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Published: 2010-07-09 04:26:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 278; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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     My name is Stanly Warfield. I am a typical, ordinary high school teenager, with one exception: I'm telepathic. Now you're probably thinking I'm some kind of mind reader, but I'm not. All being telepathic means is that you can manipulate things with your mind. There are many different kinds of telepathy, like Pyrokinesis, but mine is Magnokinesis aka the ability to control metal through magnetic fields. I have found that despite as awesome as it sounds, I have had a hard time controlling it. That was, until I met a man named "The Professor." Ever since then, I have been attending a new school for people who are just like me, and not only have I been able to fit in but I've also slowly been able to tame my talent. And I might of thought Mr. C's Underwater Survival Class hard, that was nothing compared to what I was about to face...
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AlexWearsHats [2010-08-27 02:42:06 +0000 UTC]

Interesting prologue! The first sentence didn't grab my attention in any outstanding way, but it did sufficiently introduce the character and his unique ability. I would love to see his ability introduced through example rather than a narrative, but this worked just fine.

Well done!

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SamousWebmaster In reply to AlexWearsHats [2010-08-27 03:32:07 +0000 UTC]

(look in the description, I have more uploaded )

Yeah, I've been thinking about rearranging parts of this, but lately I've been to distracted. Thank you for your assistance though.

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AlexWearsHats In reply to SamousWebmaster [2010-08-27 04:04:18 +0000 UTC]

I'll be sure to read through them

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SamousWebmaster In reply to AlexWearsHats [2010-08-27 04:04:36 +0000 UTC]

cool ^^ ty

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xktdbbzx [2010-08-07 21:36:23 +0000 UTC]

Oooh I came across this by chance, liked it a lot I love the way you write!! I don't even know what it is!

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SamousWebmaster In reply to xktdbbzx [2010-08-07 22:22:24 +0000 UTC]

xD did you read it? This is the prologue to my book, this describes the setting of the book in a sense, lol. Try reading my next few chapters, they are in the description. And thank you for the compliment.

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