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Random shots from this one: [link]Edit: Changed 4th image's dialog from
"Look at all these homeworks. They got "Copy Paste" written all over them."
to
"Look at all of these homework. They have "Copy Paste" written all over them."
Thanks for the suggestions.
I swear, there are millions of grammatical errors to be seen in the game.
Edit2:
Changed the dialog again as suggested.
This just proves I fail at English. Maybe I should consider hiring an editor...
...
Or rather not. Hiring doesn't sound reasonable considering that this was meant to be a small project to be released for free...
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One thing,
I think when watching your livestream
where you had this open,
it somewhere said something like "she ran passed me"
but
I think it should be "she ran past me"
not sure though! Just wanted to tell (:
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instead of these it should be this ((if you like I can help with revising 
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you got me at horse whip man.
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Awesome ness c:
Busty teacher, pretty girls and guys, and awesome bgs
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It looks like an RPG game cut scenes. I really like the Teacher said "Copy paste".
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You almost got it.
4th image dialogue should read:
"Look at all of this homework. It's got copy and paste written all over it."
'This homework' is a group, therefore singular, so 'it' and not 'them'. Or, you could say
"Look at all of these homework assignments. They have copy and paste written all over them."
Or even
"Look at all of these essays. They have copy and paste written all over them." depending on the context.
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Wonderful art.
But it should say "Look at all of this homework. It's got "copy paste" written all over it."
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yeah, sounds a little scary doesn't it 
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Or maybe following her where ever she goes and pretending like it was a total coincidence when she realizes? lol
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edit on the 4th image "Look at all this homework. It's got copy paste written all over it" homework can be considered a lot like an element. even when there is a lot of it, it can still be considered a single object.
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What's satisfying is that it isn't typical annie-may dialogue.
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So this is from a visual novel? The drawings look so...shiny, like paint. I guess that is what you can do when you have photoshop.
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This would also sound good:
Look at all this homework, it's got copy-paste written all over it.
or
Look at all this homework, it has copy-paste written all over it.
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Shouldn't it be "Look at all of THIS homework," not "Look at all of THESE homework"?
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TEACHER WITH BIG BOOBS? WHO-oh wait that happens in everything that's right. :I
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seriously, where can i download or buy one of your games
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loved the part of "copy paste" XDDD
that's quite the reality in Brazil.
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Hmmm........we're can I download it? It seems like a very fun game, and I really want to support you're work ^^
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Also, dunno if you're worried about grammar and such, but it would be "Look at all of these homework/Look at all of this homework. They've got/They have 'Copy and Paste' written all over them."
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Why does almost every teacher in an anime or VN have huge breasts?
Well, I guess Pani Poni Dash is the exception to that.
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I just realized... Mikado... (is that the blonde's name? Mikado?) She looks a bit like Rui from Lux-Pain.
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lol the last bit caught me off guard xD
You should replace "Homeworks" with "homework assignments" ^^
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God I can't wait for u to finish this
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Shouldn't it say "this homework" instead of "these homeworks"? O.o
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Heh, noticed that too. Should also be they have instead of they got.
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Alternatively "They've got" would work too, I think "They have" sounds better though.
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...Stalking and horse whips...I'm very curious as to the story right now
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pretty epic,
its kinda hard to make out which pieces are 3D and which are 2D
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