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Random shots from this one: [link]Edit: Changed 4th image's dialog from
"Look at all these homeworks. They got "Copy Paste" written all over them."
to
"Look at all of these homework. They have "Copy Paste" written all over them."
Thanks for the suggestions.
I swear, there are millions of grammatical errors to be seen in the game.
Edit2:
Changed the dialog again as suggested.
This just proves I fail at English. Maybe I should consider hiring an editor...
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Or rather not. Hiring doesn't sound reasonable considering that this was meant to be a small project to be released for free...
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One problem!
Homework is never plural! Even if I have work in, I dunno, over nine-thousand subjects, it'll be my "homework"!
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hey look! a teacher attatched to a pair of bewbs
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In the second picture, you should really add some more noticeable eye shines to that guy.
He looks like he's going to kill somebody. LOL
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trolol this seems hilarious
can't wait man!
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random horse whip in a random school room???
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I remember this from your LiveStream 
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wow, interesting school XD
ps: It's "look at all this homework" ^^
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lolis? School? THIS HAS MURDER STORY WRITTEN ALL OVER IT!
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"Look at all these homeworks!"
Shouldn't it be home assignments or something? I've never seen the word homeworks used like that
Also who keeps horse whips on their tables!?
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I dunno about elsewhere, but in America, we would just say "Look at all of this homework."
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Yeah that would work too. But it's definitely not "Look at all these homeworks"
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But it's funny as "Look at all these homeworks". It's like a LOLcat quote! ;D
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WOULD YOU JUST LOOK AT ALL THESE HOMEWORKS
THEY'RE EVERYWHERE
WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO DO WITH ALL THESE HOMEWORKS
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THESE HOMEWORKS, THEY NEED THE GRADES
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I accidentally all these homeworks ;A;
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.....
1# "Not weird at all"
2# "What a good classmate"
3# Wonder what it is.
4# "....... huh?"
5# WAIT, WHAT?!
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It's looking real great, Mike! The last shot is definately intriguing.
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that last part cracked me up
i wonder what she's going to do with the horse whip
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Some of the verb tenses and sentences are worded strangely, "Look at all these homeworks. They got "Copy Paste" written all over them". It'd sound better if you said, "Look at these homework assignments. They have "Copy Paste" written all over them."
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or "Look at all this homework. They've got 'Copy and paste' written all over them."
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Interesting o.o
The scenery in the last shot is kinda spooky.
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It looks great. Except that last panel frightens me a bit...
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That teacher.. Would be my boyfriend in a girl version. pff
beautiful, can't wait till your project is finished! *A*b
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Holy crap. That teacher's a little bustier than normal, eh?
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