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Published: 2012-07-11 23:51:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 207; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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It is the a habit of the grass, over which I spend my waking hours, to cling all it can reach. Several billion watery prisms chill the breath, and they are welcome. Sweet holds mean more than told when nuzzled by the dew. Still, never does the world feel more open than when hilltops are licked by the sun's foretelling glow. Here starts a new day.Pines quiver in this hour, awaiting the kiss of light. They are not like the small children who squeal their excitement; they are elders, whispering forgotten words with eyes bright and wide. They wear the wind and it suits them well.
The sky is clear, crisp. Shadowed clouds herd together and flee to the farthest side of the horizon. They seek to escape the sun and this time run too late. Higher still starlights fade out. They will yield the day to our neighbor and their sister, but not yet. They smile and wave, then close their eyes to sleep.
Night air hangs on the edge of the day. Though brighter than true night the air keeps the birds still and mute. The flowers are all closed, lost, drowsy. Even here they are beautiful. It is a time of violets, and blues.
Shadows frenzy. It is their last hurrah before they hide behind other things. Never are they more alive. An anti-flame, just as violent but cold and dark. Princely wraiths, silent and noble.
Here I sit, not waiting. Now is a beautiful time. Now is Pre-Dawn. It calls my soul and beckons me to greater things.
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Comments: 19
XxSilentseerxX [2012-08-11 09:55:49 +0000 UTC]
The imagery is beautiful and you really use words that invoke the senses so the reader really connects with your writing Awesome job!
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rioza [2012-07-17 01:02:14 +0000 UTC]
AMAZING! You describe things so wonderfully.~ It's like I'm seeing it with my own eyes. :3
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ScriptWeaver In reply to rioza [2012-07-17 02:50:08 +0000 UTC]
Perfect. X3 I really hope I can do so well in every deviation then. :3 That's the highest praise I can get.
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rioza In reply to ScriptWeaver [2012-07-17 03:55:29 +0000 UTC]
You will, no doubt about it.
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ScriptWeaver In reply to rioza [2012-07-17 03:56:51 +0000 UTC]
>///< Thanks love. That means SO much.
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Dream-Nova [2012-07-14 21:21:42 +0000 UTC]
Loved it! Your descriptions are always very crisp and beautiful. Lovely, as always~
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ScriptWeaver In reply to Dream-Nova [2012-07-14 21:25:53 +0000 UTC]
X3 Thanks. Not a great piece but it close enough. Just how I feel on a cool morning. :3
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Dream-Nova In reply to ScriptWeaver [2012-07-14 21:36:14 +0000 UTC]
My pleasure~ And wow! It sounds so beautiful there!
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ScriptWeaver In reply to Dream-Nova [2012-07-14 21:42:11 +0000 UTC]
It can be. :3 I just wish I was even farther from the city than I am. You wouldn't believe how crisp and refreshing the air is over here.
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Dream-Nova In reply to ScriptWeaver [2012-07-14 21:50:06 +0000 UTC]
I bet it's definitely better than the humid air over here!
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ScriptWeaver In reply to Dream-Nova [2012-07-14 21:53:18 +0000 UTC]
XD I don't mean to brag but... yep! XD
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Dream-Nova In reply to ScriptWeaver [2012-07-14 22:04:29 +0000 UTC]
Haha lucky~ You deserve to brag aboput something so nice~
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ScriptWeaver In reply to Dream-Nova [2012-07-14 22:07:21 +0000 UTC]
X3 If you say so. X3 You should really visit the area some time.
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Dream-Nova In reply to ScriptWeaver [2012-07-14 22:23:33 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha that would be awesome! We could totally hang out
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