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MikuParanormal — Stalker (CP OC ref.)

Published: 2016-03-07 18:39:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 13797; Favourites: 243; Downloads: 21
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Description Update 14.07.16 : updated her personality and origin a bit.
Update 17.09.16: redrew her ref (damn, them titz tho XD)
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Name:
Stalker

Real Name:
Leslie Brown

Age:
20 (Died at the Age of 18)

Gender:
Female

Species:
Ghost

Languages Spoken:
American English

Personality:

Around strangers she is usally very sweet and friendly.
She loves to meet new people and to find new friends.

With friends she is also sweet and friendly.
She trusts them very much and knows that they would never try to take her big love away from her.

But as soon as she Sees another girl flirting or even just talking to her "lover" she becomes very aggressive and has this big urge to just kill those girls (which she then tends to do).

Catchphrase:
*sigh* you look so cute when you are scared ♥

Sexual Preference: 
heterosexual

last VictimEx Boyfriend: Dave Black

Victim nowBoyfriend: unknown

Date Of Birth:
3rd december

Eye Color:
light green

Likes:
- her stuffed animals
- her camera
- writing letters
- visiting her beloved one
- taking care that her bf doesn't get annoyed by other girls
- goth fashion
 
Favorite color:
pink

Fears:
- loosing her beloved one
- churches
- crowds
- other girls

Weapons:
she uses a pipe if she get one in hand

Weaknesses: 
- direct sunlight
- exorcism
- churches
- ignorance

Strengths:
- very patient when it comes to stalking
- able to go through walls
- can turn herself invisible
- can teleport for short distances

Backstory:
Leslie was a very isolated girl and only had a small group of friends.
She hated being at school, but went to it it anyway because of a guy named francis. He was the most popular guy in her class and every single girl she somehow knew was in love with him too.

One day she was brave enough to confess her feelings to him, but after she did that he laughed at her and told her she was not good enough for him.
Leslie became so sad about this that she went to the nearest bridge that night to take her own life.
While looking down she noticed that there were tons of things to stay alive for and wanted to turn around but then she had to think about Francis again and wanted to jump and so on... 
During all of that desicion-making she slipped off the bridge and feel to her death.
A few hours later she woke up as if nothing happened and went away.

(The police arrived later to salvage leslies corpse.)

One year after that event a boy named francis was found dead in his house.
 next to him was a short letter which said:

" I love you, Leslie!"

How she kills:
She basically ruins her victims life until he confesses his "love" to her and after that happened she just murders him with a satisfying smile.

Friends/Allies:
(OPEN!)

Chester
stickstickly1559.deviantart.co…

Enemies/ Rivals:
(OPEN!)

Stalker belongs to me.
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Comments: 129

Disease-Love12 [2019-02-14 21:15:15 +0000 UTC]

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MikuParanormal In reply to Disease-Love12 [2019-04-19 15:40:23 +0000 UTC]

Sure, why not owo

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blackcatdva [2018-07-17 09:51:41 +0000 UTC]

Can Chloe be her friend and Allie?

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MikuParanormal In reply to blackcatdva [2018-07-17 14:05:25 +0000 UTC]

sure~

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blackcatdva In reply to MikuParanormal [2018-07-17 14:56:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! 

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Panzeruser1944 [2018-07-11 18:19:14 +0000 UTC]

Get out of here S.T.A.L.K.E.R

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MikuParanormal In reply to Panzeruser1944 [2018-07-12 19:58:50 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Darkness-Beauty [2018-02-02 07:59:46 +0000 UTC]

she look pretty amazing can i add Sea Killer as her friends Sea Killer

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MikuParanormal In reply to Darkness-Beauty [2018-02-03 20:20:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ;u;
And of coure you can~

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Darkness-Beauty In reply to MikuParanormal [2018-02-03 20:30:38 +0000 UTC]

your welcome :3 her and Scars be bff

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MikuParanormal In reply to Darkness-Beauty [2018-02-03 23:52:14 +0000 UTC]

Sure~

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Darkness-Beauty In reply to MikuParanormal [2018-02-03 23:58:18 +0000 UTC]

yay your best

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MikuParanormal In reply to Darkness-Beauty [2018-02-03 23:58:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks XD

