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Published: 2019-02-04 19:13:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 4291; Favourites: 90; Downloads: 9
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I have a few concepts for characters from Mayu's past, and one of them is her old man of course, Ken.Here is the rough backstory I wrote for him alongside Mayu's:
As a young man he learned the craft of the merchants and accompanied a traveling business alongside many adventurers. Ken also served in the army for a time but he later used his wealth to avoid further conscription. His wife unfortunately passed away due to childbirth complications, but Ken promised her that he would keep their only child safe and happy. He and his new daughter Mayu traveled around the countryside but, as age started to catch up with him, he eventually settled down with a permanent shop and continued to raise his daughter in a peaceful town.
Ken wanted to teach Mayu the importance of coin and organization, as well as using her words for persuasion- skills that he hoped would make her ready to take over the business one day. Being a merchant wasn’t glorious, nor was it as honorable like being one of the warrior nobility, but it certainly kept food on the table for Ken and his family.
For Mayu’s 17th birthday, he surprised her with a paid vacation to the imperial capital after saving enough money. This included a caravan for a nice and comfortable journey. Ken would leave the shop in the hands of his other employees but unfortunately he and Mayu would never come back.
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Comments: 14
Avitrathephoenix [2019-02-07 21:37:22 +0000 UTC]
The drawing says so much, you barely needed to put in the sidebar! You can just tell he's a vetran merchant, likely quite well established, which it turns out he is, but that used to to travel more, which he did. Maybe it's just me, but you captured the idea of the character perfectly! ^v^
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Ric-M In reply to Avitrathephoenix [2019-02-11 18:57:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad his character read well ^^
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Avitrathephoenix In reply to Ric-M [2019-02-14 13:46:51 +0000 UTC]
(Giggles) you're welcome! You did amazing work! ~v^
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DeadKnight1 [2019-02-05 19:42:06 +0000 UTC]
Perhaps at some point, their souls are reunited? Like Mayu might be seeing the regular afterlife of mortals, and she see's Ken. Or maybe his ghost is searching for her, as he has unfinished business; making his daughter happy. Just spitballing, but I like to think my spitballing is useful.
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Ric-M In reply to DeadKnight1 [2019-02-05 22:12:39 +0000 UTC]
I certainly appreciate it, and you've brought up some interesting ideas so far.
In this case, both routes seem legit. I think they can even be combined- Ken's ghost wandering and then perhaps eventually his and Mayu's soul can be reunited in the mortal afterlife. A bittersweet end since they'd both still be dead but at least together again in the afterlife.
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spudman98 [2019-02-04 21:52:04 +0000 UTC]
So we know what happened to Mayu, but what about her dad, is he dead, did he become a monster? I'M SCARED OF WHAT HE'S BECOME AND I JUST MET HIM
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Ric-M In reply to spudman98 [2019-02-05 00:50:46 +0000 UTC]
No the only one Frostnip resurrected was Mayu. And I don't really have intentions at the moment for him to be back as an undead.
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Mr-Ravager [2019-02-04 21:23:56 +0000 UTC]
Look's great! This character has a interesting story! ^^
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Ric-M In reply to Mr-Ravager [2019-02-05 00:51:45 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! It's a bit rough but hopefully I can flesh out their relationship in time ^^
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Mr-Ravager In reply to Ric-M [2019-02-05 14:55:10 +0000 UTC]
yeah! and what will you do with these characters a comic or a novel, a book? I would like to read it ^^
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Ric-M In reply to Mr-Ravager [2019-02-05 14:59:26 +0000 UTC]
Most likely a webcomic format, the way I originally started out ^^
If anything else, illustrations too.
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Mr-Ravager In reply to Ric-M [2019-02-05 15:36:31 +0000 UTC]
Well done, you let me know when you post it in the chapter 1#, like I said, I would like to read it! ^^ and it sure will be great
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Ric-M In reply to Mr-Ravager [2019-02-05 15:49:52 +0000 UTC]
Will do, thank you again my friend ^^
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