a dream like that just the opposite way, going from girl to guy?
above all i love the story i want to read more about it!!
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