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Darkness-Beauty In reply to MikuParanormal [2018-02-04 00:17:42 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome  

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Weirdly-Insane [2017-12-26 05:48:16 +0000 UTC]

Can my OC be friends?

weirdly-insane.deviantart.com/…

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MikuParanormal In reply to Weirdly-Insane [2017-12-26 12:29:46 +0000 UTC]

Of course X3

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Weirdly-Insane In reply to MikuParanormal [2017-12-26 22:59:23 +0000 UTC]

YAYYYYYYY

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liamthefox34 [2017-11-13 20:54:08 +0000 UTC]

Can my oc be friend with her ;;?

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MikuParanormal In reply to liamthefox34 [2017-11-13 21:07:46 +0000 UTC]

Sure, Why not ;u;

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liamthefox34 In reply to MikuParanormal [2017-11-14 00:07:33 +0000 UTC]

OMG <3 THANKS 
;; oh!
she is
Athenea/Blutigen Engel [Official References 2016]

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MikuParanormal In reply to liamthefox34 [2017-11-14 15:01:08 +0000 UTC]

oooh, i love her design!! ;u;

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liamthefox34 In reply to MikuParanormal [2017-11-14 17:28:20 +0000 UTC]

qwq thansk

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LamKarla [2017-06-10 07:26:56 +0000 UTC]

Can my oc be friend with her q w q ? lamkarla.deviantart.com/art/Cr…

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MikuParanormal In reply to LamKarla [2017-06-10 20:37:36 +0000 UTC]

sure Thing~ ;u;

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LamKarla In reply to MikuParanormal [2017-06-11 00:01:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much !!

(For the watch,too !)

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BloodyMel666 [2017-05-18 10:45:43 +0000 UTC]

Can you add my oc to friends?
Shadow

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MikuParanormal In reply to BloodyMel666 [2017-05-18 19:54:00 +0000 UTC]

sure Thing~

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ColtonthePhantom [2017-02-15 22:58:19 +0000 UTC]

Wow.

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Yetihole [2017-01-18 02:10:01 +0000 UTC]

Aww, so cute~

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Cl0k1 [2017-01-10 08:56:00 +0000 UTC]

Man! As much I do like this character, I found out that she needs enemies!
So, if you desire a enemy than I'll give you Terrance. I mean, of course he wants to find a bride but-
I don't think he'll like this one!    

So here's the link, I'll see if you approve or not.
cl0k1.deviantart.com/art/CREEP…

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MikuParanormal In reply to Cl0k1 [2017-01-10 18:20:13 +0000 UTC]

Well, maybe Stalker would "love" him...
Although... she actually "loves" every guy who somehow comes to her life XD

I'll add him later X3

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Cl0k1 In reply to MikuParanormal [2017-01-11 00:17:15 +0000 UTC]

XD
Ok, thanks dude!

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beni100 [2016-09-25 18:36:40 +0000 UTC]

My creepypasta Oc Bunny Threads (fav.me/d8pgja7 ) and stalker can be friends ? :3 

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MikuParanormal In reply to beni100 [2016-09-25 18:47:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh, sure, why not? ;u;

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beni100 In reply to MikuParanormal [2016-09-25 19:20:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you QuQ <3 

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MikuParanormal In reply to beni100 [2016-09-25 19:25:12 +0000 UTC]

No Problem!

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cutiecutie12B [2016-09-18 21:30:17 +0000 UTC]

Could you explain WHY she's an angry ghost? If anything, as a ghost, she would try and make friends, due to her isolation during life- though still being able to make some friends. You noted that she knew she had reasons to live for- so wouldn't she try to interact WITH those people in death? If she couldn't, she would most definitely become a depressed ghost. 
Also; what time period is this character from? Her dress says Victorian but her dyed hair suggests 2000's. If you're trying to go with a Goth Lolita vibe, it isn't coming across very well. 

Why does she have the black goop? Is she somehow related to Eyeless Jack, or is it that one condition that makes whoever has it cry black?

I notice a common thread through all your designs of girls- they all have long socks. Try to add more variety between designs of your female cast when it comes to that.

