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"Zatanna, are you paying attention?"Zatanna blinked several times in an attempt to shake off the daydream she'd been lost in, "Sorry, zoned out there for a second or two, what were you saying?"
Wonder Woman sighed, "I know you think you're unbeatable, by Hera we all need that type of attitude, but this is important."
"I know Dianna, I'm sorry, just been a bit distracted. Tell me more about this 'Game'."
Wonder Woman rolled her eyes as Zatanna used the 'air quotes' gesture, "The Game," the Amazon corrected the young heroine.
"The Game," Zatanna nodded, "I've never heard of it and there's nothing written in any of my tomes or scrolls."
"No, there wouldn't be," Wonder Woman, Paragon of Justice frowned, "The Game is older than even the gods themselves, if the legends are true."
"Alright, color me intrigued," Zatanna smiled reassuringly, "Promise, you have my full attention."
"I won't go into the Amazon oral tradition regarding the story, we don't have three days to spare or goat's blood on hand."
Zatanna, an animal activist gasped, "Tell me you're joking! You are, aren't you?"
Wonder Woman shrugged off the question, "As I said, The Game predates written history and serves as a cautionary tale, an unwritten rulebook, and a contract between the forces of good and evil."
Zatanna genuinely looked shocked, "And I've never heard of it?"
"No, but trust that every hero, heroine, and supervillain either has heard of it or unknowingly abides by the rules, with few exceptions. Meaning, most are inclined to play by the rules even if they don't know what the rules are. I suppose it's the way the universe keeps balance, so to speak. If you are born under the sign of magic, occult, or gifted by the gods or mutated and given powers, if you answer the call of the mantle for good or evil, you are part of The Game."
Zatanna had a hard time believing in a universal ruleset, "What about, let's say Batgirl or Batman? They don't have any powers, are they part of The Game?"
Wonder Woman smiled, "Have you ever noticed how quickly they heal compared to what we would consider normal humans? How fast they are, how gifted they are with speed, reflexes, intelligence? When they answered the calling, someone or something sponsored them into The Game and gifted them these abilities. It is an ancient mysterious force perhaps, old as the universe itself."
"Sponsored? Someone? Something?" Even for a magic user this was a bit much to believe, "Seriously Dianna?"
"Do you think the Greek, Roman, or Christian gods are the only ones who sponsored champions?" Wonder Woman laughed, "Even Zeus is sponsored by a higher power, that's how it works and has worked since time began."
Zatanna shook her head, "Myth? Legend? Folk tales, right?"
Dianna Prince looked Zatanna up and down while frowning, "I'm a myth and you cast magical spells by speaking backwards."
Zatanna couldn't argue those points, "What about aliens? Superman, Power Girl, Supergirl?"
"The same rules apply, they are aware of The Game. It is universal."
Zatanna shrugged, "Fine, what about a murderer, a child molester, a bank robber?"
"Not usually, the act of evil itself or even good doesn't mean the person involved in the act of good or evil answered the calling," Wonder Woman looked for some understanding in Zatanna's eyes.
"How do I know who's called and who isn't," Zatanna asked.
"The recurring enemy, one obsessed with you, a nemesis, an organization devoted to your downfall? They've been specifically called against you. The burglar, the drug dealer, the corrupt politician? Likely not, though a few exceptions exist."
"Alright," Zatanna sighed, "The Game exists, we play by rules that aren't written down and heroes and villains abide by these rules even if they don't know they do, right? So, what are the rules?"
"We don't kill each other," Wonder Woman said flatly, "Rule number one. That doesn't mean we can't die, that doesn't mean someone can't break the rules, it certainly doesn't mean normal mortals are safe and won't be killed by either side."
Zatanna scoffed, "Has anyone told Joker this?"
"Why do you think he hasn't managed to kill Batman, Batgirl, or Robin? Why do you think Batman can't kill him? He may think he serves Chaos, he does not." Dianna placed her hands on her hips.
Zatanna thought long and hard, looking for a logical answer, "Every scheme foiled, every murder attempt thwarted, every trap escaped?"
Wonder Woman replied, "Yes, and somehow they can't keep Joker in Arkham, right?"
