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ScriptWeaver — Broken Circles
Published: 2011-12-08 23:03:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 90; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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Description Ask if I can draw a perfect circle,
The answer's yes and no.

On the paper forms a misshapen ring,
You discredit it's perfection.

"It's hardly even round," you say
"What a poor decrepit halo!"

I ask in return,
can you draw a perfect circle?

Soon flawless curves beseech me,
the line is round and true.

"Indeed your circle has no faults," says I
"But perfection it is not."

"True perfection's rotten, misshapen, and obscure.
Perfection is my shape, of this I am quite sure."
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Comments: 11

rioza [2011-12-10 00:29:01 +0000 UTC]

I love circles.
Wonderful poem.~

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ScriptWeaver In reply to rioza [2011-12-10 00:31:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'm glad you like it. Love circles huh? I'll have to remember that.

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rioza In reply to ScriptWeaver [2011-12-10 00:45:47 +0000 UTC]

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J-RavenEye [2011-12-09 18:00:34 +0000 UTC]

Describes circles and what perfection truly is, this is great!
My own poetry could be compared to a Vogon's.

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J-RavenEye In reply to J-RavenEye [2011-12-10 13:01:36 +0000 UTC]

Its a Hitchhikers Guide reference, listening to Vogon poetry is like torture

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ScriptWeaver In reply to J-RavenEye [2011-12-09 22:50:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks and, who?

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326andwataru [2011-12-09 05:40:28 +0000 UTC]

Amazing, it hits me right in the spot i needed it.
Thank you!

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ScriptWeaver In reply to 326andwataru [2011-12-09 22:49:34 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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326andwataru In reply to ScriptWeaver [2011-12-10 03:07:59 +0000 UTC]

Yup, I sure did! I will be eagerly waiting for new works from you!

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ScriptWeaver In reply to 326andwataru [2011-12-10 03:09:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. That's the best complement I could hope for.

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326andwataru In reply to ScriptWeaver [2011-12-10 18:10:02 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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