I would comment on how that the shoes are a bad choice, but she's dead so it likely makes little difference. 
I would recommend adding some pink into her outfit- but make it dulled and grayed out to fit the theme of a ghost and creepypasta. She seems too vibrant, as well. 

You say she's 18, but why would she react like that at 18 to being rejected a relationship? Sure the guy may have been a massive jerk, but at 18 she should have some kind of backbone to stuff like that! 

I understand crafting a character like this can be hard, so I came up with a few suggestions

Maybe instead of the guy only rejecting her and her slipping off of the railing of the bridge, he could be a sociopathic narcissist and push her off the ledge for even thinking of speaking to someone as great as him? That would explain why she's so angry as a ghost, and why she would drive her victims' life to the ground before forcing them to "love" her. To make them feel the pain she felt when she was rejected, how death feels, and how it feels when someone you love murders you.

Perhaps her group of friends could have tried to help, but they inevitably failed/ her group of friends weren't really friends and ebbed her on to jump? That would further her feelings of isolation and hatred towards people. 

Hope this helped!

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MikuParanormal In reply to cutiecutie12B [2016-09-19 02:26:30 +0000 UTC]

I really don't try to defend her, but:

-She was a isolated girl BEFORE she died 
(And she wanted to be isolated because she thought nobody understands her)

-ever heard of Lolita goths?
They wear stuff like that, even today
I do damit that it might look a bit extreme for someone to wear in public, but come on...

-that's... Makeup??
Read her story: she was crying after her big love rejected her ...

-Nancy doesn't... She wears kneesocks... Heartbreaker too

I actually really didn't wanted to awnser you like this, but i had to...
Plz don't think that i can't take critisism, but those things i pointed out were obvious...

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cutiecutie12B In reply to MikuParanormal [2016-09-19 02:35:49 +0000 UTC]

1.) I understand that, I was just trying to help give suggestions to further the isolation she felt. You noted she had a small group of friends.
2.) Yes, I have. I actually mentioned that, if you read my suggestions.
3.) Unless she has another story posted, the one in the description never said she was crying- reread it, please.
4.) Oh, my apologies. Are they tights? They don't go all the way up past her thigh if they are, which is something tights do. 

I didn't want to respond to you like this, but please reread criticism and what you wrote before you reply. It will likely make more sense on a fresh viewing.

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Scaren101 [2016-09-18 14:24:00 +0000 UTC]

I love the re draw dear~
I hope to review her
(Heads up: Ghosts can't age up anymore like once she dies at the age of 18, she ain't gonna be turnin 19 anymore- sorry tho)

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MikuParanormal In reply to Scaren101 [2016-09-18 14:39:18 +0000 UTC]

(I was going for the years she is on this planet ;u;
And since she still believes that she's alive she still celebrates her birthday...
Hope that explains it >.<)

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Scaren101 In reply to MikuParanormal [2016-09-18 14:46:54 +0000 UTC]

(Ahhh I see-
Alright I gotcha on that :3)

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KidoKoala [2016-09-17 17:20:47 +0000 UTC]

Can one of my characters be her friend?

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MikuParanormal In reply to KidoKoala [2016-09-17 18:14:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh, sure, why not? ;u;

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KidoKoala In reply to MikuParanormal [2016-09-18 00:29:06 +0000 UTC]

How about Lucky:


Also, Here is Elliot (of which Stalker probably may like even more):

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MikuParanormal In reply to KidoKoala [2016-09-18 02:39:25 +0000 UTC]

Lucky would be great, but i think Elliot would end up as her next victim XD

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KidoKoala In reply to MikuParanormal [2016-09-18 02:42:44 +0000 UTC]

lol I'd like to see that.

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InsanelySteve [2016-09-17 14:25:32 +0000 UTC]

I didn't see this in the bio, but does she always were that black tape on her nips XD

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MikuParanormal In reply to InsanelySteve [2016-09-17 14:27:49 +0000 UTC]

no XD
i just did this because i was too lazy to draw a bra for her lol

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InsanelySteve In reply to MikuParanormal [2016-09-17 14:29:34 +0000 UTC]

XD oh, it would've been the kinkiest CP OC I''ve seen so far XD

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