Zatanna nodded, "They move around like pawns on a chess board, or like puppets dancing on strings."
Dianna softly said, "We all do."
"We do get killed," Zatanna reminded the ancient heroine of legend.
"When that happens what becomes of the killer, Zatanna?"
Zatanna knew the answer, destruction. Heroes would rally and toss out their rules regarding killing, at least in most cases.
"So what then, what is the reward for villainy? It sounds like an empty pursuit, doesn't it?" Zatanna asked, confused.
"What was Hercules reward for villainy?" Dianna asked with a blank expression.
"He was a hero!" Zatanna exclaimed.
"Was he? He and his men bound, raped, and enslaved the Amazons for years. History and mythology may call that a hero, but I do not."
Zatanna felt horrible, she'd forgotten that particular "conquest" as it was later called in lore.
"They want power over all life, ours especially, and if they aren't allowed to kill us they take... other things when they win," Wonder Woman glanced down at the Lasso of Truth.
Zatanna wasn't exactly following along, "For instance?"
"Your dignity, your pride, your virtue. It's a drug and it fuels their side, even their women. They crave your defeat, your submission, it gives them power," Wonder Woman thought of several times she'd been defeated and humiliated by the villainess Cheetah, "Though, when all hope is lost and the situation is impossible, and they've done their worst to you it is possible to..."
Dianna stopped, even unsure herself how to explain it.
"What? Possible to what," Zatanna hung on every word, "Escape, win? Triumph!"
Dianna, Amazon goddess smiled softly at the young, beautiful, and naive spellslinger, "No Zatanna, defeat is defeat and it is inevitable. It is possible to experience pleasure, a gift of The Game."
Zatanna was floored and completely stunned, "You aren't saying..."
Wonder Woman sighed, "That I've enjoyed defeat, humiliation, slavery? No, don't be ridiculous. However, our bodies are special. They will adapt and compensate. The pleasure is a defense mechanism, even against the worst beating or most violent assault."
Zatanna, still stunned, stood silently for several moments, "...adapt to what?"
Dianna was stoic in her answer, "Minotaur, cyclops, harpy, centaur, satyr, giants, dragons...". Wonder Woman was about to add the villain Cheetah to the list but decided against mentioning more recent defeats, "...Cerberus."
Zatanna blinked, choked on a breath of air she'd inhaled sharply, then coughed, "Cerberus. The dog?"
"Three headed guardian of the Underworld," Dianna corrected the young heroine.
"That... Doesn't make it better," Zatanna mumbled.
"Stop being a child!" Wonder Woman's voice rose in commanding fashion, "You've never tasted defeat, obviously, but you will and when you do, trust that your body will compensate and adapt. It will be a small respite from the ordeal but it makes it survivable."
Zatanna stood close to a state of shock. She believed all Wonder Woman said but there was little comfort in the Amazon's counsel.
"Be careful though, when it happens your body will attempt to betray you, your thoughts will become clouded," Wonder Woman put a hand on Zatanna's shoulder, "Don't fall into the trap of seeking it out or becoming addicted."
"Addicted?" Zatanna asked, completely puzzled by the thought.
"Others have, like Batwoman," Dianna nodded, "It is a difficult drug to defeat once it has control."
"... You, Dianna?"
The Amazon looked Zatanna in the eyes, "I was much younger then and had never before tasted defeat, much like yourself now."
Zatanna was angry and visibly shaking, "What about male heroes? This isn't fair! What price do they pay? Are they abused in the same way?"
Wonder Woman looked towards the upset heroine and then looked to the ground, "You don't truly believe Bane broke Batman's spine by merely bending him over his knee, do you?"
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Comments: 46
Curia-DD [2018-03-02 19:08:02 +0000 UTC]
Your writing is spectacular, thank you for sharing this!! I found it fascinating to read
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RenderPretender In reply to Curia-DD [2018-03-02 21:53:28 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. If I ever get around to releasing the full story you'll be sure to hear about it.
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MirrorKhaos [2018-02-12 18:37:26 +0000 UTC]
Good fine and thanks for sharing this little story.
