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Published: 2011-08-12 21:56:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 503; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 4
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Description Dark-wind, Thunder, Darkness Longer
witches cackle in the night

Dark-wind, Thunder, Evil Hunger
potions cast green glowing light

Dark-wind, Thunder, Satanic Wonder
wings of black with silent flight

Dark-wind, Thunder, Bedtime Slumber
nightmare and it's fearful might

Dark-wind, Thunder, Demon's Plunder
souls to steal with sudden fright

Dark-wind, Thunder, Hellish Mender
beauty turns to stone on sight

Dark-wind, Thunder, Shadow's Master
comes with evil's poison bite

Dark-wind, Thunder, Drawing Nearer
to run left or to flee right?

Dark-wind, Thunder, Serpent's Sender
no escape from certain death...
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Comments: 24

robostorm [2012-08-08 14:25:14 +0000 UTC]

I prefer this one, well done. I think that the length works out better for this one (though it is hypocritical for me to talk about poems being too long !) This one is Totally Awesome!! thx so much for sending me to this page!

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ScriptWeaver In reply to robostorm [2012-08-09 01:27:09 +0000 UTC]

No problem. Thank you for reading.

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blooperman12 [2012-01-30 03:47:08 +0000 UTC]

Very good for a first dark piece. Nice flow and a nice hidden message; keeps the reader on their toes. Keep it up!

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ScriptWeaver In reply to blooperman12 [2012-01-30 03:49:05 +0000 UTC]

XD Thank you. These are the only two so far in this fashion but I might make more.

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blooperman12 In reply to ScriptWeaver [2012-01-30 03:50:05 +0000 UTC]

Awesome.

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ScriptWeaver In reply to blooperman12 [2012-01-30 03:50:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Kay-March [2012-01-23 22:19:35 +0000 UTC]

brrr,
Will I fear all this conjuration
put myself under the bed, wrapping the sheets, until they're stranded around me, while I think about your laugh?
or,
Will I laugh too, as the moon in heaven rambles another arch
... yes
I will laugh till I drop aside waiting for the first beam of sunlight

Hope that you're still laughing while you read this comment... I like your piece very much

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ScriptWeaver In reply to Kay-March [2012-01-24 03:10:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. This is by far the most unique comment I've ever received thank you. Stay happy my friend.

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Kay-March In reply to ScriptWeaver [2012-01-24 14:25:51 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome...sometimes I can't resist so I respond comments with a little bit of poetry

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ScriptWeaver In reply to Kay-March [2012-01-24 22:44:22 +0000 UTC]

I like it.

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Kay-March In reply to ScriptWeaver [2012-01-25 16:30:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm very glad that you do

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ScriptWeaver In reply to Kay-March [2012-01-25 20:23:23 +0000 UTC]

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Kay-March [2012-01-23 22:16:42 +0000 UTC]

brrr,
Will I fear all this conjuration
put myself under the bed, wrapping the sheets, until they're stranded around me, while I think about your laugh?
or,
Will I laugh too, as the moon in heaven rambles another arch
... yes
I will laugh till I drop aside waiting for the first beam of sunlight

Hope you still laughing and enjoying my comment, I like your piece very much

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Doodelay [2011-11-15 23:02:45 +0000 UTC]

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW
Most unique poem I have ever read.

I can learn a thing or two from this.
Its excellent and deserves LOAAADS more favs.
I'll check out ure others now

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ScriptWeaver In reply to Doodelay [2011-11-15 23:09:12 +0000 UTC]

And a SUPER thank you to you too! I'm so glad you liked it. You flatter me.

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SkylaStar [2011-08-15 05:25:05 +0000 UTC]

Oooooh........ I loved this. It's pretty awesome.

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ScriptWeaver In reply to SkylaStar [2011-08-15 19:05:46 +0000 UTC]

Gee thanks! I'm glad you like it.

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SkylaStar In reply to ScriptWeaver [2011-08-15 23:10:29 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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XxSilentseerxX [2011-08-14 19:43:50 +0000 UTC]

I really love the repition and just genreally the poem! It's very awesome and really captures the esscence of dark poetry!! Fantastic job!!!!

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ScriptWeaver In reply to XxSilentseerxX [2011-08-15 03:45:10 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Thanks! This was my first drak piece of literature so I was afraid it wouldn't turn out right. I'm really gald that you like it.

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XxSilentseerxX In reply to ScriptWeaver [2011-08-15 03:55:06 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!!

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rioza [2011-08-12 23:01:41 +0000 UTC]

I love it! It's so beautifully dark. It feels like it's weaving some sort of spell.....
Fantastic!

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ScriptWeaver In reply to rioza [2011-08-12 23:04:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I was trying to make it almost lyrical or storylike. I wanted the words to say something more through rhyme and rythem. I'm very glad you like it!

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rioza In reply to ScriptWeaver [2011-08-12 23:14:37 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome. You accomplished what you set out for!
I'm glad I like it too.

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