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Cracoviia [2018-01-23 22:26:09 +0000 UTC]
Interesting concept, quite a philosophical look at the idea/genre of superheroes. A bit like a dramatisation of something written by Joseph Campbell or similar literary theorists. On why characters don't die, or do die in certain circumstances, and how it might look to the characters actually living in that reality. I don't have much useful to say, but very different and a good read
...and the ending took me a moment. That's terrible...
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RenderPretender In reply to Cracoviia [2018-01-24 00:31:23 +0000 UTC]
LOL, the ending. I just want to know who read the whole thing and who didn't. Guess you did.
Thank you. The approach to this, since this was written a long time ago, was to simply explain why things are the way they are in fanfics and in comics. I mean, it doesn't really make sense. The X-Men are fighting gods 99% of the time, for instance. Team or not, a god with a lower case g or a God with an upper case G are gods for a reason, but somehow they rarely kill the heroes. A bunch of normal people? Sure, by the millions. But a guy who can shoot laser beams through his eyes? What can't he be killed? Well, he's "protected" by some higher power or ruleset of course.
This idea I've had for years eventually became... can you guess? The Therapist. She's the OC version of this entire theory, but more science and less mystical. Eventually, when I have more time and more working arms she'll get her theories out there to the OC community.
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bob-warden [2018-01-22 18:54:04 +0000 UTC]
Well written story, although it does cause some mixed feelings. First of all, Hercules' version in Marvel is a lot more heroic compared to DC, and a lot nicer to the ladies. The reason is simple, Hercules is pretty much used as an antagonist for Wonder Woman because of all the feminist vibes that Wonder Woman's comics usually have. As for Hercules' Labour about getting Hippolyta's Girdle there are different versions. The one that I know is that Hippolyta was going to give the Girdle on her own but Hera interfered and caused the Amazons to attack, forcing Hercules to shoot Hyppolyta with his bow and take the Girdle. Also, you sort of mixed fanfics with what usually happens in the actual comics, and the rules are not really the same. Characters do get shot in comics, the Joker has done this with Robin, and in some cases like Supergirl they might even get erased from existence. Until they decide to bring them back, eventually. Also the reasons why Batman doesn't finish off the Joker are quite ridiculous especially considering everything he has done, like what he did to Batgirl. No need to say anything else about that comic book issue. Some heroes, like Captain America or even Spiderman have actually finished off villains when they went too far. They got better as well, but still. Things are a little different in fanfics and images, and the sensual content between heroes and villains is probably the biggest difference between them. Sure, there is Batman and Catwoman, and Spiderman with Black Cat, but Catwoman and Black Cat don't always count as villains, depending on the storyline.
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RenderPretender In reply to bob-warden [2018-01-22 19:21:55 +0000 UTC]
First consider that I wrote this years before Joker killed Robin (I think), who was later resurrected anyway after his murder.
Secondly, I did mention there were exceptions and they can kill each other. It is, in comic book land, impossible to logically explain how these heroes and heroines survive anything and live more than a comic issues. Ridiculous even, given how powerful the enemies are that these heroes face. My explanation, which is obviously self serving and not canon, at least uses comic book logic to describe higher power forces at play in a game that no one can really ever win. Also, there had to be a reason that every villain and villainess is erotic peril fanfic is basically a rapist to one degree or another and why the heroines of these attacks seem to accept it (in fanfics) as part of the job. Is it cynical? Sure, but makes more sense than anything I think you'll find in a comic.
Also, this is a small flashback scene in a much naughtier story and if I covered the topic of resurrection like I planned on this conversation it made the scene too long and complicated. So I cut that bit out. There was also more in depth conversation about The Game itself with WW explaining things but again, it made the chapter too large.
As for Hercules, I didn't go with Marvel's or DC's version. I went with actual legend and lore. It was important to me to show that this thing happened to the Amazon's as part of The Game. Also, all the stories I wrote using The Game theme were set in DC univere, not Marvel. If I were writing in the Marvel universe I guess I'd have to find another reason all the men and women want to dominate, humiliate, and have sex with every heroine they capture and how none of those heroines ever end up murdered (mostly).
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bob-warden In reply to RenderPretender [2018-01-23 22:28:02 +0000 UTC]
Well, as I mentioned some myths do have different versions. They are thousands of years old after all, and over all this time some things were lost and some things were added, by the Romans for example. The interesting thing with fanfics and fan arts is that sometimes the villains might actually be less evil in those stories compared to the actual comics. There could be a story with Ivy and Batgirl for example, where Ivy captures and seduces Batgirl but doesn't really hurt her or humiliate her. Then again, I think that Ivy has actually turned good in recent comics.
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RenderPretender In reply to bob-warden [2018-01-24 00:21:53 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, unfortunately all the great bad girls have turned good I think.
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bob-warden In reply to RenderPretender [2018-01-24 00:47:01 +0000 UTC]
That's not necessarily a bad thing. Just because Ivy has turned good, doesn't mean that she still can't be naughty or seductive. Not to mention that Ivy with Harley, who also turned good, has pretty much become canon I think, which is great! I guess adding Batgirl to the mix might be asking too much, but that's what fanfics and fan arts are for.
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tramusser [2018-01-22 10:51:47 +0000 UTC]
Well, that explains a lot
Very well written, as usual, and it's a more than satisfactory theory. I almost died laughing with the Batman and Bane part
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RenderPretender In reply to tramusser [2018-01-22 12:08:36 +0000 UTC]
LOL, yeah the ending is supposed to either make you laugh or make you cringe.
Glad you like it.
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Rob66 [2018-01-20 15:30:28 +0000 UTC]
I'm going to wait for the whole story before I read this excerpt. I like surprises. Very much looking forward to proofing and posting it!
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RenderPretender In reply to Rob66 [2018-01-20 19:21:16 +0000 UTC]
Honestly the short story here is a flashback in the larger story and it is a conversation, doesn't ruin or spoil anything.
But do as you will!
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Doozer73 [2018-01-20 10:46:24 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting concept. Like The Game itself, I feel that the idea of heroines reluctantly experiencing pleasure from their peril has been an unspoken, undocumented truth suspected by all. I know it has for me. I enjoy it with an extra twist; that the betrayal you mentioned is an extra level of humiliation and defeat. Using Wonder Woman as an example, she hates defeat, especially at the hands of Cheetah. She is then betrayed when own her body takes pleasure in it. Now, not only is she in conflict with Cheetah, her mind is in conflict with her body, and that’s when things get really interesting.
I digress. This was a fun read. I kept waiting for some kind of tie in to the current SJW (not to be confused with the WSJ) drama. Around the point you referenced Bane breaking Batman’s spine I realized it was a legit fan fic.
I look forward to reading the uncensored version on Rob’s blog. And pictures, too? Me no like words. Me like pretty pictures.
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RenderPretender In reply to Doozer73 [2018-01-20 14:36:13 +0000 UTC]
I think someone is trying to take 's place in next year's award ceremony for long, thoughtful comments!
Love it!
"I enjoy it with an extra twist; that the betrayal you mentioned is an extra level of humiliation and defeat. Using Wonder Woman as an example, she hates defeat, especially at the hands of Cheetah. She is then betrayed when own her body takes pleasure in it. Now, not only is she in conflict with Cheetah, her mind is in conflict with her body, and that’s when things get really interesting." - Doozer
Exactly! I agree with you 100% about everything you've written but especially the bit I just copied / pasted. I couldn't have the conversation (since this is a flashback) go on forever but Wonder Woman continuously thinking of Cheetah while speaking with Zatanna is a hint of exactly what you've written. Trust that Zatanna experiences exactly what you mention here, 100%, while going through her ordeal.
As for the current SJW climate. This was a story I wrote (and never finished) almost 10 years ago so yeah, legit.
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SlaveLynnGreen [2018-01-20 09:04:39 +0000 UTC]
The Joker did kill Robin.
He just got better. (If you call a post-Lazarus pit turn into a psychopathic killer "better.")
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RenderPretender In reply to SlaveLynnGreen [2018-01-20 14:30:18 +0000 UTC]
I don't remember if Joker killed Robin before or after I original wrote this but I actually (believe it or not) did have WW and Z talking about resurrection and how it was further proof that killing was not cool and The Game was a universal force, capable of bringing people back.
But it honestly made the flashback (because in the full story that's what this is) way too long, bulky, and philosophical.
Resurrection is just a silly plot device anyway, unless you're of the Christian faith of course.
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SlaveLynnGreen In reply to RenderPretender [2018-01-20 22:08:20 +0000 UTC]
At DC it is so silly they made it a major plot point for one of their biggest events. Then there is Marvel's Jean Grey, they call her Phoenix, and we are supposed to be shocked when she does what Phoenixes (Phoenixii?) are known for.
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paws4thot In reply to SlaveLynnGreen [2018-01-22 16:26:37 +0000 UTC]
Catches fire and burns to death?
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RenderPretender In reply to thomvinson [2018-01-20 05:30:39 +0000 UTC]
You actually read it? I figured people would just gloss through it since you know... no pics.
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thomvinson In reply to RenderPretender [2018-01-20 05:31:36 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I had to back track from the latex bondage scene.
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RenderPretender In reply to thomvinson [2018-01-20 05:31:57 +0000 UTC]
LOL, well at least you're honest.
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berseh In reply to RenderPretender [2018-01-21 11:58:13 +0000 UTC]
You want honesty? I like your more recent writings better. The rhythm , pun, distantciation and the double entendre are missing from your usual fun and provocative schemes. I will nuance my critique in the fact your story is about (yawn) superheroines, a topic that you know doesn't turn me on -except for your batwoman comic series! I'm sure writing it today you'd make it more dynamic.
I hope I won't be punished for not lauding you whatever you do
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RenderPretender In reply to berseh [2018-01-21 13:31:27 +0000 UTC]
It's just a conversation scene and a flashback. It's not meant to rock your world so no, you won't be punished.
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KarenGaianni [2018-01-20 05:09:26 +0000 UTC]
And I know who is the Sponsor of all of that!!! It is obvious after all!!!
EVERYONE know about this after all!!!
Nice fiction! Or... is a fiction?
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RenderPretender In reply to KarenGaianni [2018-01-20 05:31:19 +0000 UTC]
Hey, can you tell me who the sponsor is? Ummmm... someone told me but I forgot the name.
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RenderPretender In reply to JakeBondage [2018-01-20 05:31:33 +0000 UTC]
I feel like there were more words coming...
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JakeBondage In reply to RenderPretender [2018-01-20 08:05:44 +0000 UTC]
well, I've never thought of the genre in that way, so it was thought-provoking, too - and, if pursued, you could use the concept to create storylines
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RenderPretender In reply to JakeBondage [2018-01-20 14:15:42 +0000 UTC]
To be honest, that was the goal years ago when I started writing erotic fanfiction set in the DC universe. A common theme to explain why all the heroines were continuously in peril / erotic danger, but no one was ever getting killed.
I just really never finished any of those stories, LOL. That's why we need people like you around, with actual attention spans, who can finish what they start.
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JakeBondage In reply to RenderPretender [2018-01-20 20:18:51 +0000 UTC]
I'll let you know when I manage that...
this series is enormous and I sometimes feel like I'll never get through it all
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RenderPretender In reply to Some-Random-Doge [2018-01-20 01:58:15 +0000 UTC]
On the upside I did make a lot of money with your cryptocoins.
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Lespion1944 [2018-01-19 23:00:44 +0000 UTC]
Interesting. Are you saying that what you wrote isn't fit for DA, but my stories are? They must be really extreme.
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RenderPretender In reply to Lespion1944 [2018-01-19 23:10:18 +0000 UTC]
I'm saying I'm being 'watched' and wouldn't want to get punished for posting a stupid story that takes place in a make believe universe with make believe people.
Extreme? No, not by your standards at all.
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ForestWolfDragon [2018-01-19 21:38:33 +0000 UTC]
Quite an interesting take on how things work between good and evil in the marvel/DC universes.
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RenderPretender In reply to ForestWolfDragon [2018-01-19 22:15:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for taking a look. Figured it made more sense than any other explanation for the lack of death in these universes.
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maltorramus [2018-01-19 20:40:37 +0000 UTC]
i wish Zatanna was a more used Character in the WC shows or the Movies
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